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    Something so right – chapter 82

    Story written on April 26, 2009 by allyemmerson.
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    Bette, Tina and Mrs Porter

     

     

    “Please Tina – I do love her “

     

     

    Tina nodded “The scars of you walking away from her run very deeply with her – you have no idea what it did to her – you have no concept of how it shaped her”

     

     

    “I know that you two are really close “

     

     

    “Unless you have been stalking us you cannot know “

     

     

    “I know from how you were looking at her – how you have been protecting her – that tells me everything. I am at the top of what I do – I am extremely rich – I didn’t get where I am by not making accurate assessments of situations with limited amount of time. I can see that you two adore one another. I like you “

     

     

    Tina didn’t comment “ One of us will be in touch – I am not being rude but I need to go to Bette “

     

     

    “I understand – thank you Tina “

     

     

    Tina nodded and went back into the house – Bette was missing. Tina looked in the bedroom- she wasn’t there. There was only one place she would be – she was sitting outside at the edge of the decking crying. Tina sat down and put her arms around her lover. Bette gave a loud cry and started sobbing harder

     

     

    “Its okay babe “

     

     

    “What the hell is she doing ? Why is she here ? What was she talking about – trust funds and her paying for my college education – shit Tina “

     

     

    “I have no idea how you are feeling Bette “

     

     

    Tina hugged Bette tight – stroking her back and comforting her the best way she could. After about ten minutes of embracing Bette eased away and touched Tina’s face

     

     

    “Thank you “

     

     

    “Team work “ Tina reminded her

     

     

    “God babe- what the hell just happened ?”

     

     

    “I wish I knew “

     

     

    Tina put her hands on Bette’s face and softly kissed her. Bette returned the kiss before leaning back and sighing

     

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    1. Great Update!!! I love the twist you have put to this story. Now let us see if Melvin will tell Bette the truth. I hope Bette gives her mother a chance. Thank you Ally PPVS

    3. So Melvin’s a big fat liar huh? I’m interested to see why her mom stayed away so long. I like Tina standing up for Bette. Great story! Thanks for posting!

    6. I know Bette is pisssed, well probably more than pissed at her mom but I think she should at least listen to what she has to say. If Melvin has been untruthful to her all these years what makes her think he will tell her everything now? I don’t think her mom is trying to buy her affection how could she after 27 years. Speak to her mom and see what she has to say about why she left without her all those years ago and then talk to her dad and see if any of the story matches. Most mothers will not leave thier children unless something horribl ecauses them to. I hope Bette gets all her answers she deserves it and I’m glad Tina is right there by her side. PPS

    7. Nice twist girl. I think that Bette should talk to her mother to see exactly what she has to say. She has listen to Melvin all of her life and this way she will be comming from a position of strength and knowledge when she speaks to Melvin. At least her mother is adcepting of her and Tina as a couple. PPS:o).

    8. I would like to hear the reason Bette’s mother for abandoning her. Must be big if she schose to stayed away all those years. Is she sick? :D And the trust fund ha….curious…LOL

    12. Melvin’s ass is minced meat. I hope B lays into him. I hope Bette talks to her mother and finds out what really happened. Tina is one tough cookie, taking no shit from Mrs. P. Great update. PPS. I’m loving it.

    15. Holy cow, now this twist takes the story down a whole new avenue. I like the intrigue that you have introduced to this Ally. Can’t wait for the next addition!

    18. Ally, you are such a wild genius. This is such a superb twist. I love the way you make Bette and Tina dig deeper into their lives together. Thank you for giving us so much to chew on!

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