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Phobia (Chapter 6)
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She pushed the matter. “Seriously, what have you been drinking?”
“Well, I had some shots,” I stared up at the stars thinking. “two Blue Skyy martinis, and a beer.”
Under the circumstances, she wasn’t disappointed; I knew I would be when I woke up the next morning. “Is that all?”
“Yep.” I fought to remain serious. “But I’m not trashed.” The problem was that I couldn’t keep a straight face, although I was merely tipsy. It took a lot to get me drunk due to my strong stomach and chronic drinking habits.
“Sure, I believe you.” She rolled her eyes.
The secret behind my consumption of alcohol wasn’t purely because of the holidays, but rather because I wanted to take my mind away from a certain person I thought I’d left in the past. So when she called me earlier today and wouldn’t let up, it had almost ruined my night. I had Carmen to thank for saving it; Well, her and the alcohol.
After my ceaseless laughter diminished into an occasional fit of snickering, I wandered dangerously close to the edge of the pool searching for the abandoned cigarette I’d discarded in it. “Carm, did you see what happened to that cigarette? Maybe I can save Helena a stroke if I find it before she does.”
“No, I don’t see it.” I jumped when I heard her voice travel just over my shoulder. She steadied me in place before I lost my balance and almost fell into the water. “Why did you throw it in there anyway?”
“Because you distracted me.” It was the closest phrase to the truth I could formulate. The actual truth was that I got lost in the feeling of being inches away from Carmen’s lips and would’ve taken the chance of pushing her limits that I didn’t care about anything else. Maybe it wasn’t a terrible thing that Alice interrupted me because Carmen certainly feel the same as me and would’ve more than likely slapped me across the face before walking away.
Thankfully, she didn’t seem mad that I’d shifted the blame onto her. “So, now I’m a distraction, am I?” She had a sexy grin on her face to let me know she was teasing, something impossibly hard to resist. I laughed, partly because anything can appear funny when you’re loose and partly because my heart rate wouldn’t slow; It probably never would if she didn’t leave more than an inch of room between us. “You look cute when you laugh.”
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Ok what is it with all the danish writer’s putting themselves down lately?! I’m telling you this is an awesome story and I love how you write it from 4 perspectives, its original and totally enthralling! Don’t doubt that. I really hope you don’t give up on this because I really will come over to your place and do some best friend talking to you! :P And awww for your so sweet comment, sadly yessum I have been rejected *sniffs* however thats a whole other story…or 5. Again awesome post and thanks! PPS :) xx
oooo and alice has dropped the bomb shell to dana…. wonder waht dana will do now.great chapter. love this story. love how it focuses on both sharmen and danish. i love it really do… can’t wait to read more – if more is by tomorrow;) post more soon..lol
Wow, I’ve finally caught up on all your updates, this is a fantastic fic and I love the different perspectives. And that things are not all simple between these ladies. I like that you had Lara have her own life and leave Dana, who was being an ass. And that Dana and Alice can still talk, no matter how hard it may be for them to get to that place. Excellent work, looking forward to reading more;) Please post soon!
I can’t wait to see how Dana reacts to Alice’s news
Alright, now i left you a message to further address you because if i wrote it all here we’ll it would take up a bit of space lol ANYHOW back to the story. Which has left me without any gracious words to say because you’ve heard them all and they all very much apply to this story but however i will try my best, it was FREAKINGAWESOMELOVELYFANTASTICBRILLIANTFUNNY yes that’s a word look it up… ok or it might just be 6 words…together. lol you’re good, you’re really good i really expected it to be DANA of course danish fool me it was UTA, which i was surprised and thought it was awesome. It really did want to make me cry (which by the way isn’t a bad thing, you write it so well, it’s actually a compliment, if ya made me cry lol) but yeah, me crying at the part with Dana in the bathroom, and then Alice and her having a lil chat, it was great. Now with Uta somewhat in the picture i wonder how that’s going to play out which i know you’ll fill us in on. Shane and Carmen, oh so cute and holy CRAP she still has the ring on? can’t wait for that part. Helena freaking out about little things was funny. Poor Helena she needs s1 in her life asap. and finally to end this which ended up being long anyhow you could never hurt me, it’s actually WAY the opposite so hush! and obviously PPS, yes it is a rather dire request :) x0x0x
hope you post more soon x
I only just found this story. I love it!! Any chance for a new chapter? Please??
ok awsome update but ahhhh the happy sharmen was torture , it was super funny but still those two are dancing around the inevitable again, please let them finaly figure it out i mean carmen still ahs the ring come on….shane wake up and go get her . thanx again you totaly came through , way to go, favorite author ever…
OMFG why u quick it??? i love it keep going pleaseeeeeeeeeeee…..pleaseeeee you’re killing me
And what happens next?…… Guess we’ll never find out :(