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The Most Distance Course
I look at her in awe.
She knows me, she really knows me.
And yes, the person I’ve been thinking about, the person inside the poem who’s standing in the most distance course between me, is you, Tina Kennard.
“What?”
“Nothing,” I quickly deny. I’m only thinking about you. I say to myself. “Just thinking about this amazing place.”
Tina shows a beautiful smile. “What about you? What do you want to be in the future?”
“Well…journalist, maybe, I love writing so much.”
“Really? That’s doesn’t like you,” Tina makes a grimace. “Even you write a good poem.”
“What do you mean.”
“You are smart, you have great observation and instinct, you should be a detective.”
Detective? Yeah, maybe that’s an option.
“I don’t know, I never thought about it before.”
“You should, you will become a great detective by your amazing skills, catching the evils, hunting bad guys, maybe you’re going to be the new Wonder Woman.”
I laugh at her craziness, can’t imagine a smart girl like her will like characters from comic books. This is a new side of Tina, I like it.
“Hey, Bette.”
“Yeah?”
“If you’re going to be a detective one day, will you arrest me if I’m the bad guy?”
I frown for the answer, feeling numb within a second.
“What are you talking about? You are not the bad guy, you are so nice and sweet. The kindest girl I’ve ever known, how am I gonna arrest you if you didn’t do anything wrong?”
“Really?” Tina takes a sigh of relief. “That’s good.”
I look at her in concern, why is she asking this kind of question? “Hey, are you okay?”
“Yeah.” Tina replies shortly.
For a few minutes, neither does one of us talk or make any noise.
“Hey, Bette.”
“Yes?”
“Can you promise me one thing?”
I look at her, taking off guard by her now watering hazel eyes, her pale face is covered by two lines of tears, water drops fall like two shining pearls.
“T, Tina, what happen? Why are you crying?”
I reach my hand try to wipe away her tears but she slowly holds on to my hand, I try really hard not to pry, although my heart aches just looking at how sad she is.
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SassyGran says
CJ
What a great Chapter. Not easy to read of Chrissy’s back story.
Thank you for this Christmas present.
Odd to say I ‘enjoyed’ the read but I did. It certainly left me wanting more!
Have a great Christmas. Thank you again for this post.
I look forward to my New Year Chapter:-).
Well done,
SG
Zhenya says
Hi! Merry Christmas and thanks for the chapter!
I was little confused on first pages until i read it was Bette dream.
Very sad story about Tina past and compare to it i don’t feel sorry for Bette’s past – because i still only see her like little spoiled rich girl. Of course we can blame her father, but i think it’s not his fault that his daughter choose to become a friends with Adele and Kelly. It’s only was Betty’s choice not only do nothing when her “friends” hurting another kids, but and actually be a part of this bullying.. Yeah, Melvin might not play attention about his daughter, but i don’t buy it like excuse for Bette, because Tina grew up in much worse conditions, but she became very nice and lovely woman, not like this Bette.
So for now i still think that Tina to good for this Bette
Thanks again for the chapter and waiting for the next!
Zhenya says
I forget to add –
1) Tina working in a Planet owned by Kit? It’s good, maybe Kit can help her little sister to find backbone, because obviously Bette can find it by her own.
2) Who is Tina’s mother and did Adele use this info to hurt Tina?
3) Why in Bette’s dream Tina talking about become criminal?
I hope we can find answers on it in the future.
Bibi28 says
Hi CJ,
That was a really intense chapter to read!
The background on Tina’s early youth was truly sad, she is a strong woman and a fighter and despite her awfull youth she is so kind and warm.
For Bette’s background, it is always sad when your mother walks away and your father is a cold man, but she had a kind woman in her life and it must have been very hard when she died.
Both Tina & Bette endured lost, but it is interesting to read how they deal with it in different ways.
Loved the way how you explained the title of your story via Tina’s thoughts about Bette’s poem.
You have me curious about Bette’s dream, will Tina do something that make her a bad person?
Kit owns the Planet and Tina works there, maybe she will bring Bette & Kit close as sisters.
Hmm, Peggy Peabody and Tina’s mother are making me curious also.
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
I wish you a wonderfull Christmas CJ and a fantastic 2019!!!
proteonomics says
Hi CJ
Excellent chapter, I’m very sorry for Tina’s past, she suffered a lot, poor Bette too, It is sad, both cases you can’t compare how they feel and who suffered more or less because it is a very personal experience and feeling, Bette could think her suffering is nothing related to Tina’s, but everything is relative, perhaps Tina has some deep secret and Bette in her dreams is foresight it.
Well, we will have more explanation later from your next post, well done CJ.
Thanks for the amazing chapter, waiting for the next one.
P
Zhenya says
Sorry, forgot another thing – great job with pictures, i like it very much!