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Something so right -chapter 62
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“Hey sis “
“Hey Finn – you had a party after we went to bed “
He blushed and walked across to look in the fridge
“You got any juice ?”
Bette handed him a carton of juice which he immediately took a swig from. Tina slapped his head
“Do not do that again – that’s horrible – get a glass “
“Sorry “
“How did you sleep ?” she asked getting three cups out
“Eh – okay eventually “
“I guess its not that comfortable – I have never slept on it “
“Its fine – I was kept awake “
Tina looked at him
“Listening to Rock FM ?”
“I eh – put the radio and the headphones on because I – eh- well I could hear everything “
He was red in the face with embarrassment – Tina blushed
“You heard Bette and I making love ?”
“You are both loud “ he said
“We never usually have an audience “ Tina replied looking away
“I know – but – well it’s a small apartment and you had barely gone into your room before you started eh – moaning “
Tina couldn’t look at her brother – she had been so sex obsessed the night before that she had not thought about Finn being able to hear them. She strolled around the kitchen deliberately not looking at her brother. Finn got himself a glass and poured himself some juice. He went across to the fridge and checked it out. There was a lot of salad items, a half full bottle of white wine, some butter, a jar of jam and a few other items.
“What are you planning to do on your first day in the city ?” Tina asked when the silence got too much for her – God how had they not KNOWN that he would be able to hear them. The more she thought about it the more she shuddered. They had been loud and they had gone on for several hours driving one another to greater heights of ecstasy.
“I was hoping to just tag along with whatever you and Bette are going to do “
“We didn’t have anything planned “ Tina replied
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Thanks for the update, Ally. I think Finn needs to leave ASAP. pps
In-laws always complicate a relationship, I think we’ve all been there. I sympathize with both points of view on this one. Finn needs to find himself a frat house, and live a little.
You know, I do understamd Bette’s disappointment about not having Tina alone all weekend as she planned, but instead of getting all bent out of shape about it, they should consider some alternatives. They are supposed to be smart people. Great update Ally!
It’s about time that Bette came around. At first i thought she was acting so grumpy b/c she needed to get laid but even after that night of passion she still woke up cranky and picking at Finn. I kow he isn’t a kid but give the guy a break. Farmboy to Cityboy is a big transition. It is kinda funny that Tina was super embarassed and Bette had no shame about Finn hearing all their love making the night before. Can’t wait to read what happens next. Hopefully three doesn’t become a crowd and start problems for TiBette. PPS!
Loving this story. IMHO> Bette’s being a little bit mean I think. Finn must think she is a B!!chThe comments about her (Tina’s) family are just wrong..
That was great and hope Finn will find a place for himself soon so B&T can be alone. Please post more, thanks!
bette is right finn needs to get some comments to himself, afterall he didnt give them any notice. tina and finn need to finish their talk so tina can see where finn is thinking of heading! awesome:)PPS
Well I agree with everybody else, he needs to keep those comments for himself, I mean he is the one who came crashing their privacy and home, what did he expect, they hold their life and love for him, I know it sounds a little harsh but it sucks when it happens to anybody who desires the comfort of home and privacy and want to enjoy it as he planned. Thanks Ally, you are incredible and every chapter you post is better than the other. Post soon please. Love
Iknow both B&T were dissapointed about Finn just showing up, but Bette needs to show a lot more maturity here. She knows how tramatized Tina was and is by her parents relationship, so she should understand Finn need to get away from the farm. Besides LA is NOT the enviornment you just someone from a farm or smaller city into. Finn could easily get involved with the wring croud as get hooked on drugs or worse. Tina is right for wanting to look out for him as he gets on his feet. They need to look for a house so that they could move into some place with more space.
I love this story!! Can’t wait to hear what you have in store for our loving couple. PPS
Bette is being more juvenile than Finn. Yes, he should gave called and he should keep the comments to himself. Neither of them are thinking clearly. If Bette still has her apartment why don’t they let Finn have that apt or Tina’s apt and they go to Bette’s. (can’t remember if Bette let her apt go). They could help him enroll in college and a dorm or help him find a job and a small place to live.But the first thing is Bette needs to act her age and stop being a snippy bitch. If she keeps that up she will turn Tina from her.Tina will not abandon her brother, nor should she. Great chapter. Post when you can.
I’m not suggesting they throw him out on the street, but neither Bette nor Tina are Finn’s mommy. The should help him either get on his feet there or to get back home, but they also need to set ground rules for him (well beyond smart alecky comments about their sex life) since he clearly doesn’t impose any on himself. And if Tina is serious about being with Bette, she needs to be more considerate of her feelings and less worried about nurturing little brother.
Love this story! Thanks for posting!
I feel sorry for B&T. Finn being there is not going to be easy. Bette has been there for Tina all along but sometime enough is enough. Thanks Great Chapter!!!