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Original of the Species
“Tina you are not invading me, you have no idea how happy I am to see you here” Bette’s voice and eyes were so sincere and tender that Tina thought she wouldn’t be able to restrain herself for much longer if the brunette kept on behaving like that.
“I also brought organic drinks, wine… just in case” The blonde blushed a bit. “A couple of blankets and a portable stereo to take with us down to the sand if you don’t mind” She added still blushing.
“That would be lovely” Bette’s smile seemed permanently plastered on her face. How perfect and sweet was this woman? Planning a simple and yet thoughtful date, after such a stressful weekend for both of them. Bette couldn’t have thought of anything better than to have a healthy and tasty evening snack just relaxing on the beach as they were just on time to see the sunset.
Outside the house there was a rather big wooden deck with lounge chairs and a nice little table.
Although that was tempting they decided it was warm enough to go to the sand and lay there at least for a while.
Tina was outside picking a spot half way between the house and the water, and the brunette was inside opening the very fancy bottle of red wine Tina had brought, clearly the blonde knew her wines.
Bette joined the blonde sitting down next to her but still at a safe distance. Bette knew she had to keep herself from doing everything she thought of doing to that beautiful woman, if they indeed wanted to become something more than just a fling. Tina told the specialties to the chef and they were soon enjoying the food, the wine, the sunset and soft jazzy music playing softly on the stereo.
They were comfortably sitting down staring at the sunset and talking about everything and nothing at the same time; just relaxing, asking each other questions and trying to learn as much as they could from the other.
“So did you drive your parents to the airport?” Bette asked noticing that Tina’s expression got serious at the mention of the parents. Way to go Porter! Just spoil the mood, why don’t you The brunette immediately regretted bringing that subject up.
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ttscorpio29 says
Omg, you can’t leave off there !!!! This is getting good please post soon
AmandaMG says
love this… so glad tina made that trip back… did i say i loved this… pps
Vixien00 says
Love it! I’m so into this story!!!!11 ;) PPS
mariam says
yes, this is going very well, like it should. PPVS
Dainty says
Awwwwww, new love is so exciting. So happy Tina went back to be with her. They are going slowly and learning things about each other. Hope Tina can stay the whole time if Bette wants her to. Loved the update and hope in the next chapter they will continue their dance, etc. Thanks for posting. PPVS
didi1956 says
Amazing as always.Thank you.
MSFS says
I’m feeling the next chapter will be even more exciting.
ut says
That was wonderful and glad Tina come to see Bette, now let see more of them, thanks!
pekegal says
I think my mum and Tina’s mum are related. LOL! Well done again…you may have had a harder time writing this one…but I thought it flowed well from the 2 girlfriends moment (T & K), the parents + Tina moment, and then the 1st date. Oh, so sweet!!!!
lodeerca says
This story unravels so smoothly! It’s like watching a movie. I like the choises you make of the moments you give us dialogues.
ayesha23 says
this is shaping up to be an excellent first ‘real’ date. hmmm how will this one end?
pattifloatn says
So romantic, Tina is really make this first non-date special.
chelseagal says
Well if you had problem writing this , well it really did not show. You did a greta job of framing the scene and I really just love this version of Bette and Tina. Thank you and PPVS
wkm says
Really enjoyed this chapter but come on leaving us hanging like that…
cvu says
Ok this habit of yours must put to a stop before it became a regular habit? but may i say, aww, here they’re come, and it’s going to be a long night ahead of them.
Nanc says
Lovely – more date please!
akalittlered says
So Wonderful and Amazing!!!! What a Great frist date!!! Thank you PPVS
celchic says
this keeps on getting better. next post soon please
monrazz says
Thanks for the great update! The progression here seems just right for these 2. PPS
favcouple says
Oh just excellent aboslutely freakin excellent. Thank you.
OliviaKelly says
Wow that was a very sexy last paragraph and statement. It’s gettin really juicy! PPS!
OneStorm1 says
Tina is just too cute. PPS
lilla= says
finally I caught up with your story, and all I can say: continue please!!!!!!
Sharod says
Getting to know you, getting to know all about you. Go Tina, make Bette, your girl. Dancing in the moon light, can’t get much better than that.