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Something so right -chapter 25
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“Thanks – not as good as yours “
“Mine’s functional “
“Yours is bigger”
“I am the boss – when you are running this studio you will have a bigger office than me”
“We’ll see – what do you fancy doing ?”
“Well – I noticed that you packed your gym bag this morning and forgot it “
“I did and I’m annoyed about that “
“Well I picked it up meaning to drop it off for you but it went out of my head. I’ve got my gear in the car but my gym is closed for a couple of weeks. I called your gym and I can try their facilities out for a weeks trial. I am getting sick of my gym so why don’t we go and work out together ?”
Tina grinned “ That is really a great idea Bette – I really could do with getting sweaty “
“You have been getting sweaty “ Bette reminded her – Tina kissed Bette on the lips
“Yeah but I need to work a few other muscles “
“Sex is THE most perfect exercise – raises your heart rate “
“I can raise my heart rate just looking at you “ Tina replied
“Works all sorts of muscles “
“I am not sure if the tongue is a muscle “ Tina replied
“It is – the only muscle not attached at both ends and Ms Kennard your tongue has been getting a serious work out “
“And yours hasn’t ?”
Bette laughed
“I didn’t say that – so can you get off now so we can go ?”
“Sure – meal at my place afterwards ?”
“I was going to take you to dinner “
Tina grinned and picked up her jacket
“I like your idea best -less mess and less washing up – come on then Bette -lets see what your best times are on the rowing machine – want to bet which of us can lift the most ?”
“I don’t bet to lose “ Bette replied
“Come on – I’ll be gentle with you seeing as you were so gentle with me in bed this morning”
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Loved it AllyE, they are so very sweet together and what they do to each other, oh boy. PPS
Bette was going to get her payback on Tina. she turn the rable on Bette. It hell to wait for your payback tho. They are so cute together. thanks
Loved the scene with Helena and Bette!! And i really shouldn’t have read this at work! Awwww Hell!! Great job!
Brilliant thanks
Great chapter, I am glad Tina found her backbone and decided to go out with Bette and friends. She needs to show all the beautiful people that Bette is hers and hers alone. On to dinner and payback.
Great story ally…This is a great story…
so looking foward to the liquid scene. hope u post soon and that the next chapter will be longer because i can’t get enough of your writing.
Another absolutely perfect chapter Ally.
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Too sweet…can’t wait to see the reaction of the hussies at Liquid…TK IS TOO HOT!!!
Helena being a supportive friend for Tina was priceless. I love getting to read the sweet tender moments of Bette and Tina’s romance. And then (whoo-ee) the sizzling hot love making in the shower. Girl you know how to write it!
Wow! I shouldn’t have read this chapter at work. I enjoyed this Ally!
so so so beautiful! I love this story so much. I cant wait for the next chap. Thanks Ally!
HEY Ally, Thank you for showing a great variety of exercises that can get you all hot and bothered at the gym. Tina’s chat with Helena helped Tina deal with some of her worries re Bette’s legend status. Then Helena got to see Bette and Tina in action and was forced to admit that this pair genuinely care for each other. Wonderful writing. Then tina’s teasing of Bette. Hard to resist the image of Tina working out. Followed by the most magnificent shower scene. Mmmm. Loving everything you write. I am totally addicted to your talent and style. Many, mnay thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
That was very hot.Shower sex is always good.I hope going to Liquid is a good idea.PPS.
Please post again very soon :)
Great chapter! I’m glad to see that Helena is starting to realize that Bette is a human being and that she loves Tina. Thanks!
Hello Ally, I see you have managed to incorporate all of that time at the gym into your writing… brilliant. I absolutely love how you are unfolding this story… and I cannot wait to see if it is Tina who is showing off Bette or if it is Bette who is showing off Tina… and alas we shall have some jealousy storm out… ohh yeah… awesome stuff my friend… completely awesome. Sincerely, JC
Yay! We had a snow day..and this made my day. I like how Helena is coming around.. giving Bette a chance to prove her love for Tina. I think she will be the support Tina needs for the Liquid run. Hopefully it will go well because B/T need to show a united front especially the first time they go there together. The gym scene made me want to go work out. PPS
well that was good to read at work. way to many sick people. thx
ahhhhhh…..very nice Ally…sweet and tender and sooo sensuous and can’t wait for the club scene ;-)
Workout within a workout sounds good to me! Really liking helena in this story she is watching out for tina.. bette is winning helena over slowly! :)
That was hot and funny!