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Something so right -chapter 25
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“I just remember the first night I met her- the whole atmosphere of the place changed the minute that she walked in “
“Yeah -I have seen that -she has a tremendous aura about her “
“She gets checked out everywhere “
“And you don’t – you are no ugly duckling Kennard – you might find that there are times when you are going to be getting as many offers as Bette “
“No way “
Helena laughed “ You think not my kindergarten dyke ? I do “
“Bullshit “
“I will put it this way -you are new on the scene – that gets you a certain amount of pink points “
“Pink points ?”
“Bear with me my dear “
“Okay “- Tina smiled
“Thank you – so – you get 100 points for being new “
“Okay – do I need to get a pad and a pencil ?“
“No – so 100 points – no make that 500 – you are fresh meat -that’s a big deal “
“500 “
“Right -you are blonde and beautiful with a nice pair of breasts “
“Why thank you Helena “
“That’s good for another 300 – maybe more “
“If I get over 1000 points do I get a blender ?”
“You get a slap “
Tina chuckled “ So I have 800 points “
“You are also alpha and successful “
“Does that get me over 1000 points ?”
“Yes – plus you get the bonus “
“What’s that ?”
“You are sleeping with Bette Porter so the hyenas will take a gamble that you are hot stuff in the sack “
“So Bette’s going to be fending women off me ?”
“It might take a few weeks for them to get over the shock of Bette being taken “
“That’s not going to go down well is it ?”
“It depends – Tina – there is no point getting worked up over it -in fact – you have to chill about it. If they sense that you are anxious they will think that they are in with a chance. You need to be ultra cool and – well – you have to trust Bette “
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Loved it AllyE, they are so very sweet together and what they do to each other, oh boy. PPS
Bette was going to get her payback on Tina. she turn the rable on Bette. It hell to wait for your payback tho. They are so cute together. thanks
Loved the scene with Helena and Bette!! And i really shouldn’t have read this at work! Awwww Hell!! Great job!
Brilliant thanks
Great chapter, I am glad Tina found her backbone and decided to go out with Bette and friends. She needs to show all the beautiful people that Bette is hers and hers alone. On to dinner and payback.
Great story ally…This is a great story…
so looking foward to the liquid scene. hope u post soon and that the next chapter will be longer because i can’t get enough of your writing.
Another absolutely perfect chapter Ally.
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Too sweet…can’t wait to see the reaction of the hussies at Liquid…TK IS TOO HOT!!!
Helena being a supportive friend for Tina was priceless. I love getting to read the sweet tender moments of Bette and Tina’s romance. And then (whoo-ee) the sizzling hot love making in the shower. Girl you know how to write it!
Wow! I shouldn’t have read this chapter at work. I enjoyed this Ally!
so so so beautiful! I love this story so much. I cant wait for the next chap. Thanks Ally!
HEY Ally, Thank you for showing a great variety of exercises that can get you all hot and bothered at the gym. Tina’s chat with Helena helped Tina deal with some of her worries re Bette’s legend status. Then Helena got to see Bette and Tina in action and was forced to admit that this pair genuinely care for each other. Wonderful writing. Then tina’s teasing of Bette. Hard to resist the image of Tina working out. Followed by the most magnificent shower scene. Mmmm. Loving everything you write. I am totally addicted to your talent and style. Many, mnay thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
That was very hot.Shower sex is always good.I hope going to Liquid is a good idea.PPS.
Please post again very soon :)
Great chapter! I’m glad to see that Helena is starting to realize that Bette is a human being and that she loves Tina. Thanks!
Hello Ally, I see you have managed to incorporate all of that time at the gym into your writing… brilliant. I absolutely love how you are unfolding this story… and I cannot wait to see if it is Tina who is showing off Bette or if it is Bette who is showing off Tina… and alas we shall have some jealousy storm out… ohh yeah… awesome stuff my friend… completely awesome. Sincerely, JC
Yay! We had a snow day..and this made my day. I like how Helena is coming around.. giving Bette a chance to prove her love for Tina. I think she will be the support Tina needs for the Liquid run. Hopefully it will go well because B/T need to show a united front especially the first time they go there together. The gym scene made me want to go work out. PPS
well that was good to read at work. way to many sick people. thx
ahhhhhh…..very nice Ally…sweet and tender and sooo sensuous and can’t wait for the club scene ;-)
Workout within a workout sounds good to me! Really liking helena in this story she is watching out for tina.. bette is winning helena over slowly! :)
That was hot and funny!