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    Story written on November 6, 2005 by buildmeupbreakmedown.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=57488
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    And she just looks at me… and smiles


    Brown hands threaded their fingers through onyx colored hair as the two women shared this moment. Carmen felt Shane’s hips grind into her as their tongues met in an intricate dance, causing her own hips to buck upwards in response; but she needed more. She began unbuttoning the white shirt, intentionally brushing her fingers on each exposed inch of smooth skin.


    Shane helped her take off the shirt and broke the kiss. Panting for air, she immediately went to remove the pink tank top. She moved herself down Carmen’s body and followed the ever increasing revelation of new caramel colored skin with searing open-mouthed kisses.


    Lifting the pink garment over Carmen’s head, they crashed into each other again in a hungry kiss, causing deep throated moans from both lovers. The throbbing between their legs was becoming unbearable. Shane reached around Carmen and pulled her into a half sitting up position so she could take off her lacy pink bra. With the skill of seasoned pro (and of course she was), she unclasped the confining piece of clothing, tossing it over her head and then she pulled away from the kiss much to Carmen’s discontent.


    It never ceased to take her breath away, that view, that body, that soul, that perfect fantasy that manifested itself into the woman she loved like she loved no one else. She would never grow tired of that sight, nor grow tired of touching her and watching her expression as she brought her to a place where she was completely enveloped in pleasure. But most of all, she would never grow tired of seeing the raw naked lust in her eyes when she pushed the right buttons… or pushed none at all.


    Currently she could see that very look in the chocolate brown orbs as crawled up the length of her, never breaking eye contact as she was pulled in closer by the intense stare.


    They were so close that their lips were touching but they weren’t kissing. Carmen took Shane’s hand in hers and brought it up to her breast, causing both of them to moan at the touch. Shane ducked her head down and nuzzled her neck, nipping at the soft skin and then lavishing it with her hot tongue while her other hand grabbed both of Carmen’s wrists and held them above her head.

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    1. i love you! that was great!….and hot hot HOT! the song was a great backdrop for the story. wow shane asking carmen’s hand in marriage. thanks for a great sharmen story!

    4. This one should definately get an award! I loved this story! Makes me wish you’d write a sequal (cos this seemed like a stand-alone?). This made my little closet-romantic heart go pitty-pat lol. Seriously, very romantic; sweet beyond words; and as wittybanter said: “hot hot HOT” and the song did fit in here. Very nice. 5 stars for ya. No doubt. So, any way I, or anyone else, could possibly persuade you to do a sequal?? :D

    5. OMG!!!! this is da coolest shane ever. DAMN!! i hope carmen n shane get it 2gether to make dis last. oh dis is da sweetest thing in da world. **teary eyed** please post soon. PEACE.

    6. OMG!!!! this is da coolest shane ever. DAMN!! i hope carmen n shane get it 2gether to make dis last. oh dis is da sweetest thing in da world. **teary eyed** please post soon. PEACE.

    11. Puppy! I’m a sucker for foof, and you’ve combined it with some hot sex. This story would be stronger without the excerpts of lyrics or whatever they are.

    12. Great story, trying to make it hard on the rest of us are you. I’m so glad you’ve joined in. I hope you continue to write and I’ll continue to read. Great story and thank you. Deb

    13. Omg.omg.omg.That’s all I’m gonna say.;) Well I lie. YOU ROCK!!!!!! Love the song, love the story. I just wonder why did Carmen start to doubt if saying yes was the right thing to do? Does she think Shane will not go trough with it? And I must say that was one hot sex scene, totally made me horny:D Update soon PLEASE!!!

    15. So damn good. Shane’s romantic side is HOT! Pleasantly surprised by the proposal. What are Carmens doubts? Are they about herself or does she feel Shane is unable to completely change for this relationship? Con’t Please

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