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Something so right – chapter 82
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“You don’t understand how complicated things were with Melvin and I. Until you do you should not leap to conclusions “
“I am leaping to conclusions based on how well I know Bette and I know what your absence has done to her. I am not interested in ancient history – my concern is first and foremost for Bette who as you said earlier is my partner – my life partner “ Tina defended her stance.
“Tina is right – why now ?”
“Why not ? You are my daughter and I wanted to get to know you and somehow spend some time with you “
“I cannot deal with this “ Bette stood up – she was close to tears “This is too much “
“I think you should go “
“Bette – please sweetie “
“No “ Bette was standing crying
“Its okay “ Tina got up and regarded Elizabeth Porter “ I think you should go “
“I haven’t explained – I haven’t said “
“You have said enough “Tina said “Please leave “
“Bette – please “
Tina moved towards her lover’s mother
“Please don’t make this harder for her “ she said quietly
The older woman looked between her sobbing daughter and the calm persona of Tina.
“Leave “ Tina repeated “I will show you out “
“I am sorry Bette – I never meant to hurt you “
Bette was covering her face sobbing – Tina put her hand on Elizabeth’s back and escorted her to the front door. The two women stepped outside
“You couldn’t have expected her to be thrilled to see you “
“I knew it would be a shock for her – I guess I misunderstood how deep her pain went “
“You did – give me your phone number – I’ll talk to her but its her call not mine “
The older woman handed Tina a business card – Tina didn’t look at it – she just put it in her pocket – she wanted to get back to her distraught lover.
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Great Update!!! I love the twist you have put to this story. Now let us see if Melvin will tell Bette the truth. I hope Bette gives her mother a chance. Thank you Ally PPVS
TAKE THE MONEY AND RUN!!!!!!! LOL!
So Melvin’s a big fat liar huh? I’m interested to see why her mom stayed away so long. I like Tina standing up for Bette. Great story! Thanks for posting!
Drama, drama, drama! Wonder what the real truth is. PPS:)
You write so well, reading your stories is always a pleasure. Love how Tina takes care of Bette.
I know Bette is pisssed, well probably more than pissed at her mom but I think she should at least listen to what she has to say. If Melvin has been untruthful to her all these years what makes her think he will tell her everything now? I don’t think her mom is trying to buy her affection how could she after 27 years. Speak to her mom and see what she has to say about why she left without her all those years ago and then talk to her dad and see if any of the story matches. Most mothers will not leave thier children unless something horribl ecauses them to. I hope Bette gets all her answers she deserves it and I’m glad Tina is right there by her side. PPS
Nice twist girl. I think that Bette should talk to her mother to see exactly what she has to say. She has listen to Melvin all of her life and this way she will be comming from a position of strength and knowledge when she speaks to Melvin. At least her mother is adcepting of her and Tina as a couple. PPS:o).
I would like to hear the reason Bette’s mother for abandoning her. Must be big if she schose to stayed away all those years. Is she sick? :D And the trust fund ha….curious…LOL
Oh Wow! Twist twist twist! Thank you for this. Hope you’re doing ok! :)
drama coming! :)PPS
Nice twist!!
Melvin’s ass is minced meat. I hope B lays into him. I hope Bette talks to her mother and finds out what really happened. Tina is one tough cookie, taking no shit from Mrs. P. Great update. PPS. I’m loving it.
Both you and IC love drama. But yours actually makes sense and adds to the story while hers is usually WTF!!!
Nice! I want to learn more about the mysterious Mrs. Porter! Good to see T has Bette’s back. PPS!
Holy cow, now this twist takes the story down a whole new avenue. I like the intrigue that you have introduced to this Ally. Can’t wait for the next addition!
Wow this is big and drama keep coming, B&T have alot to do now. Please post more, thanks!
Ally…all caught up…waiting for more great updates on any story…pps
Ally, you are such a wild genius. This is such a superb twist. I love the way you make Bette and Tina dig deeper into their lives together. Thank you for giving us so much to chew on!
I think Melvin has some ‘splaining to do. I wonder who’s version is closer to the truth.
hmmm…. my moneys on the mom. but well see. thx