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Riders Ch.7
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“Ok, ok Al I give please tell me your plan.”
“Okay but remember you asked I am not forcing you to get involved.”
“I know that Al come on tell me I can help I am telling you. When it comes to manipulating Tina you need me on your team.”
See hold out for a few minutes and she is putty in my hands.
“It’s simple really. We just agree with them. They are going to deny that there is anything between them at every opportunity we give them. So instead of trying to disagree we say ok and then we do everything we can to keep them apart. They are so stubborn that the minute we start telling them we get it and that they are right they will start fighting it and find ways to be together.”
“Oh my god you are right. It really could be that simple. I am in, we tag team you take Bette and I take Tina and then we can switch it up and I can tell Bette that Tina doesn’t like her and vice versa for you. You really are a genius. I knew there was a reason I fell for you and your twisted little mind.”
“Oh come on Dana you aren’t fooling anyone you wanted my body plain and simple just couldn’t resist.”
“Whatever Alice. Look are you ok up here for a few? Tina has been back there a while I should make sure she is ok hopefully she has drunk enough to pass out and get some sleep before we arrive, I know she didn’t get any last night.”
I nod and settle into my seat as she makes her way back to find Tina, I check on Bette in the rear-view mirror she is still in cloud cuckoo land, oh if only she knew.
————————Dana———————-
As I walk through the door I can hear Tina talking. She is obviously drunk as she is struggling to pronounce her words and is finding herself very amusing as her sentences are peppered with little bursts of laughter and hiccups.
I stepped forward to see where Tina was, she was in one of the empty spaces between Orwell and another of her horses, a gorgeous young mare called Bronte who was as black as night and made a stunning contrast to Orwell’s white coat.
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That’s so hilarious. Let the show go on. But I’m a bit worried that before the curtain’s down, Alice and Dana might get some internal injury due to suppressing too much laughter. Me, too. =P
It was totally hilarious, and I think the plan is definitely going to WORK!!!
Great plan, Alice! I’m sure the B/T repsonses will be amusing. When do we get to the Tina and the porridge part? Thanks for writing!
This is just too funny, the light entertainment factor is such a contrast to “…Designer Suits”. Keep the banter going. Thx.
Oh god the Bronte bit was too much. LMAO!!!! And yeah I’ve heard of that neverending song. Someone posted it in their livejournal I think and I’m pretty sure he was from Australia. Scotch is freakin’ nasty! I don’t know how someone can drink it straight even if the intention is to get blitzed. I tok a sip from the bottle I bought for my dad a few years ago and…no, never again.
This is so funny! Loving this unusual story of ‘horsing’ around. Great chapter Ellie!
absolutely funny, especially Mr. Ed part, i hope alice’s plan will work
Mr. Ed, that is pretty funny. I even remember seeing some of those shows. Both Bette and Tina are thinking maybe they are a little crazy. If I was there I would be splitting my sides wide open with laughter. I can’t wait to see how both Bette and Tina react to this little game that Alice and Dana are playing.
That was a great laugh! Could just picture Tina and Bronte. Lamentamini is so right…Scotch is about the worst thing I’ve ever drank. It involved a nice man in a kilt, my birthday and the Queen Mary. Scotch….was still horrible. Hope you get to post soon.
I love this story, so darn funny, and Alice, well, Alice will be Alice no matter who is writing her. So funny.
This is so funny and love it!!!!!!!!!!
:D Sooooooooooo Hilarious! alices plan is great! LOL! Mr ed… LMFAO
That was so funny. loved the mr. Ed part. Loved that Tina though the horse was talking to her. Lets see how Alice plan works out. thanks
OMG ! That was the funniest thing ever. Loved it.
Absolutely not boring – great and funny chapter. The part with Tina and the “talking” horse was hilarious. I love Alices plan and I’m sure that B&T will do everything to see eachother without even thinking about what they are doing, because they are so stubborn that they will do the opposite of what Alice and Dana says LOL…..great writing Ellie R and Tinas shirt is now okay thanks :o))