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Something so right -chapter 62
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Tina loved watching all the ways that Bette’s body reacted to her orgasm. The red flush that covered her face and neck, seeing her nipples sticking out like stalks and the look of pure bliss . All because of Tina making love to the woman who was her first and only lesbian partner. Bette opened her eyes and a contented smile spread across her face
“God you are just getting better “
“You being horny always helps “ Tina lay down half across Bette. Bette put her arm around Tina who lay her head on her lover’s shoulder.
“No – that was all your skills – you are just the best “
Tina looked up and stroked Bette’s face “I had just the most fantastic teacher. If I have great skills I get them from the best teacher in the world “
Bette closed her eyes “You have a natural talent – a wonderful pupil “
Tina watched Bette for a few minutes. They had been together for ten minutes and she knew that in that time she had changed. she was so much more confident in herself and very proud of her sexuality. She felt that meeting Bette had made her more complete – it had certainly made her more content.
“I love you Bette Porter “ Tina said softly
Bette opened her eyes and smiled “ I love you more “
“Babe ?”
“Yeah “
“I am still horny “
Bette’s grin broadened “That’s what I like to hear – fancy our favourite number ?”
“You know how to come up with the perfect solution to us being so hot “
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The next morning Tina woke up first – it was 10am and the sun was shining through the window. After having a shower she put on a robe and went into the living room to check on her brother. She was surprised that he was still lying covered up on the sofa bed. His normal time for getting up was around 6am so still being asleep at 10am was new. Tina saw why- he had drunk his six pack of beer and the empties were in a black bag at the foot of his make shift bed. He had always eaten most of the junk food he had bought. Oddly he was wearing Bette’s expensive headphones which were plugged into the hi-fi – the slightly tinny sound of a rock station came through the headphones. Tina went into the kitchen and filled the kettle so she could make some coffee and hopefully return to bed for another hour with Bette. She was just checking on how much food was in the fridge when she heard a sound. Finn was standing grinning
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Thanks for the update, Ally. I think Finn needs to leave ASAP. pps
In-laws always complicate a relationship, I think we’ve all been there. I sympathize with both points of view on this one. Finn needs to find himself a frat house, and live a little.
You know, I do understamd Bette’s disappointment about not having Tina alone all weekend as she planned, but instead of getting all bent out of shape about it, they should consider some alternatives. They are supposed to be smart people. Great update Ally!
It’s about time that Bette came around. At first i thought she was acting so grumpy b/c she needed to get laid but even after that night of passion she still woke up cranky and picking at Finn. I kow he isn’t a kid but give the guy a break. Farmboy to Cityboy is a big transition. It is kinda funny that Tina was super embarassed and Bette had no shame about Finn hearing all their love making the night before. Can’t wait to read what happens next. Hopefully three doesn’t become a crowd and start problems for TiBette. PPS!
Loving this story. IMHO> Bette’s being a little bit mean I think. Finn must think she is a B!!chThe comments about her (Tina’s) family are just wrong..
That was great and hope Finn will find a place for himself soon so B&T can be alone. Please post more, thanks!
bette is right finn needs to get some comments to himself, afterall he didnt give them any notice. tina and finn need to finish their talk so tina can see where finn is thinking of heading! awesome:)PPS
Well I agree with everybody else, he needs to keep those comments for himself, I mean he is the one who came crashing their privacy and home, what did he expect, they hold their life and love for him, I know it sounds a little harsh but it sucks when it happens to anybody who desires the comfort of home and privacy and want to enjoy it as he planned. Thanks Ally, you are incredible and every chapter you post is better than the other. Post soon please. Love
Iknow both B&T were dissapointed about Finn just showing up, but Bette needs to show a lot more maturity here. She knows how tramatized Tina was and is by her parents relationship, so she should understand Finn need to get away from the farm. Besides LA is NOT the enviornment you just someone from a farm or smaller city into. Finn could easily get involved with the wring croud as get hooked on drugs or worse. Tina is right for wanting to look out for him as he gets on his feet. They need to look for a house so that they could move into some place with more space.
I love this story!! Can’t wait to hear what you have in store for our loving couple. PPS
Bette is being more juvenile than Finn. Yes, he should gave called and he should keep the comments to himself. Neither of them are thinking clearly. If Bette still has her apartment why don’t they let Finn have that apt or Tina’s apt and they go to Bette’s. (can’t remember if Bette let her apt go). They could help him enroll in college and a dorm or help him find a job and a small place to live.But the first thing is Bette needs to act her age and stop being a snippy bitch. If she keeps that up she will turn Tina from her.Tina will not abandon her brother, nor should she. Great chapter. Post when you can.
I’m not suggesting they throw him out on the street, but neither Bette nor Tina are Finn’s mommy. The should help him either get on his feet there or to get back home, but they also need to set ground rules for him (well beyond smart alecky comments about their sex life) since he clearly doesn’t impose any on himself. And if Tina is serious about being with Bette, she needs to be more considerate of her feelings and less worried about nurturing little brother.
Love this story! Thanks for posting!
I feel sorry for B&T. Finn being there is not going to be easy. Bette has been there for Tina all along but sometime enough is enough. Thanks Great Chapter!!!