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The Most Distance Course

“So…Where’s Ms. Lerner tonight?” Bette asks, but of course, she just asks out of courtesy, she doesn’t care the blonde a tiny bit.
“She’s taking her meds, surely.” Carmen drinks her champagne, doesn’t even shows a hint of care. ”There is a batch of new goods coming from China recently, as the new head of the drug, I reckon that you are pretty aware of it.”
Yes, the China White, Mr. Wang gave some to Bette for a try, how could she not know? The pure and powerful white powder, first produced in Germany as medical use, slowly, they found out the ”High” feeling brought on by this was irreplaceable, it gradually turned into the drug abuse. They call it ”Heroin”.
Aside from cocaine, it’s now become the world most rampant drug. During those days when the handover of Hong Kong, various forces in order to keep their profit, A great amount of Heroin smuggled heavily to the China Town in the United States, drove the state polices crazy at that time.
Carmen has this amazing enchantment for both men and women, whoever looks at her smile will fall for her instantly, plus, her unknown past increases the mystery around her, full of incentive.
“What a party.” Bette let out a huge sigh.
“I agree with you, the polite name for this inauguration is technically a private gathering party, no other time is better than meeting other bosses than this.”
”I thought Cooper Boss seldom put his oar in the business?” Bette asks.
“Oh, he didn’t, actually he hate to deal with those snobs, it was Justine who always did the work…but he has no choice, making some friends is the only thing he can do to keep his standing.”
Bette makes a confused smile. “What do you mean?”
“A storm is coming, my friend, everyone in this manor knew it, there is a plot, hatching with secrecy in this organization. God knows who and what they’re cooking up behind the scenes.”
Bette swallows a lump in her throat, she doesn’t sure what she is talking about, but surely this smart woman must be implying something.
“How do you know?”
Carmen makes a light chuckle, to Bette’s surprise, she doesn’t feel uncomfortable about it, what is more, she feels a sense of familiar from the Latino.
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Hi CJ,
That was such a beautiful chapter!!
They connected, heart, body and soul. And now my wish for them is to make the dream of Tina come true.
Let them live their life, happy, full of love and with their future children, but i don’t think that will happen soon.
I needed this chapter full of love and connecting between our girls!!!
Thank you so much for the update!!!!
HI Bibi28:
I love the interaction between Bette and Tina, I spent double times to finish it just to make it better. There were so many good bed scene in other writer’s story, I was so afraid I would ruin it.
Yes, this chapter they finally clarify their feelings and came clean to each other, a good relationship always contains a good conversation, I like when they both able to listen and understand the others feeling.
I will try to write more these kind of chapter but the story must go on, and I’m so sorry for letting you guys waited for so long, don’t worry the loving Tibette will continue for a while.
Thanks for your reply, Bibi, again, I’m so glad you like this story and have you as a reader, hope to see you next week!
CJ
I am so glad that you write this incredible story CJ!!!
I have to work next weekend, but i will try to read the next chapter asap!!!!
Hi! Thanks for the great chapter!
Finally! And great job to put kiss from s5 in your story, and picture too!
Waiting find more about what police found.
Hi Zhenya:
Thanks for your comment!
Yeah, I love that scene in season 5 and was the only one I yelled “Yes!” so loud that my mom asked if there’s something happened.
What do you think the police found? Welcome to give a guest?
CJ
Hm, i think it’s or prostitutes who worked on organization or illegal emigrants who wanted to land in US
Hi CJ:
Wonderful chapter. As you said before, there is a turning point between this chapter and the former one.
It’s not a coincidence that it comes along with the change in Bette’s strength and maturity, and with Tina’s softness when learning that Bette was at her side in her room while she was recovering.
I’m not very sure what Carmen meant when she talked to Bette, about Tina and told her “Don’t trust Justine…She’s more…crafty and elusive, than you thought”; is it because Tina has involved Bette as one of the criminal heads in this organization? Is Tina trying to have more heads in the command to give the big blow? Certainly, Carmen knows something it’s being cooked in the criminal organization, but where are her loyalties?
I like Tina’s dreams, whatever they could be possible or not, and I like that they talked and came clear about high school, about Bette’s remorse for the suicidal girl.
This loving break in the story was very needed, and now we’ll see what it’ll come.
The women bodies that were found buried and that will involve Cooper’s organization, are they related to human trafficking? This is a topic that I’m researching too.
Great story CJ, I’ll be waiting for the next weekend for more.
P
Hi proteonomics:
Just like you said, Tina didn’t know whether Bette had feelings to her or not, and Bette, I also think that she really want to change who she was, she did what she can do and stayed beside Tina. During Tina’s recovery, what she needed most was not any strong medicine, Bette’s accompany was what she needed the most.
Just like I said in chapter 15, Tina is not the only candidate to inherit the company, the six heads also have the chance to become the boss, Carmen was a brilliant woman who could survive in the organization for so long, she must figure out something and want Bette to be careful, as one of the heads, Bette is on the same bridge with her. It’s not weird if Carmen guard against Tina.
Among all the story, I think Bette’s biggest progress was to confirm what she had done, admit mistakes is the most difficult things after making something wrong.
Sadly to say, no, it has nothing to do with the human traffic, but certainly has something to do with one of the six heads, I will slowly reveal it in the next two weeks.
Thank you so much, proteonomics, your comment is always what I’ve been waiting for, make my story better every time. I’m also very looking forward to your next chapter! Again, Thanks for your comment!
CJ
It’s a lovely chapter,it broke my heart learning how hard life for Tina after she left the school, wish everything didnt have to turn that way, but happy that she finally could have her Bette back in her life and love her back as she love her in return. Wondering why Tina’s body was fragile, why she is sick? What kind of illness does she has that might cost her her life?
Anyway..well done CJ..tks for sharing your work :)
Hi Silentreader:
So good to see you!
Yes, Tina has been through a long hard life in these five years, Bette also didn’t live an easy life, I know the story has gone for a while, but there is still a long way to go for Tina and Bette’s settle life.
Tina’s health is the saddest thing I’ve written, it’s in the next chapter, I really hope things didn’t need to go that way, but it’s the reason why Tina has to stay in the organization.
Thanks for the waiting and the comment! Hope to see you next week.
CJ
Thank you for this great Chapter which was just what was needed.
I am still concerned about so many things in the story and look forward for the rest of the story to unfold and, I hope, put my concerns to rest! I can but hope I am in your talented hands.
Please post soon.
SG
Hi SassyGran:
I’m sorry for letting you wait for so long, it’s a lovely chapter but tough to write,
I will try my very best to give them both a good ending, but the rainbow after the rainstorm is always the most beautiful, there still are lots of quests they need to face.
Be patient and wait for the smart Tina to start her plan! Thanks for your comment and hope to see you next week!
CJ
I hope those bodies belonged to Adele and Kelly, :P
Great story Crystal. Cant wait for next week.
Hi AReader:
Great guess! But no, it will be too easy for those two. No worries, they will be in the future chapter.
Thanks for the comment!
CJ