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    Something so right -chapter 25

    Story written on February 22, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Tina talks to Helena and then Bette and Tina go to the gym

     

    The phone rang again -Tina got up

     

    “Hello “ she smiled and Helena knew in an instant who was on the phone

     

    “Sure – get Jerry to show her the way -and make sure she gets the pass – thanks Lara “

    Tina put the phone down

     

    “Let me guess “ Helena said dryly

     

    “Its Bette “ Tina said rather pointlessly

     

    “I guessed – has she come to slap Eric ?”

     

    “With luck he will have gone home by now. I would like to think that she would leave me to fight my own battles and only step in if she thought that it was an unfair contest “

     

    “I think Bette would wade in whether she thought it was an unfair fight or not “

     

    Tina smiled “ She probably would -she’s fantastic Helena. I know what her image is but really its not a true portrait -she is kind and gentle and I have never been treated better by anyone “

     

    Helena smiled “ I hope that continues – as long as she treats you right the two of us will get on fine “

     

    “Please Helena – I love Bette more than I thought I was capable of – she is just amazing “

     

    “If she loves you the way you say she does then nothing that happens at Liquid can harm the two of you “

     

    Five minutes later the door to Tina’s office opened

     

    “Bette Porter to see you Tina “ Lara – Tina’s Personal Secretary was grinning at Tina

     

    “Thank you Lara -you can go home – I’m finishing up “

     

    Lara stepped aside and Bette came in – Tina saw Lara standing behind Bette and give a thumbs up signal – Tina smiled before turning her attention to her lover. Tina had left for work before Bette so she hadn’t seen the brunette dressed. When Tina had given Bette farewell kiss she had been sitting at Tina’s breakfast bar drinking coffee and wearing nothing but a huge white towel. Bette was wearing a smart light grey business suit that Tina hadn’t seen yet – the black shirt underneath the jacket looked creased.

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    5. Great chapter, I am glad Tina found her backbone and decided to go out with Bette and friends. She needs to show all the beautiful people that Bette is hers and hers alone. On to dinner and payback.

    11. Helena being a supportive friend for Tina was priceless. I love getting to read the sweet tender moments of Bette and Tina’s romance. And then (whoo-ee) the sizzling hot love making in the shower. Girl you know how to write it!

    14. HEY Ally, Thank you for showing a great variety of exercises that can get you all hot and bothered at the gym. Tina’s chat with Helena helped Tina deal with some of her worries re Bette’s legend status. Then Helena got to see Bette and Tina in action and was forced to admit that this pair genuinely care for each other. Wonderful writing. Then tina’s teasing of Bette. Hard to resist the image of Tina working out. Followed by the most magnificent shower scene. Mmmm. Loving everything you write. I am totally addicted to your talent and style. Many, mnay thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

    18. Hello Ally, I see you have managed to incorporate all of that time at the gym into your writing… brilliant. I absolutely love how you are unfolding this story… and I cannot wait to see if it is Tina who is showing off Bette or if it is Bette who is showing off Tina… and alas we shall have some jealousy storm out… ohh yeah… awesome stuff my friend… completely awesome. Sincerely, JC

    19. Yay! We had a snow day..and this made my day. I like how Helena is coming around.. giving Bette a chance to prove her love for Tina. I think she will be the support Tina needs for the Liquid run. Hopefully it will go well because B/T need to show a united front especially the first time they go there together. The gym scene made me want to go work out. PPS

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