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Phobia (Chapter 6)
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As I pressed my ear against the door, I realized I was right. Though I thought everyone was downstairs, curiosity and my conscience got the best of me and I rapped my knuckles on the door. My heart stopped beating when someone called out from the other side. “I’ll be right out.”
“Dana?” My breathing gained speed, worried about what happened to her, and for the first time ever, I wondered where Lara was. “Dane?” She must’ve recognized my voice since she didn’t make any kind of noise. “Daner?” Still no response. I tried one more variation of her name although it made me cringe to say it. “Pookie?”
That one did the trick. She inched the door open, but remained behind it so I couldn’t see her face. “What do you want, Alice?” her voice broke.
I was growing more anxious by the second. “I- Well, I wanted to know why you’re crying.”
“I haven’t been crying.”
Maybe lying was contagious. “Yes, you have. I just want to know what’s wrong.” The silence returned. “Okay, I’m getting Lara since you obviously don’t want to talk to me.” Before I had the chance to go downstairs, I heard her laugh mockingly.
“Good luck with that.” The door creaked open an inch more, syndicating that she’d let go of the handle but she didn’t come out. Without thinking, I fully swung the door open and took one step in; I was hardly prepared for what I saw.
“Oh my god.” It was hard to breathe the words out. Dana’s hands had the sides of the sink in a death grip, her forehead resting against the mirror above it; her face was flushed from crying and her eyes were a light shade of red.
She stared at me from the corner of her eye. “That’s right. You’re seeing Dana Fairbanks at her weakest.” I didn’t know why she was referring to herself in the third person, but the more I watched her, the more my heart broke. “Aren’t you lucky to see me when I’m like this.”
“I think pained is a better adjective than lucky.” If I’d made any progress in getting over her, tonight shot it all to hell. “What happened?”
“Lara and I broke up.” Her eyes closed and her jaw clenched.
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Ok what is it with all the danish writer’s putting themselves down lately?! I’m telling you this is an awesome story and I love how you write it from 4 perspectives, its original and totally enthralling! Don’t doubt that. I really hope you don’t give up on this because I really will come over to your place and do some best friend talking to you! :P And awww for your so sweet comment, sadly yessum I have been rejected *sniffs* however thats a whole other story…or 5. Again awesome post and thanks! PPS :) xx
oooo and alice has dropped the bomb shell to dana…. wonder waht dana will do now.great chapter. love this story. love how it focuses on both sharmen and danish. i love it really do… can’t wait to read more – if more is by tomorrow;) post more soon..lol
Wow, I’ve finally caught up on all your updates, this is a fantastic fic and I love the different perspectives. And that things are not all simple between these ladies. I like that you had Lara have her own life and leave Dana, who was being an ass. And that Dana and Alice can still talk, no matter how hard it may be for them to get to that place. Excellent work, looking forward to reading more;) Please post soon!
I can’t wait to see how Dana reacts to Alice’s news
Alright, now i left you a message to further address you because if i wrote it all here we’ll it would take up a bit of space lol ANYHOW back to the story. Which has left me without any gracious words to say because you’ve heard them all and they all very much apply to this story but however i will try my best, it was FREAKINGAWESOMELOVELYFANTASTICBRILLIANTFUNNY yes that’s a word look it up… ok or it might just be 6 words…together. lol you’re good, you’re really good i really expected it to be DANA of course danish fool me it was UTA, which i was surprised and thought it was awesome. It really did want to make me cry (which by the way isn’t a bad thing, you write it so well, it’s actually a compliment, if ya made me cry lol) but yeah, me crying at the part with Dana in the bathroom, and then Alice and her having a lil chat, it was great. Now with Uta somewhat in the picture i wonder how that’s going to play out which i know you’ll fill us in on. Shane and Carmen, oh so cute and holy CRAP she still has the ring on? can’t wait for that part. Helena freaking out about little things was funny. Poor Helena she needs s1 in her life asap. and finally to end this which ended up being long anyhow you could never hurt me, it’s actually WAY the opposite so hush! and obviously PPS, yes it is a rather dire request :) x0x0x
hope you post more soon x
I only just found this story. I love it!! Any chance for a new chapter? Please??
ok awsome update but ahhhh the happy sharmen was torture , it was super funny but still those two are dancing around the inevitable again, please let them finaly figure it out i mean carmen still ahs the ring come on….shane wake up and go get her . thanx again you totaly came through , way to go, favorite author ever…
OMFG why u quick it??? i love it keep going pleaseeeeeeeeeeee…..pleaseeeee you’re killing me
And what happens next?…… Guess we’ll never find out :(