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Private Duty—Chapter 1

Tina shook her head
”I can’t forgive myself” Tina muttered
Bette sighed and thought back to the day Tina crushed her heart and her world.
Flashback:
”It’s not much further” Tina said as she climbed over some rocks to get to a higher part of a hill. Bette was right behind her.
They finally reached the top where there was a mini waterfall spilling into a swim hole
”Oh wow” Bette said as she took of her shirt and shorts revealing the one piece bathing suit underneath and stepped in dunking herself under the water.
Tina joined her and the two splashed and played until Tina got a cramp and went under swallowing water. Bette turned around hearing Tina choke and saw her disappear and immediately swam over pulling Tina up out of the water and frantically getting her to the bank.
”Christina!” Bette screamed as she patted her cheek. Tina wasn’t responding.
Quickly thinking back to a time she watched someone save another person at the beach she tilted Tina’s head back and parted her lips. She clasped her fingers and placed them over Tina’s chest and began counting as she pushed into her chest. She then placed her lips over her mouth and blew into her mouth repeating the actions over until Tina coughed and spit out water.
”Christina! Thank God!” Bette said in relief as Tina slowly stopped coughing ”Are you ok?”
Tina focused on Bette leaning over her and nodded her head.
”Yeah. What happened?” Christina asked finally sitting up
”You went under. I pulled you out and got you to spit the water out you swallowed” Bette explained
”Oh yeah. I got a cramp and went under” Tina paused then looked at Bette intently ”You saved me” Tina said gratefully and leaned in kissing Bette softly on the cheek ”Thank You”
Bette smiled as the two stared at each other and with emotions running high on the thought of losing Tina, Bette leaned in capturing Tina’s lips in a soft kiss. Tina responded by pushing Bette away because the feelings the kiss ignited in her scared her. She stood up and turned angry
”Ewwww! Why did you kiss me?! That’s gross! I don’t like you that way. In fact I don’t like you at all” Tina screamed
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I remember this so pleased to see it back and look forward to you continuing it and completing it.
Happy New Year, stay safe
SG
Happy New Year to you SG! You stay safe!
This is a good beginning…. but please do not abandon your other story….. I so want to see what happens to Bette and Tina in that one as well as this one…..
I am going to have to start taking notes on all the stories that are in progress… I love reading them all, but I get somewhat frustrated when they suddenly end with no ending…. I get particularly frustrated when the story goes on for many months and chapters and then suddenly just stops – then years go by and nothing. And then suddenly the author will start to write again and starts one or two or three stories with no mention of the saga which I have been waiting for for months perhaps years. And the strange thing is that the stories are good and seem to be so close to completion. Another couple of chapters maybe????
Totally understand your frustration Martha!…If you are referring to Stolen Hearts it only has one chapter remaining for that book. I should post it soon. I have not decided to do a sequel. It would depend on demand. As far as Soul Dancing that one is far from over. This one however I have been writing on and it’s almost finished. It could warrant a sequel..but again.. that would be up to you the readers
Thank you for the comment!
I completely echo your comments.
A Happy and Healthy New Year Martha
Gr8 story. Sometimes forgiving ones’ self is a monumental task. Breaking patterns of self-hatred take more than a little bit internal tenacity. Tina will ultimately have to let Bette help her through the guilt and pain. And even Theresa will have to let Bette show her kindness.
Looking forward to more chapters!
Great story.. I hope to read more, please.
I remember this story and i am glad you have almost written all the chapters and yes i would love to read a sequel!
And of course I will read the other stories!
Happy New Year!
This is a really good chapter. Great beginning to a very intriguing story. Bette is very forgiving.