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The Most Distance Course
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“Non-sense, this is nothing, honey, I always tell Chrissy, always treat guest whole-heartily.”
“Wait, so this breakfast was all made by Tina?”
Mrs. Kennard smiles.
“Indeed, but it turned cold before you woke up so I heated for you, hope you don’t mind.”
“Please don’t say that, thank you so much, Mrs. Kennard.”
“It’s nothing Miss Bette, enjoy, if you need anything, I will be right outside.”
“Oh, no, no this is perfect.”
Bette takes a small bite, she can almost see how Tina focuses in the kitchen just like she’s drawing in the class, her eyes will turn green while she’s thinking or angry, no need to say when “The Golden Circle” is picking on her. Bette feels like she’s crazy for having this thought, but no doubt, after spending a night in her house, she’s more desperate to know Tina, to look at her warm and beautiful hazel eyes, which only shows when she’s happy or calm.
Slowly finishing her plate, Bette makes sure no food is wasted. The breakfast no doubt is as good as the dinner last night. Perhaps I can bring some new, fresh food ingredient for Tina to cook? She thinks, she can’t wait to taste another Tina’s hand-made dishes.
She walks out of Tina’s room, finding that only Mrs. Kennard sitting in the chair, watching the TV news, but Tina is nowhere to be found.
“Mrs. Kennard, where is Tina?”
“Oh, she went to work early this morning, she told me not to wake you up cause its weekend.”
Bette’s mouth is now wide open, she checks her watch, it’s nine o’clock, and it’s Saturday! Who will work on Saturday?
“Allow me to ask, what does Tina do? I thought she said that she works in the car repair center.”
“In weekday, yes, on weekend she works as a waitress, she works in a small café called Planet, do you hear this place before?”
“Yeah, actually my sister Kit, owns that place, but we are not really close so.”
“That’s too bad, she is a nice woman, always let Chrissy brought back home some leftovers or food that didn’t sell out, I’m grateful for that, at least we won’t get hungry.”
“I’m sorry if this bothers you, Mrs. Kennard, but why is Tina working in this age?”
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CJ
What a great Chapter. Not easy to read of Chrissy’s back story.
Thank you for this Christmas present.
Odd to say I ‘enjoyed’ the read but I did. It certainly left me wanting more!
Have a great Christmas. Thank you again for this post.
I look forward to my New Year Chapter:-).
Well done,
SG
Hi! Merry Christmas and thanks for the chapter!
I was little confused on first pages until i read it was Bette dream.
Very sad story about Tina past and compare to it i don’t feel sorry for Bette’s past – because i still only see her like little spoiled rich girl. Of course we can blame her father, but i think it’s not his fault that his daughter choose to become a friends with Adele and Kelly. It’s only was Betty’s choice not only do nothing when her “friends” hurting another kids, but and actually be a part of this bullying.. Yeah, Melvin might not play attention about his daughter, but i don’t buy it like excuse for Bette, because Tina grew up in much worse conditions, but she became very nice and lovely woman, not like this Bette.
So for now i still think that Tina to good for this Bette
Thanks again for the chapter and waiting for the next!
I forget to add –
1) Tina working in a Planet owned by Kit? It’s good, maybe Kit can help her little sister to find backbone, because obviously Bette can find it by her own.
2) Who is Tina’s mother and did Adele use this info to hurt Tina?
3) Why in Bette’s dream Tina talking about become criminal?
I hope we can find answers on it in the future.
Hi CJ,
That was a really intense chapter to read!
The background on Tina’s early youth was truly sad, she is a strong woman and a fighter and despite her awfull youth she is so kind and warm.
For Bette’s background, it is always sad when your mother walks away and your father is a cold man, but she had a kind woman in her life and it must have been very hard when she died.
Both Tina & Bette endured lost, but it is interesting to read how they deal with it in different ways.
Loved the way how you explained the title of your story via Tina’s thoughts about Bette’s poem.
You have me curious about Bette’s dream, will Tina do something that make her a bad person?
Kit owns the Planet and Tina works there, maybe she will bring Bette & Kit close as sisters.
Hmm, Peggy Peabody and Tina’s mother are making me curious also.
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
I wish you a wonderfull Christmas CJ and a fantastic 2019!!!
Hi CJ
Excellent chapter, I’m very sorry for Tina’s past, she suffered a lot, poor Bette too, It is sad, both cases you can’t compare how they feel and who suffered more or less because it is a very personal experience and feeling, Bette could think her suffering is nothing related to Tina’s, but everything is relative, perhaps Tina has some deep secret and Bette in her dreams is foresight it.
Well, we will have more explanation later from your next post, well done CJ.
Thanks for the amazing chapter, waiting for the next one.
P
Sorry, forgot another thing – great job with pictures, i like it very much!