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Round n Round We Go (Ch.10)
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“Oh Al for heaven’s sake quit the Yoda impression or whatever you’re doing.”
Alice protested but stopped her hand. “Hey! This is my thinking gesture. Sounds like you two are walking a dangerously thin line there. Just a bit of push would totally lead you to a homerun.”
“Then what do I do?”
“I propose,” She immediately spoke up as if she were in a conference, making a proposition, which caused Tina to regret asking help from her. “best case you talk, Bette’s not gonna pull her jump-and-dump stunt, sure she understands if you’re not ready, but in the mean time, you prepare.”
“Prepare?”
“How is that my every sentence is so hard to digest? You prepare! Buy some sexy lingerie, wear ’em 24-7, trim the lawn—if you know what I mean, watch some girl-on-girl action video. Porter’s waited for two months, better make it worth her while.” Alice reasoned and glanced back to Dana. “Woo, she’s done. I’m going to the locker.”
“That’s creepy, Al.” Tina rolled her eyes in total disbelief.
“At least I know what I’m doing. You, on the other hand, study your shit.” Waving goodbye, Alice snuck into the door of the locker room after a certain athlete.
Her words got Tina thinking, she indeed knew nothing in terms of this kind of experiences. And Alice made a good case there. She’d never want their first time to be awkward and uncomfortable. “Study my shit, huh.”
Bette Porter’s Gallery arrived at a busy time, Shirley Shore’s show about to begin. And her work, more celebrated than that of Leigh Austin, demanded a big introduction. During the last month before the show, Bette skipped classes to supervise the progress and make some final calls. And after school, she’d return to Marymount, sometimes even still wearing her Armani power suit, pick up the blonde, and since staying at home meant self-surrender to home classes, and the gallery had too many people, she explained to Tina, that she had to get some work done in her recess room. So the only place they visited together was Mrs. Heminger’s.
Steven was often at the library, Sue complained that nobody was ever home to talk to. As Bette delivered the invitation to the art show opening night, Sue insisted they sit with her for some while.
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Yeah, it’s chapter ten and we haven’t seen some actions. But you know where this is heading to! Expecting the next post already?
Do review. I’d love to hear your suggestions and thoughts.
Thanks (~:
Lol!!! Nice ending….cliff hanger…. ;)
Hahaha, I know very well that I’m a tease. And I love doing it!
Won’t let you down after a cliff hanging, I promise.
Oh,lovely story,but i have a flash back,i have seen the similar story in chinese, same storyline without other charactors like shane and alice.and in that story,tina became pregnant and better found out sam’s scheme before she knew tina was pregant… i really like your work,more drama and details,is the story will go like this.so i was wondering will you kindly enough to tell me which story or film you based on?
oh,by the way,i really want to see some action in next chapter.
Yes, this is a twist based on an origin-unknown Chinese heterosexual romantic fiction I have seen before in Baidu Tieba before. You see my rewriting really originated from a dare that my friend evil mindedly pick out for me. And to be honest, I think its original structure was a bit loose and didn’t make perfect sense to me. So, I will probably do a bigger twist, especially on the pregnant part, later in this story and I have already set my mind on a particular outcome. Btw, you Chinese? I’m Chinese and I went to high school in Australia, heading to the US for college this fall. ;) nice meeting you.
Yeah,that’s where i saw it too,in Baidutieba,THE L WORD fandom.Yeah, I am chinese. i’ve already read all the chinese TB fan fictions ,and i just can’t get enough, so here i am.Guess what , i saw an American version of White Snake Legendary on the original The L Word fanfiction site, can you believe that!!That’s one of my biggest fantasy that Xuxian is actually a woman ,rather than acted by one.
so i am really looking forward to where this story goes,the original story is too rush and lack of some behind stories.So suprise me,i am officially your fan now.nice work!
Wow that’s something! I think they’ve moved all the fictions on the old site here so I’ll definitely look up for that one. Xuxian being a woman, hmmm, sounds quite tasteful!
And thank you so much for supporting me on this. I’ll post asap and please review more. I’d love to hear your thoughts since you’ve read the original version.
I wonder if I can write Chinese here. 谢谢～ 么么哒
Do they appear like normal Chinese characters or inidentifyable rectangles?
Ha! It worked! 新站果然高端！
我还是比较喜欢老站布局。exclusive.
I think that fiction named as Snake love ,Bette as Xuxian,Tina as Baishuzhen and Alice as Xiaoqing.I always thought that Xiaoqin was the true love for Bai, cos Xiaoqin is very protective of Bai and devoted everything for Bai, just thinking,haha.
Snake Love, huh, lovely and literal. XiaoQing is one hell of a girl, isn’t she. But in this case… Alice and Tina…? I don’t find that very appealing lol.
And FYI, I’m not gonna let their first time be in the poor hotel like that in the original story. It’s just not fair. ;p
I intend it to be more well planed, more romantic.
more details on their first time，please！finger crossed！
Thank you and PPS.
Thanks for supporting. I’ll try to post soon.
great post, please Tina, tell Bette about your dad
Well, she has no intention to hurt Bette that’s for sure. But it’s a dilemma. I’m afraid it’s going to turn out not so great for the scheme. Still, I will fix it, no worries.
Ok here we go let’s heat it up some more this story is getting hot
Right on! I’m working on it ;p
That was great