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The Most Distance Course
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Rebecca Kennard? That’s all?
Bette’s brain starts to work at high speed, this name is so familiar, but within this timing, she cannot memories it. At least she found a nice clue, with this she can make some research and dig deeper, not to keep torturing her, but to know this girl more.
“May I look around?” She asks.
“Sure, be my guest”
Bette wondering through the small house, spending most of her times in Tina’s room, looking at the paintings.
Bette found that Tina like her in so many ways, despite that she is rich, she always feels she’s alone.
When she’s with her friends and been called as the “The Golden Circle”, she knew that nobody understood her. They all thought that with the great gift of being smart, staying with the most famous girls in town, being grouped by the amazing gang in school, any person will be happy. But the truth is that Bette never happy.
Bette’s mother, Maxine Porter, left the six-year-old little Bette when she found that Bette’s father Melvin Porter cheated on her, Bette was all alone after that.
Since the day her mother left, she became quiet and shy, didn’t like to talk or smile, she seldom had friends in pre-school. Her only friend was her old nanny Sophie, who took good care of her since Melvin always busy at work, she fed her, dressed her, comforted her, made sure Bette’s well-put until the day she walked out the shadow of Maxine’s absence and finally no longer looking for her mother. Melvin was a good lawyer but certainly not a good father, Bette could only see him once or twice a week and every time he saw her, he would ask her whether her money was enough, then he would pat his daughter’s head and walk away.
Bette always wondering why she worked so hard on her study and got such a good grade, her father still never put extra attention on her. Thanks to Sophie, the kind old woman was like her another mother, she taught Bette well, didn’t turn her into a gold digger. Bette’s intelligent and elegant to elder was taught by this great person in her life. Unfortunately, the old lady died with cancer when Bette’s fifteen, the first time Bette cried so badly after her mother left her.
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CJ
What a great Chapter. Not easy to read of Chrissy’s back story.
Thank you for this Christmas present.
Odd to say I ‘enjoyed’ the read but I did. It certainly left me wanting more!
Have a great Christmas. Thank you again for this post.
I look forward to my New Year Chapter:-).
Well done,
SG
Hi! Merry Christmas and thanks for the chapter!
I was little confused on first pages until i read it was Bette dream.
Very sad story about Tina past and compare to it i don’t feel sorry for Bette’s past – because i still only see her like little spoiled rich girl. Of course we can blame her father, but i think it’s not his fault that his daughter choose to become a friends with Adele and Kelly. It’s only was Betty’s choice not only do nothing when her “friends” hurting another kids, but and actually be a part of this bullying.. Yeah, Melvin might not play attention about his daughter, but i don’t buy it like excuse for Bette, because Tina grew up in much worse conditions, but she became very nice and lovely woman, not like this Bette.
So for now i still think that Tina to good for this Bette
Thanks again for the chapter and waiting for the next!
I forget to add –
1) Tina working in a Planet owned by Kit? It’s good, maybe Kit can help her little sister to find backbone, because obviously Bette can find it by her own.
2) Who is Tina’s mother and did Adele use this info to hurt Tina?
3) Why in Bette’s dream Tina talking about become criminal?
I hope we can find answers on it in the future.
Hi CJ,
That was a really intense chapter to read!
The background on Tina’s early youth was truly sad, she is a strong woman and a fighter and despite her awfull youth she is so kind and warm.
For Bette’s background, it is always sad when your mother walks away and your father is a cold man, but she had a kind woman in her life and it must have been very hard when she died.
Both Tina & Bette endured lost, but it is interesting to read how they deal with it in different ways.
Loved the way how you explained the title of your story via Tina’s thoughts about Bette’s poem.
You have me curious about Bette’s dream, will Tina do something that make her a bad person?
Kit owns the Planet and Tina works there, maybe she will bring Bette & Kit close as sisters.
Hmm, Peggy Peabody and Tina’s mother are making me curious also.
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
I wish you a wonderfull Christmas CJ and a fantastic 2019!!!
Hi CJ
Excellent chapter, I’m very sorry for Tina’s past, she suffered a lot, poor Bette too, It is sad, both cases you can’t compare how they feel and who suffered more or less because it is a very personal experience and feeling, Bette could think her suffering is nothing related to Tina’s, but everything is relative, perhaps Tina has some deep secret and Bette in her dreams is foresight it.
Well, we will have more explanation later from your next post, well done CJ.
Thanks for the amazing chapter, waiting for the next one.
P
Sorry, forgot another thing – great job with pictures, i like it very much!