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Private Duty—Chapter 2
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Alice looked at Bette and batted her eyelashes ”Could you please?”
Bette sighed and looked at the two. ”Yeah. I guess I can do that. But what happened to the one Kit let you use?”
”It went to that big salvage dump in the sky. Engine blew” Shane said
”Oh. I didn’t know. I haven’t talked to Kit since I have been back from Washington. I was going to see her after I checked on my two favorite people. I’m assigned here in L.A. so I will be able to see you two more” Bette paused ”But yeah. I will see about getting you two a car”
Alice looked at Shane ”Ok. Pay up!”
Shane scoffed and dug into her pocket pulling out a twenty dollar bill and threw it at Alice. Alice unfolded it, kissed it, then put it in her pocket.
Bette frowned ”Did you two bet on whether I would say yes or no about the car?”
”Yep! Shane said there was no way you would say yes because you were too much of a tightwad. And I said you would because you can’t resist our adorable faces. So naturally I was right and naturally I won” Alice said proudly as Shane folded her arms and pouted
Bette rolled her eyes and shook her head and couldn’t help but laugh.
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Tricia opened the door to her mother’s house as Alana breezed past her and headed up the stairs eager to see her Grammy and Bette. She pushed the door open as the knob hit against the wall loudly startling Tina as she jumped in her chair.
”Alana! You have got to stop pushing the door open like that. You are going to put a hole in the wall. You need to knock before entering and wait for someone to say come in ok?” Tina scolded lightly.
”Ok Aunt Tina” Alana said as she turned grabbing the door and closing it on the way out. She then knocked on the door making Tina chuckle.
”Come in” Tina called out trying not to laugh.
Alana gently opened the door and climbed up on the bed
”Hi Aunt Tina! Hi Grammy!” Alana greeted and looked around the room. ”Where’s Ms. Bette?” Alana asked disappointedly
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Tina…Tina! Think girl…. Bette walk into your life 24 hours ago and you want her to start dating you? You want to be with her regardless of the circumstances and the fact that you feel so guilty about your actions of 20 years ago? Your way or the highway? Seems like a bit controlling and unreasonable. Being friends first sounds like a reasonable idea to me. Don’t you want to get to know this Bette…this woman who has been through so much trauma and accomplishment? Don’t you want her to know you? And to be sure that her forgiveness of your actions were well placed? Just making such a request would be seem a bit neurotic to me. Just go with the flow for a while, she going to be your mother’s live in nurse for a while. After making such a demand, some people would call the office and tell them to send another nurse. She may care for the girl you were, but she does not know the woman you are except that you are attracted to her but are feeling the guilt. What if after you have resolved your guilt problem, she does not seem so attractive any more? Hell, you’ve been a straight girl forever… are you really ready for this? Take some time to think about this…do you want to break her heart again?
Good story….cannot wait to see what happens next.
Totally agree with Martha. Not much to add. What starts in chaos ends in chaos. Take a breath, Tina. All is not black and white. It seems a little of the determined to get her own way Tina still lurks. She can’t change 20 years in five minutes. Is it love or to assuage her guilt? She can’t know. Yet. Interesting way to incorporate Alice and Shane. I like this story.
Agree with you and Martha. Tina wants to make up for lost time and “that is the “guilt” that Bette is talking about! She needs to want for Bette to really be healed from a broken heart. Hmmmm
Ditto to all of you. Tina’s reaction seemed very teenager-like but I’d say that her thoughts and emotions are all over the place after the revelation. She should go for a long walk to think, sit with her mother and tell her all of what was happening and going through her mind. Sometimes it helps to give voice to the things which are battling in the head. Grab the chance to have an honest friendship with Bette first, everything more will come naturally (or not) when the time is right.
Martha, Billy and DumplinT have captured my thoughts exactly. Tina would benefit from therapy herself to deal with the 9 year old guilt filled little girl and understand those confusing feelings before she embarks on any type of relationship with Bette or anyone. Glad she let Matt go, but she wasn’t honest with the reason why. She’s emotionally immature. I hope Bette’s sense of responsibility doesn’t push her to be with Tina prematurely. She’s got a lot of scars whether she is willing to admit it or not.
Great storyline. Looking forward to more.
On the same wavelength as Martha, Billy, Dumplin T and BAT here. This is a very nieve Tina and Bette can see it.
Love the connection between Bette and Shane and Alice and the storyline it gives us.
Looking forward to more so please post soon.
Stay safe
Agree with you about liking Shane, Alice and Bette’s friendship. She is well aware of the necessity of drawing barriers by telling S & Al that are going to have to find jobs and places of their own after graduation.
She doesn’t mind helping, but all of them need physical distance. Even Tina has an apartment as opposed to the easy option of staying in the guest house
Can´t wait for more.