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Something so right -chapter 62
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“How can you not have anything planned for a weekend ?”
“Because Bette didn’t tell me until last night that she was going to have the weekend free and when she did our plans were to….“
Tina trailed off – how to tell your kid brother that her entire weekend was going to be solely devoted to the glorious body of her lover ? She couldn’t – instead she looked at him
“What are you going to do while you are here ? You cannot have come here with no plans whatsoever “
“I told you – find myself a job and get on with a new life “
“Finn – sit down “
He obeyed her sitting at the breakfast bar and sipping his juice while wondering if it would be rude to tell Tina that he was really hungry.
“I think its about time you told me what all this is about – why have you left the farm – what has happened ?”
He scratched his growth of beard
“I just thought it was time that I made the break. Willow is definitely going to college in the fall and I could see myself being on the farm for the rest of my life. I love farming -I love the wide open spaces and just how beautiful the farm is. You remember that don’t you Tina ?”
“I do – I had the pictures developed of when Bette and I were there and some of the sunsets are just enough to take your breath away. Of course I know how beautiful the farm and all the countryside surrounding it is “
“I love it but I was starting to resent it – I really want to see some of the world “
“You think mom and dad wouldn’t understand ?”
I know that in principle they would but it was never going to be the right time – spring would be planting crops and working with the animals, summer – well that’s a crazy time of year because off the crops – fall is hard because we harvest and take the animals to market – when would it be the right time for me to leave ?”
“I know – it is a life that is determined by the weather and crops and live stock “
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Thanks for the update, Ally. I think Finn needs to leave ASAP. pps
In-laws always complicate a relationship, I think we’ve all been there. I sympathize with both points of view on this one. Finn needs to find himself a frat house, and live a little.
You know, I do understamd Bette’s disappointment about not having Tina alone all weekend as she planned, but instead of getting all bent out of shape about it, they should consider some alternatives. They are supposed to be smart people. Great update Ally!
It’s about time that Bette came around. At first i thought she was acting so grumpy b/c she needed to get laid but even after that night of passion she still woke up cranky and picking at Finn. I kow he isn’t a kid but give the guy a break. Farmboy to Cityboy is a big transition. It is kinda funny that Tina was super embarassed and Bette had no shame about Finn hearing all their love making the night before. Can’t wait to read what happens next. Hopefully three doesn’t become a crowd and start problems for TiBette. PPS!
Loving this story. IMHO> Bette’s being a little bit mean I think. Finn must think she is a B!!chThe comments about her (Tina’s) family are just wrong..
That was great and hope Finn will find a place for himself soon so B&T can be alone. Please post more, thanks!
bette is right finn needs to get some comments to himself, afterall he didnt give them any notice. tina and finn need to finish their talk so tina can see where finn is thinking of heading! awesome:)PPS
Well I agree with everybody else, he needs to keep those comments for himself, I mean he is the one who came crashing their privacy and home, what did he expect, they hold their life and love for him, I know it sounds a little harsh but it sucks when it happens to anybody who desires the comfort of home and privacy and want to enjoy it as he planned. Thanks Ally, you are incredible and every chapter you post is better than the other. Post soon please. Love
Iknow both B&T were dissapointed about Finn just showing up, but Bette needs to show a lot more maturity here. She knows how tramatized Tina was and is by her parents relationship, so she should understand Finn need to get away from the farm. Besides LA is NOT the enviornment you just someone from a farm or smaller city into. Finn could easily get involved with the wring croud as get hooked on drugs or worse. Tina is right for wanting to look out for him as he gets on his feet. They need to look for a house so that they could move into some place with more space.
I love this story!! Can’t wait to hear what you have in store for our loving couple. PPS
Bette is being more juvenile than Finn. Yes, he should gave called and he should keep the comments to himself. Neither of them are thinking clearly. If Bette still has her apartment why don’t they let Finn have that apt or Tina’s apt and they go to Bette’s. (can’t remember if Bette let her apt go). They could help him enroll in college and a dorm or help him find a job and a small place to live.But the first thing is Bette needs to act her age and stop being a snippy bitch. If she keeps that up she will turn Tina from her.Tina will not abandon her brother, nor should she. Great chapter. Post when you can.
I’m not suggesting they throw him out on the street, but neither Bette nor Tina are Finn’s mommy. The should help him either get on his feet there or to get back home, but they also need to set ground rules for him (well beyond smart alecky comments about their sex life) since he clearly doesn’t impose any on himself. And if Tina is serious about being with Bette, she needs to be more considerate of her feelings and less worried about nurturing little brother.
Love this story! Thanks for posting!
I feel sorry for B&T. Finn being there is not going to be easy. Bette has been there for Tina all along but sometime enough is enough. Thanks Great Chapter!!!