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The Most Distance Course
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“You are not the first, and never will going to be the worst.”
“So all those cooking, fixing skills, excellent reaction…”
“She learned it all by herself.” Mrs. Kennard slips her tea. “When I found her, she’s already a mature little girl, her cabin was tidy and clean, everything was well organized. I was so surprised that an eleven-year-old little girl could repair water pipes, sew, fishing, hunting for food…her drawing talent was also amazing, can you imagine she could use different plants to extract the pigment she needed for painting? She even hand-made her paint brushes.”
Now I’m not surprised that she could open four lockers under four minutes. Bette sighs in her head. To her, it’s a piece of cake.
“She didn’t believe me when I told her I am her aunt, she’s shocked that she still had a relative, I’ve tried so hard to make her trust me, I don’t want to fail my sister again. A few weeks later she finally agreed to move in with me, first those foster family unwilling to let go of her, but fortunately, I adopted her.”
“So that’s why she used her mother’s last name instead of her fathers?”
“Not exactly, but you can say it that way.”
“Jesus…” Bette frustratingly rubs her face. “It’s fucking dramatic…”
Mrs. Kennard nods. “No doubt for sure.”
Bette frowns in stunned, the amount of information is too large, she can’t bear for all of them.
“Mrs. Kennard?”
“Yes, darling?”
“If you are Tina’s aunt, why Headmistress Peggy Peabody said that she lives with her mother instead of her aunt?”
“You’ve asked too much, my dear, all I can tell you is that Chrissy doesn’t want anything to do with her mother or father, she asked Headmistress Peabody to announce this way so as to reduce the gossip, she’s been troubled for a long time.”
“What kind of gossip?”
Mrs. Kennard hesitates.
“You have to promise me one thing, Bette, and when I mean promise, meaning that if you tell anyone, you will eventually hurt Chrissy, so you have to make sure that you can keep it before you make it.”
Bette gulps. Wow, never thought about that.
“I promise.” She says in confident.
Mrs. Kennard hesitates for a moment. “Her mother is Rebecca Kennard.”
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CJ
What a great Chapter. Not easy to read of Chrissy’s back story.
Thank you for this Christmas present.
Odd to say I ‘enjoyed’ the read but I did. It certainly left me wanting more!
Have a great Christmas. Thank you again for this post.
I look forward to my New Year Chapter:-).
Well done,
SG
Hi! Merry Christmas and thanks for the chapter!
I was little confused on first pages until i read it was Bette dream.
Very sad story about Tina past and compare to it i don’t feel sorry for Bette’s past – because i still only see her like little spoiled rich girl. Of course we can blame her father, but i think it’s not his fault that his daughter choose to become a friends with Adele and Kelly. It’s only was Betty’s choice not only do nothing when her “friends” hurting another kids, but and actually be a part of this bullying.. Yeah, Melvin might not play attention about his daughter, but i don’t buy it like excuse for Bette, because Tina grew up in much worse conditions, but she became very nice and lovely woman, not like this Bette.
So for now i still think that Tina to good for this Bette
Thanks again for the chapter and waiting for the next!
I forget to add –
1) Tina working in a Planet owned by Kit? It’s good, maybe Kit can help her little sister to find backbone, because obviously Bette can find it by her own.
2) Who is Tina’s mother and did Adele use this info to hurt Tina?
3) Why in Bette’s dream Tina talking about become criminal?
I hope we can find answers on it in the future.
Hi CJ,
That was a really intense chapter to read!
The background on Tina’s early youth was truly sad, she is a strong woman and a fighter and despite her awfull youth she is so kind and warm.
For Bette’s background, it is always sad when your mother walks away and your father is a cold man, but she had a kind woman in her life and it must have been very hard when she died.
Both Tina & Bette endured lost, but it is interesting to read how they deal with it in different ways.
Loved the way how you explained the title of your story via Tina’s thoughts about Bette’s poem.
You have me curious about Bette’s dream, will Tina do something that make her a bad person?
Kit owns the Planet and Tina works there, maybe she will bring Bette & Kit close as sisters.
Hmm, Peggy Peabody and Tina’s mother are making me curious also.
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
I wish you a wonderfull Christmas CJ and a fantastic 2019!!!
Hi CJ
Excellent chapter, I’m very sorry for Tina’s past, she suffered a lot, poor Bette too, It is sad, both cases you can’t compare how they feel and who suffered more or less because it is a very personal experience and feeling, Bette could think her suffering is nothing related to Tina’s, but everything is relative, perhaps Tina has some deep secret and Bette in her dreams is foresight it.
Well, we will have more explanation later from your next post, well done CJ.
Thanks for the amazing chapter, waiting for the next one.
P
Sorry, forgot another thing – great job with pictures, i like it very much!