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Phobia (Chapter 6)
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On any other given day, that line would’ve made my life so much better. Tonight was a major exception. “I’m sorry.” My throat was closing up. “I really am.”
“No, you’re not. I did the same thing to you.”
Her cynical behavior was thinning my patience. “I’m not going to let you do this.”
“Do what?”
“This! You’re making yourself feel worse by taking the blame for everything and everyone, but not every imperfect thing in the world is your fault.”
Whatever she was going to say next was cut off by Shane yelling up the stairs, “Dana? Alice? Whoever’s upstairs it’s time to come down and play!” She joked.
I turned back to Dana. “ Do want me to go or do you want to talk about it?”
“You might as well leave; I left you.” She held my gaze and I bit my lip to stop bitter words from tumbling out.
Instead, I shouted to Shane that we’d be downstairs in a minute. After she acknowledged, I re-entered the bathroom and shut the door, ready to finally take Shane’s advice.
Shane-
“I swear they’re up there fucking.” I remarked after waltzing into the dining room where everyone, minus Alice and Dana, were seated around the large mahogany table playing poker and getting ready to mercilessly indulge in the yearly Christmas Eve after-party drinking splurge. Unfortunately, Helena took my comment too seriously.
“Then go up there and stop them,” She had been freaking out over any minor mishap all night. “I don’t want-”
“Helena, relax.” Carmen, sitting next to me, spoke in my defense. “Shane was only kidding. Plus, ’tis the season to be jolly so it might be good for you to loosen up.”
Helena had visibly calmed down to a degree and I regretted having a few lime-shooters ahead of time because I couldn’t drop the subject. “Right, and if having sex is what makes Alice and Dana loosen up, then-”
“Alright.” Carmen was fed up with my behavior as she grabbed my arm, pulled me up out of my chair, excused us from the table, and practically shoved me out the door, exposing me to the cold, night air for the second time. “Shane, how many have you had?”
It was a relief to get outside since I was struggling to fake my sober state of mind around the others, but I hadn’t reached the point of being drunk, yet. “Yay, we’re outside.” Carmen wasn’t as thrilled as I was. “Wait, why are we out here again?”
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Ok what is it with all the danish writer’s putting themselves down lately?! I’m telling you this is an awesome story and I love how you write it from 4 perspectives, its original and totally enthralling! Don’t doubt that. I really hope you don’t give up on this because I really will come over to your place and do some best friend talking to you! :P And awww for your so sweet comment, sadly yessum I have been rejected *sniffs* however thats a whole other story…or 5. Again awesome post and thanks! PPS :) xx
oooo and alice has dropped the bomb shell to dana…. wonder waht dana will do now.great chapter. love this story. love how it focuses on both sharmen and danish. i love it really do… can’t wait to read more – if more is by tomorrow;) post more soon..lol
Wow, I’ve finally caught up on all your updates, this is a fantastic fic and I love the different perspectives. And that things are not all simple between these ladies. I like that you had Lara have her own life and leave Dana, who was being an ass. And that Dana and Alice can still talk, no matter how hard it may be for them to get to that place. Excellent work, looking forward to reading more;) Please post soon!
I can’t wait to see how Dana reacts to Alice’s news
Alright, now i left you a message to further address you because if i wrote it all here we’ll it would take up a bit of space lol ANYHOW back to the story. Which has left me without any gracious words to say because you’ve heard them all and they all very much apply to this story but however i will try my best, it was FREAKINGAWESOMELOVELYFANTASTICBRILLIANTFUNNY yes that’s a word look it up… ok or it might just be 6 words…together. lol you’re good, you’re really good i really expected it to be DANA of course danish fool me it was UTA, which i was surprised and thought it was awesome. It really did want to make me cry (which by the way isn’t a bad thing, you write it so well, it’s actually a compliment, if ya made me cry lol) but yeah, me crying at the part with Dana in the bathroom, and then Alice and her having a lil chat, it was great. Now with Uta somewhat in the picture i wonder how that’s going to play out which i know you’ll fill us in on. Shane and Carmen, oh so cute and holy CRAP she still has the ring on? can’t wait for that part. Helena freaking out about little things was funny. Poor Helena she needs s1 in her life asap. and finally to end this which ended up being long anyhow you could never hurt me, it’s actually WAY the opposite so hush! and obviously PPS, yes it is a rather dire request :) x0x0x
hope you post more soon x
I only just found this story. I love it!! Any chance for a new chapter? Please??
ok awsome update but ahhhh the happy sharmen was torture , it was super funny but still those two are dancing around the inevitable again, please let them finaly figure it out i mean carmen still ahs the ring come on….shane wake up and go get her . thanx again you totaly came through , way to go, favorite author ever…
OMFG why u quick it??? i love it keep going pleaseeeeeeeeeeee…..pleaseeeee you’re killing me
And what happens next?…… Guess we’ll never find out :(