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Private Duty—Chapter 1
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”Thank you” Tina said softly and felt herself suddenly become immune to the sound of the thunder and lightening as she cuddled into Bette
Bette felt Tina relax and smiled knowing she had made Tina feel better. She wanted nothing more than to protect her and keep her safe. After several minutes, the storm passed and Bette proceeded to get up but Tina pulled her back down.
”No. Stay here. Please?” Tina asked softly
”I’m just going back to my bed. I’ll still be in here with you” Bette said trying to get up
”Please? Sleep here with me. Please” Tina begged
Bette sighed
”Ok. But the storm is gone now”
”I know that. Tricia used to let me cuddle with her at night until she got her own room. Now she is a grumpy teenager that doesn’t want me near her” Tina sighed
Bette chuckled
”Ok. I’ll stay here” Bette said as she felt Tina kiss her cheek and her head nuzzle in the crook of her neck.
Bette smiled and closed her eyes feeling happy for the first time since her parents died and drifted off to a peaceful sleep.
Tina wiped her nose and sighed as she came from her thoughts. She collected herself and walked back to the main house. As she entered through the kitchen door she saw Bette setting plates down
”We can’t let this good Chinese food go to waste so come sit and let’s eat. I’m starved” Bette said sitting down and grabbing her chopsticks
”Thanks but I don’t have much of an appetite” Tina said as she sat down in front of her plate.
”Ok. More for me then” Bette said as she dumped some rice on her plate
Tina chuckled and lightly smiled
”Oh? Is that a smile I see?” Bette asked giving a look of shock
Tina scoffed
”I don’t deserve you being nice to me” Tina said sadly
”Tina? I have already told you that I forgave you a long time ago. You need to forgive yourself. I never thought I would ever see you again. It never occurred to me when I got here that your mother was Ms. Terry or that you were Christina. I never knew your last name. If I did I didn’t remember. Hell, I didn’t even recognize your sister. 20 years is a long time and my mind doesn’t like to recall things much from that time” Bette said as she placed chopsticks full of chicken in her mouth
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I remember this so pleased to see it back and look forward to you continuing it and completing it.
Happy New Year, stay safe
SG
Happy New Year to you SG! You stay safe!
This is a good beginning…. but please do not abandon your other story….. I so want to see what happens to Bette and Tina in that one as well as this one…..
I am going to have to start taking notes on all the stories that are in progress… I love reading them all, but I get somewhat frustrated when they suddenly end with no ending…. I get particularly frustrated when the story goes on for many months and chapters and then suddenly just stops – then years go by and nothing. And then suddenly the author will start to write again and starts one or two or three stories with no mention of the saga which I have been waiting for for months perhaps years. And the strange thing is that the stories are good and seem to be so close to completion. Another couple of chapters maybe????
Totally understand your frustration Martha!…If you are referring to Stolen Hearts it only has one chapter remaining for that book. I should post it soon. I have not decided to do a sequel. It would depend on demand. As far as Soul Dancing that one is far from over. This one however I have been writing on and it’s almost finished. It could warrant a sequel..but again.. that would be up to you the readers
Thank you for the comment!
I completely echo your comments.
A Happy and Healthy New Year Martha
Gr8 story. Sometimes forgiving ones’ self is a monumental task. Breaking patterns of self-hatred take more than a little bit internal tenacity. Tina will ultimately have to let Bette help her through the guilt and pain. And even Theresa will have to let Bette show her kindness.
Looking forward to more chapters!
Great story.. I hope to read more, please.
I remember this story and i am glad you have almost written all the chapters and yes i would love to read a sequel!
And of course I will read the other stories!
Happy New Year!
This is a really good chapter. Great beginning to a very intriguing story. Bette is very forgiving.