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Remember Who You 21
Unable to keep her eyes open, Tina closed them slowly, her head having a mind of its own, her ability to control her body being given over to her wife. She was utterly helpless.
And Bette loved that too, how Tina would give all of herself, how she trusted Bette to take care of her.
Moving lower, faster this time, as Bette sensed that Tina was near and she wanted to taste her, she wanted to taste her now and taste her again as she came, and it would be soon.
Bette entered her with two fingers, easily, all the way in, gliding, soaking, moving inside. The heat enveloping her fingers as Bette now whimpered, she felt so close to Tina, so complete. She pulled out to coat her wife’s pussy with her own juices, intimately stroking her inner lips, her clit, as her mouth reached her destination.
She paused to look at the sight before her.
Tina raised up on her elbows, intently watching Bette’s descent, trembling. She spread her legs more for her lover’s eyes, her thighs shaking a little as she saw the tip of Bette’s tongue reach out to lightly, tenderly, lick her clit one time.
Their eyes met and stayed connected as Bette moved both hands to rest on Tina’s inner thighs, framing her pussy so her thumbs could open the soft inner lips, spreading Tina’s folds for her eyes, her tongue, her mouth, the wetness everywhere, the desire plentiful. She drank in the sight.
And Tina was unable to stay on her elbows, dropping back as her hips began to move, slowly at first then finding the rhythm set by Bette, a slow grind that Bette loved to watch, her tongue moving in between and through the folds, her fingers holding the dripping lips open as she watched Tina’s stomach and hips gyrate.
And the heat. The heat like silken lava, scorching her tongue, burning a path on her lips, invading her mouth and overwhelming her senses. Now it was Bette who was groaning, consumed by the love she felt for this woman, her woman, her life.
She wanted to be inside Tina again, as deep inside as was possible so she entered her again, this time with her tongue as her thumb worked on the hard, slippery clit.
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Sorry about the power failure but you more than made up with the tenderness of these lovers. I know the missed calls are Lucy. Let the unknowing be pushed to the background. An successful opening will give them the strength they need for whatever evil awaits. I hope Tina’s naiveté about Eric expose her to damage. Let Bette have the clearness of heart to protect her along with Lara and others.
Thank you Majic! The missed calls are from Lucy, she is desperate to reach her sister…
Hi BK,
Sad you lost a entire chapter due to power failure, but wow i loved this chapter so much!
It was hot, sweet and tender!
Please, let Tina be careful when she is in Chicago and who is Bette going to call, i expect someone who will protect Tina. I hope Tina is going to call back to that unfamiliar number, Lucy, so that she will be given a head up about Eric’s intentions to Tina.
Thank you for this wonderful chapter!
BiBI – Glad you liked it! Power failures are such a pain but youre right, at least the sweetness of pre-opening could be shared…
So sorry you lost a Chapter but thank you for this.
Looking forward to more of this wonderful story soon, please.
SG
On it SG!
Sorry for the loss of your creative output, that sucks. Do you remember some of it? Some sentences, the essence of the chapter’s course? Had that myself back in my writing days, at 2 am after writing for hours and disregarding to save the file.
Thanks for this sensual chapter as substitute. Feels like the calm before the storm.
When will Tina get in touch with her sister? I think it could somehow be important for Chicago.
And what about Bette’s call? Did she call Eric to give him a peace of her mind? Would be very Alpha-Bette but not very thought-out. Like Bibi I hope she called some enforcement (still thinking of some kind of cavalry).
Enjoyed this chapter very much, thanks for sharing. Waiting for the opening and the first gusts of the storm to come.
Kiwi
I do remember some of it but some will change because this chapter gave some of it away already – the missed phone calls for one. But yes the essence is still there. I write these chapters much more easily than the drama filled ones. The one with Eric took forever because he is so vile. Anyway, appreciate your comments!
The clam before the storm. Lovely chapter. I like the memories of when they first got together and the “This is why” incidents. Looks like its going to be a wonderful gallery opening. Tommorrow, its off to Chicago, and lets win there!.
Thank you for this chapter….can not wait for more.
You are very welcome Martha, thank YOU!
Well, BK, a power failure gave us a warm and tender chapter. It’s just the calm before the storm. Lucy and Eric are on the horizon.
“They had not been lovers for long and Bette remembered the first time she realized she didn’t care that her careful order was not so controlled. She found she didn’t mind a change to her routine, her control over things being replaced by the safety Tina instilled in her.
Suddenly it was ok to be Bette Porter. Complicated, yes. Unyielding and stubborn, frequently. But also loving and gentle and generous. Kind. Protective.”
I still didn’t finish to read this chapter but I had to express how much I love this analysis of Bette (our dear so-called Allmighty Porter but so deeply vulnerable actually) and this so simple and yet so deeply touching remembering about the first morning coffee with Tina and the mugs : just that is enough to summarize your exquisite talent. I just adore it.
,,, now, I’m ready to finish my reading – and ready for the coming drame about this disgusting Eric and the sister I cannot wait to meet and hear…
Thank you SO much for sharing, again and again ! It’s a gift I’m more than ever grateful for,
A;
You are most welcome. Thank you for your kind, heartfelt words. I think we both see Bette the same way. Sometimes she is hard to write because of her complexity. I appreciate your comments!
Reading each page of this marvelous story of yours… #thisiswhy…
Smiling with tenderness in my heart in front of my favorite two… #thisiswhy…
Feeling much better thanks to writers like you… #thisiswhy…
This is why I love so much your story.
Thank you – as simply as that.
A.