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    Story written on November 6, 2005 by buildmeupbreakmedown.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=57488
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    And she just looks at me… and smiles


    Oh, there we go again


    “Shane” her voice had become a breathy whimper, “Shane baby, please…”.


    She responded by rolling Carmen’s impossibly hard nipple between her finger and thumb, causing her body to arch up and press into Shane’s. She chuckled lightly and kissed her way down her neck, past her down her chest and latched on to her breast. Carmen desperately wanted to touch Shane but her hands were still kept firmly over her head, so she did the next best thing, she ground her pelvis upwards; Shane let out a deep throated groan. Breaking contact for a moment, Shane looked up to see her woman with half lidded eyes, biting her bottom lip and at that moment, Shane had never felt more turned on in her life.


    She moved upwards, her lips right next to Carmen’s ear and said in an impossibly low husky voice “What do you want me to do to you?”


    Carmen’s eyes fluttered closed as the voice reverberated throughout her entire body “Touch me”.


    “I am touching you”, Shane punctuated this point by lightly tugging on Carmen’s nipple. An act that made her breath catch in her throat.


    “Oh God, baby please, ***** me” she twisted and bucked her hips, anything to get more friction between her legs and Shane finally relented. Carmen opened her eyes and Shane released Carmen’s hands but gave her a look so that she wouldn’t move them from their current position. Carmen complied and watched as Shane sat up and pulled the zipper of her jeans down. hooking her fingers in the waistband to slide them off and throw them across the room before taking off her own pants.


    Her lacy pink panties were soaked through and Shane inhaled discretely, the scent making her dizzy with lust. She pressed her fingers against Carmen’s throbbing ***** which made her throw her head back into the pillows and suppress a whimper. “Is this because of me?”. Carmen could only nod her head, her voice completely gone as she felt the last piece of her clothing slide off her body.


    Now there was nothing between them.


    And it feels so good


    She lowered herself back onto Carmen, situated in between her legs with her right hand already circling her throbbing *****. Carmen’s arms wrapped themselves around Shane’s shoulders as she ground her hips down, trying to get more stimulation. She’d had enough of this teasing and made herself clear by nibbling on Shane’s jawline; her biggest erogenous zone next to the obvious.

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    Comments

    1. i love you! that was great!….and hot hot HOT! the song was a great backdrop for the story. wow shane asking carmen’s hand in marriage. thanks for a great sharmen story!

    4. This one should definately get an award! I loved this story! Makes me wish you’d write a sequal (cos this seemed like a stand-alone?). This made my little closet-romantic heart go pitty-pat lol. Seriously, very romantic; sweet beyond words; and as wittybanter said: “hot hot HOT” and the song did fit in here. Very nice. 5 stars for ya. No doubt. So, any way I, or anyone else, could possibly persuade you to do a sequal?? :D

    5. OMG!!!! this is da coolest shane ever. DAMN!! i hope carmen n shane get it 2gether to make dis last. oh dis is da sweetest thing in da world. **teary eyed** please post soon. PEACE.

    6. OMG!!!! this is da coolest shane ever. DAMN!! i hope carmen n shane get it 2gether to make dis last. oh dis is da sweetest thing in da world. **teary eyed** please post soon. PEACE.

    11. Puppy! I’m a sucker for foof, and you’ve combined it with some hot sex. This story would be stronger without the excerpts of lyrics or whatever they are.

    12. Great story, trying to make it hard on the rest of us are you. I’m so glad you’ve joined in. I hope you continue to write and I’ll continue to read. Great story and thank you. Deb

    13. Omg.omg.omg.That’s all I’m gonna say.;) Well I lie. YOU ROCK!!!!!! Love the song, love the story. I just wonder why did Carmen start to doubt if saying yes was the right thing to do? Does she think Shane will not go trough with it? And I must say that was one hot sex scene, totally made me horny:D Update soon PLEASE!!!

    15. So damn good. Shane’s romantic side is HOT! Pleasantly surprised by the proposal. What are Carmens doubts? Are they about herself or does she feel Shane is unable to completely change for this relationship? Con’t Please

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