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    The Most Distance Course

    “Do you actually believe that Tom’s disposal was a coincidence?” Carmen smiles.

    “What…? I thought he’s being fired because of his own behaviors.”

    “He did,” Carmen gets herself a second drink. “But he has worked in the field for what, five…six years? He shouldn’t have made these mistakes, should he?”

    Bette is stunned. Seeing the brunette’s face, Carmen chuckles again.

    “Don’t worry, this is just my guess, my girls always say I have an accurate sixth sense, but who knows? Maybe it’s just me overthinking…My words didn’t ruin your night, did I?”

    “No, not at all.”

    “Good then.” Carmen grins happily while drinks her beverage, Bette feels that she’s not yet to end this conversation.

    “I’m sorry, why me?” Bette asks.

    “Pardon?” Carmen remains her smile

    “Why did you tell me this?”

    “You suppose me to tell this to the boys?”

    “Are you not?”

    Carmen laughs. “You do remember they are criminals, right?”

    “Yeah, but still make no sense.”

    “Well then,” Carmen empty her glass. ”Just think of it as an advice, since you are my new colleague now, it’s no harm to take some opinions from the senior, isn’t it?”

    ”Wait…are you saying I’m also the one being targeted?” Bette asks.

    Carmen replaces her beautiful smile to an enigmatically one, Bette has been puzzled and annoyed by her riddles.

    “You are one of us now, why you aren’t? Outside this strong mansion, we are all being targeted, he who commits a crime for one day is a criminal for life.”

    “That’s not true,” Bette shakes her head. “I believe people will change.”

    “You misunderstood the meaning, what I mean is…no one is innocent, sometimes the seemingly innocent is actually the most need to bear the blame.”

    Bette’s face drops. “What do you want?”

    “I don’t want anything from you,” Carmen says, still in a light speaking tone. ”Just…be careful, things are no means as simple as we first thought.”

    Bette’s face remains still, she looks at the queen of prostitute elegantly stands up and nods to someone behind Bette, she turns her head while following Carmen’s vision, Shane is standing at a corner of the garden, waiting.

    “Oh…Before I go,” Carmen turns her body back to face Bette when she starts to walk away. “There is one more thing I want to inform you.”

    Comments

    1. Hi CJ,

      That was such a beautiful chapter!!

      They connected, heart, body and soul. And now my wish for them is to make the dream of Tina come true.

      Let them live their life, happy, full of love and with their future children, but i don’t think that will happen soon.

      I needed this chapter full of love and connecting between our girls!!!

      Thank you so much for the update!!!!

      • HI Bibi28:

        I love the interaction between Bette and Tina, I spent double times to finish it just to make it better. There were so many good bed scene in other writer’s story, I was so afraid I would ruin it.

        Yes, this chapter they finally clarify their feelings and came clean to each other, a good relationship always contains a good conversation, I like when they both able to listen and understand the others feeling.

        I will try to write more these kind of chapter but the story must go on, and I’m so sorry for letting you guys waited for so long, don’t worry the loving Tibette will continue for a while.

        Thanks for your reply, Bibi, again, I’m so glad you like this story and have you as a reader, hope to see you next week!

        CJ

    2. Hi CJ:

      Wonderful chapter. As you said before, there is a turning point between this chapter and the former one.
      It’s not a coincidence that it comes along with the change in Bette’s strength and maturity, and with Tina’s softness when learning that Bette was at her side in her room while she was recovering.
      I’m not very sure what Carmen meant when she talked to Bette, about Tina and told her “Don’t trust Justine…She’s more…crafty and elusive, than you thought”; is it because Tina has involved Bette as one of the criminal heads in this organization? Is Tina trying to have more heads in the command to give the big blow? Certainly, Carmen knows something it’s being cooked in the criminal organization, but where are her loyalties?
      I like Tina’s dreams, whatever they could be possible or not, and I like that they talked and came clear about high school, about Bette’s remorse for the suicidal girl.
      This loving break in the story was very needed, and now we’ll see what it’ll come.
      The women bodies that were found buried and that will involve Cooper’s organization, are they related to human trafficking? This is a topic that I’m researching too.
      Great story CJ, I’ll be waiting for the next weekend for more.

      P

      • Hi proteonomics:

        Just like you said, Tina didn’t know whether Bette had feelings to her or not, and Bette, I also think that she really want to change who she was, she did what she can do and stayed beside Tina. During Tina’s recovery, what she needed most was not any strong medicine, Bette’s accompany was what she needed the most.

        Just like I said in chapter 15, Tina is not the only candidate to inherit the company, the six heads also have the chance to become the boss, Carmen was a brilliant woman who could survive in the organization for so long, she must figure out something and want Bette to be careful, as one of the heads, Bette is on the same bridge with her. It’s not weird if Carmen guard against Tina.

        Among all the story, I think Bette’s biggest progress was to confirm what she had done, admit mistakes is the most difficult things after making something wrong.

        Sadly to say, no, it has nothing to do with the human traffic, but certainly has something to do with one of the six heads, I will slowly reveal it in the next two weeks.

        Thank you so much, proteonomics, your comment is always what I’ve been waiting for, make my story better every time. I’m also very looking forward to your next chapter! Again, Thanks for your comment!

        CJ

    3. It’s a lovely chapter,it broke my heart learning how hard life for Tina after she left the school, wish everything didnt have to turn that way, but happy that she finally could have her Bette back in her life and love her back as she love her in return. Wondering why Tina’s body was fragile, why she is sick? What kind of illness does she has that might cost her her life?
      Anyway..well done CJ..tks for sharing your work :)

      • Hi Silentreader:

        So good to see you!

        Yes, Tina has been through a long hard life in these five years, Bette also didn’t live an easy life, I know the story has gone for a while, but there is still a long way to go for Tina and Bette’s settle life.

        Tina’s health is the saddest thing I’ve written, it’s in the next chapter, I really hope things didn’t need to go that way, but it’s the reason why Tina has to stay in the organization.

        Thanks for the waiting and the comment! Hope to see you next week.

        CJ

    4. Thank you for this great Chapter which was just what was needed.

      I am still concerned about so many things in the story and look forward for the rest of the story to unfold and, I hope, put my concerns to rest! I can but hope I am in your talented hands.

      Please post soon.
      SG

      • Hi SassyGran:

        I’m sorry for letting you wait for so long, it’s a lovely chapter but tough to write,

        I will try my very best to give them both a good ending, but the rainbow after the rainstorm is always the most beautiful, there still are lots of quests they need to face.

        Be patient and wait for the smart Tina to start her plan! Thanks for your comment and hope to see you next week!

        CJ

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