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Round n Round We Go (Ch.10)
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The two girls exchanged a look of delight and surprise between themselves.
“Well, I guess we’re staying.” Tina shrugged.
After dinner, they helped clean up, and then went up to sit on the roof, where the blonde liked to watch the stars. Bette found that with less lighting than her own neighborhood, the night looked so much quieter, and the stars brighter.
Tina felt it was the opportunity to have the talk. She looked over to the exquisite profile of her girlfriend, fascinated. “Bette?”
Her voice was so low and soft that almost got lost in the wind and the leaves brushing not afar. The corner of Bette’s lips tugged into a gentle curve. She looked back into the hazel pools of moon light. “Yeah?”
“I… We’ve been going out for a while…” As she spoke, she tried to find words to express her feelings.
Bette immediately knew where the conversation was heading to.
“I don’t want to seem so… up-tight, and selfish…” Her voice trembled a little.
It pained the brunette to see that the ambiguity of their relationship was weighing on her girl like that. “Stop, stop.” She put up a finger and silenced the blonde. “No, T, you’re not, trust me. I love you and I’d give anything to consummate that. But the time must be right and I must know for sure that you’re really ready.”
Tina just stared into the brown orbs.
“What?”
“You said… that you love me.” She couldn’t believe it. Bette said it. Bette said it first. And the next moment, Tina was nervous and panicking, afraid that it was a slip and she’d take it back.
Yet, the brunette smiled, her eyes shining under the star lights. “I do. Guess I’ve been feeling that a lot lately.” She took out her Harley keychain that she always kept around her belt and picked out a silvery one. Then she held the blonde’s hand upward and laid the cold little object in her palm. “I’ll wait. When you’re ready, give it back to me.”
“What does it open?” With Bette’s warm hand under hers, she balled up her fist, protecting the key.
“You’ll see.” Pressing a kiss on the ivory hand, Bette stood up and said goodnight.
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Yeah, it’s chapter ten and we haven’t seen some actions. But you know where this is heading to! Expecting the next post already?
Do review. I’d love to hear your suggestions and thoughts.
Thanks (~:
Lol!!! Nice ending….cliff hanger…. ;)
Hahaha, I know very well that I’m a tease. And I love doing it!
Won’t let you down after a cliff hanging, I promise.
Oh,lovely story,but i have a flash back,i have seen the similar story in chinese, same storyline without other charactors like shane and alice.and in that story,tina became pregnant and better found out sam’s scheme before she knew tina was pregant… i really like your work,more drama and details,is the story will go like this.so i was wondering will you kindly enough to tell me which story or film you based on?
oh,by the way,i really want to see some action in next chapter.
Yes, this is a twist based on an origin-unknown Chinese heterosexual romantic fiction I have seen before in Baidu Tieba before. You see my rewriting really originated from a dare that my friend evil mindedly pick out for me. And to be honest, I think its original structure was a bit loose and didn’t make perfect sense to me. So, I will probably do a bigger twist, especially on the pregnant part, later in this story and I have already set my mind on a particular outcome. Btw, you Chinese? I’m Chinese and I went to high school in Australia, heading to the US for college this fall. ;) nice meeting you.
Yeah,that’s where i saw it too,in Baidutieba,THE L WORD fandom.Yeah, I am chinese. i’ve already read all the chinese TB fan fictions ,and i just can’t get enough, so here i am.Guess what , i saw an American version of White Snake Legendary on the original The L Word fanfiction site, can you believe that!!That’s one of my biggest fantasy that Xuxian is actually a woman ,rather than acted by one.
so i am really looking forward to where this story goes,the original story is too rush and lack of some behind stories.So suprise me,i am officially your fan now.nice work!
Wow that’s something! I think they’ve moved all the fictions on the old site here so I’ll definitely look up for that one. Xuxian being a woman, hmmm, sounds quite tasteful!
And thank you so much for supporting me on this. I’ll post asap and please review more. I’d love to hear your thoughts since you’ve read the original version.
I wonder if I can write Chinese here. 谢谢～ 么么哒
Do they appear like normal Chinese characters or inidentifyable rectangles?
Ha! It worked! 新站果然高端！
我还是比较喜欢老站布局。exclusive.
I think that fiction named as Snake love ,Bette as Xuxian,Tina as Baishuzhen and Alice as Xiaoqing.I always thought that Xiaoqin was the true love for Bai, cos Xiaoqin is very protective of Bai and devoted everything for Bai, just thinking,haha.
Snake Love, huh, lovely and literal. XiaoQing is one hell of a girl, isn’t she. But in this case… Alice and Tina…? I don’t find that very appealing lol.
And FYI, I’m not gonna let their first time be in the poor hotel like that in the original story. It’s just not fair. ;p
I intend it to be more well planed, more romantic.
more details on their first time，please！finger crossed！
Thank you and PPS.
Thanks for supporting. I’ll try to post soon.
great post, please Tina, tell Bette about your dad
Well, she has no intention to hurt Bette that’s for sure. But it’s a dilemma. I’m afraid it’s going to turn out not so great for the scheme. Still, I will fix it, no worries.
Ok here we go let’s heat it up some more this story is getting hot
Right on! I’m working on it ;p
That was great