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Private Duty—Chapter 2
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Tina shook her head as she held her coffee cup and stared out the kitchen window.
Bette waited for Tina to say something and when she didn’t she sighed and walked up next to Tina setting her coffee cup in the sink.
”Tina? I know you are sorry and I do honestly forgive you. I want nothing more than to take the guilt away you are feeling. Let’s talk later when I get back. I will answer any questions you may have. I feel you and I need to talk about this to help you get over the guilt you are feeling and you can forgive yourself. I will be back later ok?” Bette kissed Tina softly on the cheek and walked out of the kitchen.
Tina closed her eyes and put her hand on her cheek still feeling the tingling from Bette’s kiss. She opened her eyes when she heard the door close and saw Bette getting into her car and driving off. Tina felt her eyes glisten with tears as she felt like she was reliving that day she saw Bette being driven away from her house.
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Bette pulled up next to the curb in front of an apartment complex, making her way up the stairs connecting the first unit and walked to the last apartment on the right. She knocked and looked around and waited for someone to answer the door. She heard locks and latches being unchained and unlocked to reveal a groggy looking blonde with her hair going in every which direction staring at her.
Bette chuckled at the site
”Good morning Alice!” Bette said cheerfully as the blonde groaned and stepped aside letting Bette in. ”I brought you some coffee figuring you needed it”
”Thank you! Thank you!” Alice cheered as she grabbed the coffee cup out of Bette’s hands and took a sip. Alice closed her eyes and sighed at the taste ”Oh that’s so good”
”Where’s Shane?” Bette asked looking around and down the hallway.
”She had a conquest and went there. She should be sneaking out of there right about now so it shouldn’t be too much longer she should be stumbling through the door” Alice said plopping down on the sofa.
”She’ll never change will she?” Bette said shaking her head setting her purse down on the table and sitting next to Alice on the sofa.
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Tina…Tina! Think girl…. Bette walk into your life 24 hours ago and you want her to start dating you? You want to be with her regardless of the circumstances and the fact that you feel so guilty about your actions of 20 years ago? Your way or the highway? Seems like a bit controlling and unreasonable. Being friends first sounds like a reasonable idea to me. Don’t you want to get to know this Bette…this woman who has been through so much trauma and accomplishment? Don’t you want her to know you? And to be sure that her forgiveness of your actions were well placed? Just making such a request would be seem a bit neurotic to me. Just go with the flow for a while, she going to be your mother’s live in nurse for a while. After making such a demand, some people would call the office and tell them to send another nurse. She may care for the girl you were, but she does not know the woman you are except that you are attracted to her but are feeling the guilt. What if after you have resolved your guilt problem, she does not seem so attractive any more? Hell, you’ve been a straight girl forever… are you really ready for this? Take some time to think about this…do you want to break her heart again?
Good story….cannot wait to see what happens next.
Totally agree with Martha. Not much to add. What starts in chaos ends in chaos. Take a breath, Tina. All is not black and white. It seems a little of the determined to get her own way Tina still lurks. She can’t change 20 years in five minutes. Is it love or to assuage her guilt? She can’t know. Yet. Interesting way to incorporate Alice and Shane. I like this story.
Agree with you and Martha. Tina wants to make up for lost time and “that is the “guilt” that Bette is talking about! She needs to want for Bette to really be healed from a broken heart. Hmmmm
Ditto to all of you. Tina’s reaction seemed very teenager-like but I’d say that her thoughts and emotions are all over the place after the revelation. She should go for a long walk to think, sit with her mother and tell her all of what was happening and going through her mind. Sometimes it helps to give voice to the things which are battling in the head. Grab the chance to have an honest friendship with Bette first, everything more will come naturally (or not) when the time is right.
Martha, Billy and DumplinT have captured my thoughts exactly. Tina would benefit from therapy herself to deal with the 9 year old guilt filled little girl and understand those confusing feelings before she embarks on any type of relationship with Bette or anyone. Glad she let Matt go, but she wasn’t honest with the reason why. She’s emotionally immature. I hope Bette’s sense of responsibility doesn’t push her to be with Tina prematurely. She’s got a lot of scars whether she is willing to admit it or not.
Great storyline. Looking forward to more.
On the same wavelength as Martha, Billy, Dumplin T and BAT here. This is a very nieve Tina and Bette can see it.
Love the connection between Bette and Shane and Alice and the storyline it gives us.
Looking forward to more so please post soon.
Stay safe
Agree with you about liking Shane, Alice and Bette’s friendship. She is well aware of the necessity of drawing barriers by telling S & Al that are going to have to find jobs and places of their own after graduation.
She doesn’t mind helping, but all of them need physical distance. Even Tina has an apartment as opposed to the easy option of staying in the guest house
Can´t wait for more.