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The Most Distance Course
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“Which is?”
“Don’t trust Justine…She’s more…crafty and elusive, then you thought.”
Bette raises her eyebrow, waiting for the Latino to explain more. Instead, Carmen just gives her a lovely smile, then she heads on her way to find Shane. While Bette sits at her position, confused as hell.
She watches the big “Mama” walks seductively to Shane and gives her a light kiss. Bette instantly feels the sad emotions pour out of her heart, how she wishes she can kiss Tina like that.
“Hey.”
“Oh, hey, Shane.” Bette smiles and looks at the Yoda, who just walks to her for greeting the new drug lord. From this day, Bette’s position in the organization is higher than Shane.
“Having a good time?”
“Not exactly.”
“I guess our boss breathes down your neck, huh?”
“You have no idea.” Bette says as she drinks her bear. “So…you and Carmen, huh?”
“Yeah…she’s amazing, the most beautiful girl I’ve ever met.”
And weird. Bette thinks.
“Well, I’ll have to leave you here, you know…”
“You don’t say.” Bette winks to her.
“I’m in my room if you need help.” Shane laughs.
“Yeah, Iike I want to see you have sex.”
“Hey! Don’t you ruin the surprise.”
“You’re welcome.” Bette raises her bottle to the brunette, watching her disappear with Carmen in the corner.
Around eleven, most of the guest starts to leave. Bette also decided to call it a day, she’s been worn out with civility.
But when she steps into her room, the pile of papers reminds her that she has a big deal she needs to handle on Monday, the first troops of the Triad will arrive, including one of the ”Dragonhead”, Bette has to greet them formally as one of the leaders of Cooper Organization.
She groans at loads of works, she really needs a good rest.
Ever since she came back from her first mission, Aaron vented all his anger on Bette, oral abusing her for ignoring the superior instruction. Bette had explained to him the entire situation. When she mentioned all this thing happened in Shanghai, and all the information about Hong Kong and other place were just using as bait for find out the spy, it did calm him down, but not long enough then he started to nag about the after the meeting. Why didn’t she report after she knew where she was? Why didn’t she told FBI where they actually trade the goods? And when she told him that Tom Mater was dead and she’s the new drug lord of the Cooper organization, and the goods were traded in Triad’s headquarter, she hung up the phone at once.
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Hi CJ,
That was such a beautiful chapter!!
They connected, heart, body and soul. And now my wish for them is to make the dream of Tina come true.
Let them live their life, happy, full of love and with their future children, but i don’t think that will happen soon.
I needed this chapter full of love and connecting between our girls!!!
Thank you so much for the update!!!!
HI Bibi28:
I love the interaction between Bette and Tina, I spent double times to finish it just to make it better. There were so many good bed scene in other writer’s story, I was so afraid I would ruin it.
Yes, this chapter they finally clarify their feelings and came clean to each other, a good relationship always contains a good conversation, I like when they both able to listen and understand the others feeling.
I will try to write more these kind of chapter but the story must go on, and I’m so sorry for letting you guys waited for so long, don’t worry the loving Tibette will continue for a while.
Thanks for your reply, Bibi, again, I’m so glad you like this story and have you as a reader, hope to see you next week!
CJ
I am so glad that you write this incredible story CJ!!!
I have to work next weekend, but i will try to read the next chapter asap!!!!
Hi! Thanks for the great chapter!
Finally! And great job to put kiss from s5 in your story, and picture too!
Waiting find more about what police found.
Hi Zhenya:
Thanks for your comment!
Yeah, I love that scene in season 5 and was the only one I yelled “Yes!” so loud that my mom asked if there’s something happened.
What do you think the police found? Welcome to give a guest?
CJ
Hm, i think it’s or prostitutes who worked on organization or illegal emigrants who wanted to land in US
Hi CJ:
Wonderful chapter. As you said before, there is a turning point between this chapter and the former one.
It’s not a coincidence that it comes along with the change in Bette’s strength and maturity, and with Tina’s softness when learning that Bette was at her side in her room while she was recovering.
I’m not very sure what Carmen meant when she talked to Bette, about Tina and told her “Don’t trust Justine…She’s more…crafty and elusive, than you thought”; is it because Tina has involved Bette as one of the criminal heads in this organization? Is Tina trying to have more heads in the command to give the big blow? Certainly, Carmen knows something it’s being cooked in the criminal organization, but where are her loyalties?
I like Tina’s dreams, whatever they could be possible or not, and I like that they talked and came clear about high school, about Bette’s remorse for the suicidal girl.
This loving break in the story was very needed, and now we’ll see what it’ll come.
The women bodies that were found buried and that will involve Cooper’s organization, are they related to human trafficking? This is a topic that I’m researching too.
Great story CJ, I’ll be waiting for the next weekend for more.
P
Hi proteonomics:
Just like you said, Tina didn’t know whether Bette had feelings to her or not, and Bette, I also think that she really want to change who she was, she did what she can do and stayed beside Tina. During Tina’s recovery, what she needed most was not any strong medicine, Bette’s accompany was what she needed the most.
Just like I said in chapter 15, Tina is not the only candidate to inherit the company, the six heads also have the chance to become the boss, Carmen was a brilliant woman who could survive in the organization for so long, she must figure out something and want Bette to be careful, as one of the heads, Bette is on the same bridge with her. It’s not weird if Carmen guard against Tina.
Among all the story, I think Bette’s biggest progress was to confirm what she had done, admit mistakes is the most difficult things after making something wrong.
Sadly to say, no, it has nothing to do with the human traffic, but certainly has something to do with one of the six heads, I will slowly reveal it in the next two weeks.
Thank you so much, proteonomics, your comment is always what I’ve been waiting for, make my story better every time. I’m also very looking forward to your next chapter! Again, Thanks for your comment!
CJ
It’s a lovely chapter,it broke my heart learning how hard life for Tina after she left the school, wish everything didnt have to turn that way, but happy that she finally could have her Bette back in her life and love her back as she love her in return. Wondering why Tina’s body was fragile, why she is sick? What kind of illness does she has that might cost her her life?
Anyway..well done CJ..tks for sharing your work :)
Hi Silentreader:
So good to see you!
Yes, Tina has been through a long hard life in these five years, Bette also didn’t live an easy life, I know the story has gone for a while, but there is still a long way to go for Tina and Bette’s settle life.
Tina’s health is the saddest thing I’ve written, it’s in the next chapter, I really hope things didn’t need to go that way, but it’s the reason why Tina has to stay in the organization.
Thanks for the waiting and the comment! Hope to see you next week.
CJ
Thank you for this great Chapter which was just what was needed.
I am still concerned about so many things in the story and look forward for the rest of the story to unfold and, I hope, put my concerns to rest! I can but hope I am in your talented hands.
Please post soon.
SG
Hi SassyGran:
I’m sorry for letting you wait for so long, it’s a lovely chapter but tough to write,
I will try my very best to give them both a good ending, but the rainbow after the rainstorm is always the most beautiful, there still are lots of quests they need to face.
Be patient and wait for the smart Tina to start her plan! Thanks for your comment and hope to see you next week!
CJ
I hope those bodies belonged to Adele and Kelly, :P
Great story Crystal. Cant wait for next week.
Hi AReader:
Great guess! But no, it will be too easy for those two. No worries, they will be in the future chapter.
Thanks for the comment!
CJ