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The Most Distance Course
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“Please…just, promise me one thing.”
“Yeah, no problem, what do you want me to do?”
“Promise me in the near future, if you become a detective or justice, you will always believe that I am not pure evil, I’m same ugly, boring school girl no matter what, those bad things I do, are not what I want to but I have to…do you understand me?”
“I…I…” I am speechless, what the hell is she talking about? “I don’t know what you are talking about…”
“Just promise me!”
“Fine, yes, I promise.” I raise my hand. “But before that, can you please tell me why you are telling me this?”
Tina smiles sadly. “You will know when it is the time.”
I roll my eyes.
“Fine, if you say so.” I am angry now, angry about how she knows me well, but I can’t understand a simple thing she said. If there is a ranking for how well people understanding their crush, I’m certainly going to be on the last of the list.
Tina seems afraid that I got mad about her, her face shows concerned while looking at me.
“Bette.”
“What?” I say impatiently.
“Can I kiss you?”
Right before I say any words, she grabs the back of her head and sticks her lips on mines—
Bette opens her eyes, the sun light hits on her body, she checks her watch, it’s already pass eight.
What a strange dream. She thinks.
This is not the first time Bette dreamed of Tina kissing me, but this one is weirder than before. Tina becomes a villain? Never thought about that. She rubs the bridge of her nose, suddenly, she feels something on her face. She slowly touches her face, something weird, something like a dry water stain. Bette looks up, there is no cracks or broken on the roof, maybe it’s her sweat?
“Good morning, Miss Bette.”
Bette turns her head, Mrs. Kennard walks in Tina’s room with a tray full of food, she put it on night-stand.
“I hope you’re hungry, do you sleep well?”
“Oh my god, Mrs. Kennard you don’t have to…” Bette looks at her home-made breakfast, French toasts, orange juice, and omelets. How can she not feel embarrassed when this poor family used their small amount of ingredients making fancy food just to treat her well?
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CJ
What a great Chapter. Not easy to read of Chrissy’s back story.
Thank you for this Christmas present.
Odd to say I ‘enjoyed’ the read but I did. It certainly left me wanting more!
Have a great Christmas. Thank you again for this post.
I look forward to my New Year Chapter:-).
Well done,
SG
Hi! Merry Christmas and thanks for the chapter!
I was little confused on first pages until i read it was Bette dream.
Very sad story about Tina past and compare to it i don’t feel sorry for Bette’s past – because i still only see her like little spoiled rich girl. Of course we can blame her father, but i think it’s not his fault that his daughter choose to become a friends with Adele and Kelly. It’s only was Betty’s choice not only do nothing when her “friends” hurting another kids, but and actually be a part of this bullying.. Yeah, Melvin might not play attention about his daughter, but i don’t buy it like excuse for Bette, because Tina grew up in much worse conditions, but she became very nice and lovely woman, not like this Bette.
So for now i still think that Tina to good for this Bette
Thanks again for the chapter and waiting for the next!
I forget to add –
1) Tina working in a Planet owned by Kit? It’s good, maybe Kit can help her little sister to find backbone, because obviously Bette can find it by her own.
2) Who is Tina’s mother and did Adele use this info to hurt Tina?
3) Why in Bette’s dream Tina talking about become criminal?
I hope we can find answers on it in the future.
Hi CJ,
That was a really intense chapter to read!
The background on Tina’s early youth was truly sad, she is a strong woman and a fighter and despite her awfull youth she is so kind and warm.
For Bette’s background, it is always sad when your mother walks away and your father is a cold man, but she had a kind woman in her life and it must have been very hard when she died.
Both Tina & Bette endured lost, but it is interesting to read how they deal with it in different ways.
Loved the way how you explained the title of your story via Tina’s thoughts about Bette’s poem.
You have me curious about Bette’s dream, will Tina do something that make her a bad person?
Kit owns the Planet and Tina works there, maybe she will bring Bette & Kit close as sisters.
Hmm, Peggy Peabody and Tina’s mother are making me curious also.
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
I wish you a wonderfull Christmas CJ and a fantastic 2019!!!
Hi CJ
Excellent chapter, I’m very sorry for Tina’s past, she suffered a lot, poor Bette too, It is sad, both cases you can’t compare how they feel and who suffered more or less because it is a very personal experience and feeling, Bette could think her suffering is nothing related to Tina’s, but everything is relative, perhaps Tina has some deep secret and Bette in her dreams is foresight it.
Well, we will have more explanation later from your next post, well done CJ.
Thanks for the amazing chapter, waiting for the next one.
P
Sorry, forgot another thing – great job with pictures, i like it very much!