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Thank you, For changing my life. Chapter 12
“Oh wow she looks hot, and I’m straight” Kit said
Just then Bette turned around and saw the most breath taking site she had ever seen, Bette’s breath caught in her throat and she felt her pulse quicken
“Wow” Bette said barley a whisper, No one had ever stirred the kinds of emotions Bette was experiencing right now, and Bette had been in the company of vey beautiful women but seeing Tina again dressed to kill just took her breath away.
Just then she they saw a Helena whisper something in Tina’s ear and Tina let out a laugh and a big smile came across her face. Helena looked over a pointed at someone
“Tina, there’s mummy lets go say hi”
“Ok, Helena”
Helena rested her palm on the lower back of the blonde as she led her to where Peggy was standing
Bette felt the heat rise up to her cheeks she didn’t know what she was feeling, she wanted to go over and punch the brunette that was touching, leading Tina around and making smile like that.
As Tina was chatting to the older Peabody and shaking hands with other people she was meeting at the party she looked around and saw her friends talking in a corner, that’s when she saw her. ‘God, she’s so beautiful’ Tina thought about Bette, ‘so sexy’ Bette was wearing a dark blue pin stripped pant suit with a light pink dress shirt that looked great against her Mocha skin, and these 4 inch pumps that made her look even more statuesque ‘So damn perfect all those curls’ Damn, Tina thought to herself get a grip You haven’t even talked to her in so long why does she still make me feel this way.
“Helena I see the girls, I’m going to go say hi” Tina said “Will you please excuse me” Tina said to the group in front of her.
“Ok Tina I’ll find you” Helena said
Tina excused herself and walked over to where the girls were standing, Bette felt her approaching she felt all the hairs on the back of her neck stand as Bette turned she noticed all the heads Tina was turning.
Shane leaned in and whispered in Bette’s ear. ”She doesn’t even know the effect she has on people, Bette she is so unaware of her beauty”
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Damn I love this story! I felt like I was standing in the room watching it happen. Ilm thinkin’ Bette better come clean quickly or she’ll miss out! PPS!
This is so good, more please. I really want some Helena and Tina time, I mean bette does not deserve Tina, she was an asshole, a big one.PPS
First off, Bette needs some serious help. Tina spends the night with her and she doesn’t even have the manners to check with her friends to see how she’s doing — in seven months??? That is the height of self-absorption. I could understand that Bette may not contact her personally but not asking Shane or Alice about her? Frankly, she deserves to have some difficulty capturing Tina’s heart after being such a ninny for so long. She’s definitely going to have competition – particularly now that Helena has figured out her interest in Tina. This story just keeps getting more interesting… I hope you post again soon. You left us hanging at the party! I am requesting at least one private moment with Tina and Bette at the party… :>)
Hated that Helena was the one to see Bette’s looking at Tina with such love and lust. She can be a witch. Let Bette go after Tina tonight xont stop to think just do it. thanks
Gee, how did I miss this story? Can’t believe it, so glad I caught up. Took me a good part of my Sunday LOL. My little heart broke for Tina because of Bette’s behaviour that night they shared together but I love seeing what became of the little innocent T, it made her stronger and changed her life but yet she remained this sweet and caring person. Gosh, I love how you portrayed her in this story
I wasn’t done with my comment, stupid computer! Anyway, hope Bette will suffer for a little while and chase after Tina, that girl deserves to be wooed. Hope that Helena won’t cause any big problems. Thanks for sharing this great story ILM!
Bette said the wrong thing to Helena because she can be a first class b–ch and will not mind rubbing Bette’s nose in it. Bette and Tina need to talk very soon and Bette needs to reign the green-eyed monster that has taken up residence in her mind. Helena will be merciless in her attack. PPS
Bette said the wrong thing to Helena because she can be a first class b–ch and will not mind rubbing Bette’s nose in it. Bette and Tina need to talk very soon and Bette needs to reign the green-eyed monster that has taken up residence in her mind. Helena will be merciless in her attack. PPS
yey! i did my happy dance when i saw you posted!! Brilliant chapter, as always, glad Bettes acknowledging her feelings…now go get her!!
Yes..love this story… go Bette go get Tina! YES! YES! Please post when you can! :D
thank you *clap* *clap* *clap* PPS!! really soon
very beautiful story!!! PPS!!!
Fight…fight…fight!! LOL! Hmm, Bette has to make a play for Tina but I’m not sure how she’s going to find time now that she has 2 magazines to focus on…We need Hels to disappear (not that I don’t like her I just prefer the T&B combo)
Looks like Helena is going to put up a good fight for Tina’s affection. I just hope she plays fair co’z I really like her in this story. She’s not tainted yet, so to speak. Bette needs to act fast now. Thanks!
So happy there was an update – Great Chapter! Nice to see Tina worried that she has lost weight and is rundown – she should to take care of Bette. Maybe now Bette can come to terms with her feelings and go after Tina – nothing like a little competition to light a fire and need i say “let the games begin”. Need more – soon – PPS !
I felt like I was in the room…what an amazing story. I can’t wait for more.
Oh my god ! With whom will the lady in red be dancing ?Everything is settled for a bit of drama. Hope Bette will get her girl ! Can’t wait to read the next chapter.
Alpha Tina but still sweet and kind to her friends. Still humble inspite of her success. I think it’s time for Bette to realize that she will loose Tina eventually if she doesn’t find a way of pouring out what’s in her heart, especially now that Helena knows her yearning. Helena will double the effort of making Tina like her…..I love this story and thank you for posting….waiting for the next post pls.
hmm…so Helena is on to you Bette, but I’m not so sure she has your best interest at heart! Hope B & T get together soon and catch up and stop avoiding each other! PPS
Bette is missing out…she has to play catch up soon
Maybe Helena will tell Tina she has an admirer and look over at Bette and then Tina will be all “alpha” and make her move… I can try, right? PPS
Busted! I hope Helena’s intentions are honorable, but I dunno? Bette needs her some T.
Bette’s feelings have been discovered…I hope Helena isn’t a bitch :S I love this story Please post soon :D
I think Helena is just looking out for Tina. I don’t think Tina will allow herself to give in to Bette again so easily!! PPS
Hmmm the plot thickins. I was a chapter behind because of the title of the last one, so is Helena a decent person that will let the best woman win or will she be an uberbitch and play dirty? PPS
Hmmm the plot thickins. I was a chapter behind because of the title of the last one, so is Helena a decent person that will let the best woman win or will she be an uberbitch and play dirty? PPS
i guess bette and tina’s fate is in your hands…are you a drama queen or a sucker for happy ever after..lol…please post soon.
great story, bette getting jealous is understandable and i wish she will step up soonn. please post soon!
Ohh what the hell is Helena up to now!