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Remember Who You 21
Leaving one nipple to glisten and swell without her, Bette moved across to the other, licking her way as one hand reached and gently caressed Tina’s arm until their fingers met and linked.
Tina’s hips were moving, grinding to seek contact. She was definitely making noise now and Bette relished each sound that floated to her ears, each sound that lifted to the ceiling.
And for the second time that morning Tina spoke.
“Babe” she said, just one husky word. But that one word carried such weight this morning. Take me, it said… surround me and carry me away. You have me, it said… you have me intimately and every day. The way you make me feel, it screamed… like a feather and a tidal wave at the same time.
Both nipples rose and swelled to a painful point, hard, almost begging for relief, huge. Bette moved her mouth up, licking Tina from the hallow in her throat to finally end at her lips where they merged with no yielding, no stopping.
Breasts meeting breasts, skin on skin. One hand teasing an erect nipple, pulling, fondling. Tongues exploring, thrusting, tasting. Bette swallowed the whimpers and the moans of her lover until Tina broke the kiss, gasping in pleasure, her mouth open as she gulped for air, her head thrust back into her pillow.
And the groan of desperation became a beg, a wish, a hope. Please, it said. Please.
Bette paused, taking a moment to smooth the sweaty hair away from Tina’s flushed face, her hand moving slowly over Tina’s forehead as she gazed into her wife’s expressive eyes. Eyes full of lust, brimming with need, with love. Red cheeks, mouth open, lips bruised and wet. Exquisite. Beautiful. Hers.
“I love you Tee…” she whispered, their eyes speaking to each other.
And she knew Tina could not respond, not yet and certainly not vocally.
She knew every nerve ending was straining, pulsating, desperate for relief.
Maintaining eye contact, she reached down between Tina’s legs to touch her, and opened her inner lips to feel the pool of heat that waited for her. And that was all the response she needed, a wet I love you too. For Tina was soaked and Bette loved how wet she got for her.
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Sorry about the power failure but you more than made up with the tenderness of these lovers. I know the missed calls are Lucy. Let the unknowing be pushed to the background. An successful opening will give them the strength they need for whatever evil awaits. I hope Tina’s naiveté about Eric expose her to damage. Let Bette have the clearness of heart to protect her along with Lara and others.
Thank you Majic! The missed calls are from Lucy, she is desperate to reach her sister…
Hi BK,
Sad you lost a entire chapter due to power failure, but wow i loved this chapter so much!
It was hot, sweet and tender!
Please, let Tina be careful when she is in Chicago and who is Bette going to call, i expect someone who will protect Tina. I hope Tina is going to call back to that unfamiliar number, Lucy, so that she will be given a head up about Eric’s intentions to Tina.
Thank you for this wonderful chapter!
BiBI – Glad you liked it! Power failures are such a pain but youre right, at least the sweetness of pre-opening could be shared…
So sorry you lost a Chapter but thank you for this.
Looking forward to more of this wonderful story soon, please.
SG
On it SG!
Sorry for the loss of your creative output, that sucks. Do you remember some of it? Some sentences, the essence of the chapter’s course? Had that myself back in my writing days, at 2 am after writing for hours and disregarding to save the file.
Thanks for this sensual chapter as substitute. Feels like the calm before the storm.
When will Tina get in touch with her sister? I think it could somehow be important for Chicago.
And what about Bette’s call? Did she call Eric to give him a peace of her mind? Would be very Alpha-Bette but not very thought-out. Like Bibi I hope she called some enforcement (still thinking of some kind of cavalry).
Enjoyed this chapter very much, thanks for sharing. Waiting for the opening and the first gusts of the storm to come.
Kiwi
I do remember some of it but some will change because this chapter gave some of it away already – the missed phone calls for one. But yes the essence is still there. I write these chapters much more easily than the drama filled ones. The one with Eric took forever because he is so vile. Anyway, appreciate your comments!
The clam before the storm. Lovely chapter. I like the memories of when they first got together and the “This is why” incidents. Looks like its going to be a wonderful gallery opening. Tommorrow, its off to Chicago, and lets win there!.
Thank you for this chapter….can not wait for more.
You are very welcome Martha, thank YOU!
Well, BK, a power failure gave us a warm and tender chapter. It’s just the calm before the storm. Lucy and Eric are on the horizon.
“They had not been lovers for long and Bette remembered the first time she realized she didn’t care that her careful order was not so controlled. She found she didn’t mind a change to her routine, her control over things being replaced by the safety Tina instilled in her.
Suddenly it was ok to be Bette Porter. Complicated, yes. Unyielding and stubborn, frequently. But also loving and gentle and generous. Kind. Protective.”
I still didn’t finish to read this chapter but I had to express how much I love this analysis of Bette (our dear so-called Allmighty Porter but so deeply vulnerable actually) and this so simple and yet so deeply touching remembering about the first morning coffee with Tina and the mugs : just that is enough to summarize your exquisite talent. I just adore it.
,,, now, I’m ready to finish my reading – and ready for the coming drame about this disgusting Eric and the sister I cannot wait to meet and hear…
Thank you SO much for sharing, again and again ! It’s a gift I’m more than ever grateful for,
A;
You are most welcome. Thank you for your kind, heartfelt words. I think we both see Bette the same way. Sometimes she is hard to write because of her complexity. I appreciate your comments!
Reading each page of this marvelous story of yours… #thisiswhy…
Smiling with tenderness in my heart in front of my favorite two… #thisiswhy…
Feeling much better thanks to writers like you… #thisiswhy…
This is why I love so much your story.
Thank you – as simply as that.
A.