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Round n Round We Go (Ch.10)
It left the blonde girl going with Mrs. Heminger and Steven. She listened to Alice’s fashion advice and bought herself a Simply Vera Wang dress. It was a piece of spearmint green, sleeveless, knee length dress that complimented her ivory skin and matched the same colored flares in her irises. Underneath, she wore a pair of black lace underpants and matching bra that were not too showy but sexier than most of her usual ones. She had no time to shop for shoes and personal ornaments so she borrowed Alice’s cream-colored Jimmy Choo stilettos and a series of shiny sequins. The attire cost her some fortune but it was her first time using the card that Bette made for her, she felt all excited, even a bit conceited, as she checked out for her dress and lingerie, feeling the envy radiating from every woman by the counter.
Bette sent William to drive the blonde girl and the Hemingers to the gallery. She herself greeted the early arriving guests and artists. Playing hostess, she had to personally meet people that she never heard of but had to pretend that she knew them. It physically exhausted her talking to those phony personages and patronizing merchants, praying that after her address, Shirley would take over and draw people’s attention away. Grandmother was not there, for which she was grateful, because the last time they had a show of this scale, the old bossy woman stayed there the entire night, watching over her, judging her social manners afterwards, and complaining about the long time standing. As she felt the night would drag along like that forever, the brunette got the tingling in her stomach and instinctively, she glanced over to the entrance to find the source of such reaction. And there, by the side of her glass sliding door, stood the breathtakingly beautiful girl, her beautiful girl.
Tina could walk in a crowded room and spot her girlfriend in an instant. Bette just shined everywhere she went. Today, the brunette changed into her formal evening gown, a set of dark blue Burberry silky long dress, it showed her tempting cleavage and left people the rest to imagine as well, a sapphire necklace and a pair of delicate earring of the same tune, and her black Christian Louboutin 2.5-inche heels made her stand much taller than the rest of the room.
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Yeah, it’s chapter ten and we haven’t seen some actions. But you know where this is heading to! Expecting the next post already?
Do review. I’d love to hear your suggestions and thoughts.
Thanks (~:
Lol!!! Nice ending….cliff hanger…. ;)
Hahaha, I know very well that I’m a tease. And I love doing it!
Won’t let you down after a cliff hanging, I promise.
Oh,lovely story,but i have a flash back,i have seen the similar story in chinese, same storyline without other charactors like shane and alice.and in that story,tina became pregnant and better found out sam’s scheme before she knew tina was pregant… i really like your work,more drama and details,is the story will go like this.so i was wondering will you kindly enough to tell me which story or film you based on?
oh,by the way,i really want to see some action in next chapter.
Yes, this is a twist based on an origin-unknown Chinese heterosexual romantic fiction I have seen before in Baidu Tieba before. You see my rewriting really originated from a dare that my friend evil mindedly pick out for me. And to be honest, I think its original structure was a bit loose and didn’t make perfect sense to me. So, I will probably do a bigger twist, especially on the pregnant part, later in this story and I have already set my mind on a particular outcome. Btw, you Chinese? I’m Chinese and I went to high school in Australia, heading to the US for college this fall. ;) nice meeting you.
Yeah,that’s where i saw it too,in Baidutieba,THE L WORD fandom.Yeah, I am chinese. i’ve already read all the chinese TB fan fictions ,and i just can’t get enough, so here i am.Guess what , i saw an American version of White Snake Legendary on the original The L Word fanfiction site, can you believe that!!That’s one of my biggest fantasy that Xuxian is actually a woman ,rather than acted by one.
so i am really looking forward to where this story goes,the original story is too rush and lack of some behind stories.So suprise me,i am officially your fan now.nice work!
Wow that’s something! I think they’ve moved all the fictions on the old site here so I’ll definitely look up for that one. Xuxian being a woman, hmmm, sounds quite tasteful!
And thank you so much for supporting me on this. I’ll post asap and please review more. I’d love to hear your thoughts since you’ve read the original version.
I wonder if I can write Chinese here. 谢谢~ 么么哒
Do they appear like normal Chinese characters or inidentifyable rectangles?
Ha! It worked! 新站果然高端!
我还是比较喜欢老站布局。exclusive.
I think that fiction named as Snake love ,Bette as Xuxian,Tina as Baishuzhen and Alice as Xiaoqing.I always thought that Xiaoqin was the true love for Bai, cos Xiaoqin is very protective of Bai and devoted everything for Bai, just thinking,haha.
Snake Love, huh, lovely and literal. XiaoQing is one hell of a girl, isn’t she. But in this case… Alice and Tina…? I don’t find that very appealing lol.
And FYI, I’m not gonna let their first time be in the poor hotel like that in the original story. It’s just not fair. ;p
I intend it to be more well planed, more romantic.
more details on their first time,please!finger crossed!
Thank you and PPS.
Thanks for supporting. I’ll try to post soon.
great post, please Tina, tell Bette about your dad
Well, she has no intention to hurt Bette that’s for sure. But it’s a dilemma. I’m afraid it’s going to turn out not so great for the scheme. Still, I will fix it, no worries.
Ok here we go let’s heat it up some more this story is getting hot
Right on! I’m working on it ;p
That was great