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Savannah
Story written on January 22, 2012 by kins40.
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It was Tina who pulled back slightly at first, trapping Bette’s bottom lip between her teeth before letting go all together.
“Bette,” she whispered a breath away from the brunette’s lips.
Under half hooded eyes, Tina took in the splendour of her lover. Her lips were slightly swollen with the recent attention they had received, her eyes were still closed, sheltering the same comforting images. They were back into each others arms. Safe and secure and all things considered relatively unharmed.
“Bette,” Tina repeated, “ I am truly sorry for…”
Once again the accountant was interrupted but this time by the soft whispered tones of the brunette as she opened her soft brown eyes. The normal soft pupils were a darker shade but had not lost any of their intensity if anything they betrayed greater sentiments, like a book opened for all to read.
“Shhhh, No… there is nothing to apologise for.” Bette quietly explained, “Wrong place, wrong time… I will not hear anymore about any apologies."
“But,” Tina tried to insist further but again was stopped short.
“But nothing… it is over, you are in my arms now and that is all that really matters!” Bette intimated softly, moving her head back to look at Tina. Her hands left the back of her neck and descended along her arms and sides to rest on the narrow hips.
Before the blonde tried to protest once more, Bette leaned in and placed a single delicate kiss on her lips.
Drawing back once more, Bette ran her eyes on the blonde injured woman in front of her. She was beautiful even though her bruised and battered body, right now, made her appear so pathetic.
"Oh Tina,’ she murmured. Her soft gasp barely audible under the noisy deluge from the shower.
Raising her left hand from its resting place on Tina’s hip, she pulled the accountant’s head forward until their foreheads touched. Her heart suddenly started pounding hard in her chest. The closeness they were now sharing brought it all back to her. She had nearly lost Tina and although she was in no way blaming the beautiful blonde for what had happened, the glimpse of what life would have been without her, hit her in full force at that moment.
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you’re a really fantastic writer, kins 40!!! this story has been exceptional, very exciting and very well written. thanks for sharing, and… PLEASE SEQUELLL!!! :)
No matter how beautifully I write my comment I wont be able to reach your level, but I will try…….. You ARE an exceptionally brilliant writer and your stories take my breath away. Specially the way you describe Tina….. I know that I have told you this before, but I cant help it. You make everything so wonderful, full of love and tender and delicate and sensual…. I hope you post an epilogue soon and then next story. I am ready, more than ready for your next story. Love is in the air.
45 Just loved this story. Sorry to see it end, hopefully anepilogue will be wrtten. Hopefully you will grace us with another dtory soon
This was amazing. Just like ALL of your stories. I would love a sequel to this and any other stories that you will be posting. I cannot thank you enough for taking us on this wonderful journey once again with Bette and Tina. You write them so well. I can hardly wait for the next one. Cheers!
I loved the story but hate not having it to look forward to and search for
12! BRAVA! Crawling out of my cave just to say I heart this story, this happy ending, this hope-filled, new beginning. Many thanks for writing and sharing this story, kins. Looking forward to glimpses of their life together in the savannah. Cheers! =)
I really really love this story, thank you .I would love a sequell.
5! I have loved each and every chapter of this beautifully written story. As others have indicated, I too, will miss seeing updates on this one. But I will look forward to any/every future project from you. Thank you for sharing your gift with us!
23. Thanks for the update. Really enjoyed this story. Hope you come back with a new one soon.
What a truly amazing, one of a kind story..one of my all time favorites!! Thank you so much for this journey to Africa..I look forward to your next encounter!
14. Beautiful as always.
I was wondering how long you were going to make us wait for the post-penultimate(?) chapter! But it was worth the wait. Just lovely. You created a wonderful story. Now, not to be piggy or anything, but “29” IS kind of a lopsided number to end on… in case you were thinking of an Epilogue or anything…
29. The number I forgot to preface my comment with.
You left them in that shower for so long that they ran out of hot water LOL. Bad bad K ; 0 An amazing journey. This is an instant classic for me. One of those stories that I will wear the server down from reading over and over. Thank you so much and looking forward to reading more from you.
19! Loved this story from beginning to end, hope you’ve got another one ready to post kins ;)
Sad to see this end. But yet I know you will have something even more propelling and beautiful up your sleeve. You have this earnest way you write so freely and painstakingly a myriad of beautifully woven word that flow like a river. As are indeed as beautiful as the Savannah you describe. I would be number 24. Although I do not understand completely what you’ve asked of us readers but still my contribution nonetheless.
I love writers that tell a good story, your one of the better ones. Please, continue with your stories. Thank you
A million thank-you’s for this amazing and tender love story. Please do write a sequel..
23. I couldn’t help but think of the number on Tina’s letter. As for this wonderful tale, though I have been remiss in commenting, I have loved every chapter. I just watched a tv special titled “The Secret Language of Elephants” and couldn’t help but think of your Savannah. As I watched the gathering place of some 50 elephants and the woman who has spent two decades saving them, my mind wandered to your vet and her Foundation. Adorable ending with Tina admitting to Bette that she had failed her…as if that were possible! Would love to see an epilogue or random chapters. Thanks for sharing your talent!
13 – WELL DONE!!!! Sad to see this one come to an end! Perhaps the epilogue would include the new accountant and the sequel about the vet, the accountant & Ellie? thank you for sharing this with us! Hope
Truly magnificent ending. You are such an amazing writer. It has been such a pleasure following this story. Thank you so much for sharing it.
12 Amazing and thoroughly engaging story on all levels. I also saw that segment on elephants on 60 Minutes tonight and it made me think of your story.
Excellent story!
OMG I CAN’T BELIEVE THIS IS THE END,THIS STORY HAS GREAT POTENCIAL TO CONTINUE AND IN MY HUMBLE OPINION,YOU SHOULD MAKE A SEQUEL,”SAVANNAH II”.NOT ALL SEQUELS ARE BAD,WITH YOUR IMAGINATION,YOU AMAZING WRITING,YOU COULD MAKE A VERY VERY GOOD SECOND PART
6. Its a new beginning is such a wonderful start of rain season in Africa, this is the sweetest end of story ever ;DI’m sad that this amazing story end but I hope that you will gift us with new creation of yours soon. I enjoyed this story very much, I’ve been patiently waiting for the weekly updates ;D Thank you Kins40 for sharing it with us. And I think that this story can have sequel, maybe about Tina’s settling in Africa, her family reactions, the new changes in Bette’s life, I don’t know your the writer, I know you will do an amazing work once you start it ;D
**23** (sigh) Exquisite and well worth waiting for :). What a beautiful ending to an amazing story. And in true fashion you’ve kind of left us with the hope (you big tease) of an epilogue or occasional “update” down the road – my you do find new ways to reinvent the art of the cliffy now don’t you ;) I have loved every moment of this story Kins, and will look forward to anything you write in the future. A massive THANK YOU and three cheers in appreciation for you sharing Savannah with all of us! xxx iHH
10 Kins! It’s for the 10 of 10! ;-) I can’t believe that I saw word “finale” on the AN … Luckily I managed to have some internet connection as I am overseas. It’s a nice surprise to see your posting after several days being away from all this technology called internet :-p and I do welcome your idea of “situations” in the future and absolutely happy to hear about a probabilty of having epilogue after this. I hope the love, cuteness, tenderness, sweetness, and steadfastness you shared through this story of Tibette will inspired more people ;-) thanks Kins for another amazing story! :-) btw I love the way you unfold the unspoken about T’s stay in Africa, it shows that they are really fated together although it took some journey in life to reach that point. :-)
Thank you for the finale chapter, I could picture the scene with them in the window seat-with the movie Desert Hearts. I am so glad that Tina is going to stay with Bette. I Loved This Story, and I Would Love A Sequel.
3. Wonderful, beautifully written. Looking forward to more stories from you. Thanks!
52 – Thank you for another wonderful journey. This was a lovely story but then we’ve come to expect that from you. I love the way you treat TiBette regardless of the circumstances and situations that they find themselves in. I think that is what I appreciate most about your stories. Their beauty, dignity, and grace is always preserved. Thank you for respecting them and us your readers. I look forward to reading whatever you decide to do next.
This was a wonderful story Kins. Thank you for writing it. I really hope that you will continue with either an epilogue or a sequel!
It’s taken me days before I could get a moment to myself and finally read this last chapter. As I suspected, it was grilled to perfection like a fine steak! Great chapter, fantastic story, and look forward to your next creation.
That was beautiful and love it, wonderful ending!
Excellent story.Please continue writing.
I loved this story from the very beginning–your descriptions of Africa so vivid and beautiful were mesmerizing. And Bette and Tina such a gorgeous couple. Keep writing please. and thank you so much
What a fantastic ending u don’t even have to ask about the ‘savannah situations’ I will read anything u write
KINS I know you’ve heard this a million times but what can I say every time I read a chapter from you the first word to come in my mind is the word BEAUTIFUL!. Every tale that you’ve given us and every word that you’ve written always leave us breathless. I thank you for bringing us this amazing story of love and devotion and I sure look forward to reading another beautiful story from you. CHEERS MY FRIEND!
Another tibette classic. Thank you kins40. 83.
Really really love thi story, thank you fro writing and and all dedication to research! You did a great job, thank you again!
Wow !!! What a beautiful story (like the others) ! You have a magical writing. I like your Tibette stories : the L Word characters in new contexts. Your writing is getting better and better !!!! Please continue.
How wonderful was this story and I’m so sorry to see it end. Loved every word of the story and the ending was just perfect. I hope you will write the sequel or give us another story. 17 Thank you again.
Thank you so much for this story. It was wonderful and I’m going to miss it. I hope you do come up with an epilogue or a sequel. The setting in Africa is like another character in the story that I have grown to love.
10. Thank you for this wonderful story. I was sorry to see it come to its end. A sequel would always be welcome! :)
25 I have enjoyed every minute of this wonderful FF. I would very much like to read an epilogue, thank you for your talent.
I second all those emotions! What a lovely, unique story and I definitely enjoyed it. I’m rooting for an epilogue—perhaps our favorite couple may have another encounter with their elephant friend…
Hey you, Savannah Queen! What an outstanding finale!! You outdid yourself again. I like this final scene which involves so many symbols: new beginning, new life, but also cleansing and renewal. Beautiful image. I’m sad to see this story end, I got really attached to the vet and the auditor! And by the way, you’re THINKING about an epilogue??? Just THINKING??? You’re kidding me, right? This ending CALLS… No wait, it BEGS for an epilogue!!! And you’re so good with epilogues anyway! So please… Will you take us just one more time to the Savannah and our ladies? Thanks in advance. And hooooo, I’m so curious about that little project of yours… So my number will be… Hmmmm… Okay, let’s make it significant, I choose to be 37!! ;) So looking fwd to what you have in mind! Anyway, thank you so much for this story my dear, it was an amazing journey, and you never disappoint! Lkg fwd to our next adventure with you!! How are you doing these days anyway? Take care my friend! H&K, Kw
BRAVO! BRAVO!….And thank you for this adventure that you’ve taken us!
Kins thank you for this incredible journey.
Loved every chapter.
You wrote three fantastic stories: SAVANNAH, SAVANNAH-AMBER EYES,
SAVANNAH-MALAIKA, a masterpiece.
My heart TiBette thanks again.
Applause!
This story is on my list of favorites.
11 stars.