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Round n Round We Go (Ch.10)
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“I love you.” Before the brunette walked in to the hallway, Tina remembered to speak, a little louder so that the other girl could hear.
So very content, Bette sighed pleasantly. “I know.” It was true, she always saw the little sparkles in her eyes and she knew that they mirrored her own.
To keep their words, they went to keep Mrs. Heminger company for two more times that month, and promised that they’d visit as much as the brunette could manage. Bette stayed at the gallery almost every day now and some evenings, she even couldn’t make it back to take her girl home. Tina felt she never saw her anymore. They did homework there and talked with the old lady. Old Sue just enjoyed watching their young faces.
“What you kids have is nice, and rare.” After Bette left for an emergency at the gallery, Sue said to Tina. “Ahhh, young love.”
“Thanks, I know. We actually… are considering taking our relationship to a deeper… level.” The blonde vaguely said, blushing by the end of it. She stood up from the sofa and took the cups with her to the sink.
Sue beamed a knowing smile. “Well that’s great. But Christie sweetie,” She caught Tina’s attention by pausing for a bit. “don’t let other people ruin what you two have achieved for yourselves. Nobody, nobody has the right to sabotage something so beautiful.”
Mrs. Heminger’s words stitched in to her head. Tina suddenly didn’t know what to say. She stared down at the swirling water in the sink and picked up a sponge, starting to clean in silence.
The old lady observed her for a minute and sighed inwardly. She could sense some part of the difficulty in the young girls’ relationship came from Sam Kennard. She just didn’t understand the situation fully.
The opening night finally came. It was a Friday, people leaving their jobs and putting on more make-up, all attempting to make a good impression on the gallery owner, their potential business association in less than five years.
Sam was invited but he decided against it because he was afraid that some old acquaintance in the Porter’s company might show up and recognize him, and he was not ready to meet the powerful old Mrs. Porter. What he didn’t know was that the lady was not even going to show up due to a business seminar in New York with Peggy Peabody. For Bette, it was such a shame that Peggy couldn’t make it. She never liked the daughter but the elder Peabody, she was quite fond of.
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Yeah, it’s chapter ten and we haven’t seen some actions. But you know where this is heading to! Expecting the next post already?
Do review. I’d love to hear your suggestions and thoughts.
Thanks (~:
Lol!!! Nice ending….cliff hanger…. ;)
Hahaha, I know very well that I’m a tease. And I love doing it!
Won’t let you down after a cliff hanging, I promise.
Oh,lovely story,but i have a flash back,i have seen the similar story in chinese, same storyline without other charactors like shane and alice.and in that story,tina became pregnant and better found out sam’s scheme before she knew tina was pregant… i really like your work,more drama and details,is the story will go like this.so i was wondering will you kindly enough to tell me which story or film you based on?
oh,by the way,i really want to see some action in next chapter.
Yes, this is a twist based on an origin-unknown Chinese heterosexual romantic fiction I have seen before in Baidu Tieba before. You see my rewriting really originated from a dare that my friend evil mindedly pick out for me. And to be honest, I think its original structure was a bit loose and didn’t make perfect sense to me. So, I will probably do a bigger twist, especially on the pregnant part, later in this story and I have already set my mind on a particular outcome. Btw, you Chinese? I’m Chinese and I went to high school in Australia, heading to the US for college this fall. ;) nice meeting you.
Yeah,that’s where i saw it too,in Baidutieba,THE L WORD fandom.Yeah, I am chinese. i’ve already read all the chinese TB fan fictions ,and i just can’t get enough, so here i am.Guess what , i saw an American version of White Snake Legendary on the original The L Word fanfiction site, can you believe that!!That’s one of my biggest fantasy that Xuxian is actually a woman ,rather than acted by one.
so i am really looking forward to where this story goes,the original story is too rush and lack of some behind stories.So suprise me,i am officially your fan now.nice work!
Wow that’s something! I think they’ve moved all the fictions on the old site here so I’ll definitely look up for that one. Xuxian being a woman, hmmm, sounds quite tasteful!
And thank you so much for supporting me on this. I’ll post asap and please review more. I’d love to hear your thoughts since you’ve read the original version.
I wonder if I can write Chinese here. 谢谢～ 么么哒
Do they appear like normal Chinese characters or inidentifyable rectangles?
Ha! It worked! 新站果然高端！
我还是比较喜欢老站布局。exclusive.
I think that fiction named as Snake love ,Bette as Xuxian,Tina as Baishuzhen and Alice as Xiaoqing.I always thought that Xiaoqin was the true love for Bai, cos Xiaoqin is very protective of Bai and devoted everything for Bai, just thinking,haha.
Snake Love, huh, lovely and literal. XiaoQing is one hell of a girl, isn’t she. But in this case… Alice and Tina…? I don’t find that very appealing lol.
And FYI, I’m not gonna let their first time be in the poor hotel like that in the original story. It’s just not fair. ;p
I intend it to be more well planed, more romantic.
more details on their first time，please！finger crossed！
Thank you and PPS.
Thanks for supporting. I’ll try to post soon.
great post, please Tina, tell Bette about your dad
Well, she has no intention to hurt Bette that’s for sure. But it’s a dilemma. I’m afraid it’s going to turn out not so great for the scheme. Still, I will fix it, no worries.
Ok here we go let’s heat it up some more this story is getting hot
Right on! I’m working on it ;p
That was great