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The Most Distance Course
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“Wait, what happens? Why can’t you tell?” Bette begins to panic.
“You have to know, darling, this is not a touching story, it’s her past, the one she never wanted to dig out…”
”My mouth is sealed, you can trust me.” Bette says sincerely.
”Very well, Chrissy lost her mother when she was only five years old, her father left her right after her mother died, I was at Los Angeles, working on my own show, at that time I didn’t know what happened to her family…Christina’s father didn’t even call me, he just left little Christina alone, at North Carolina.”
Bette is clenching her jaw, her bows narrow to a line, her teeth are biting too hard she feels that they will break any second. She hates that parents abandon their child for no reason.
“She had been taken to foster care, but the family who adopted her were no good at all, all they want was the government subsidy. Every month when they got the money, they would throw her out of the house and made her live in the small cabin on her own, only gave her limited food and water. She had been all alone for six years until I found her.”
“Holly fucking shit…” Bette rubs her face.
Six years, six fucking years, with no fancy things or any servant, if it were Bette she could barely survive for a day, but Tina did it, the five-year-old little girl. Standing right here, keep on fighting with her life.
“No wonder she’s a tough girl…”
“You have no idea, I knew she didn’t have a good time at school, her family background was a mess, and she’s so tiny, looked so fragile, bully’s best prey. Even with six missing years, I could sense the sadness from her eyes. During these years this poor girl had been through enough, visiting school hospital almost every two days, wounds everywhere, just because she didn’t have money and refused to yield to bullies.”
Bette smiles. That’s the Tina I’ve known.
“After that, she established her great protect instinct, taught herself how to fight…even when nothing happened, you can see the insecure from her gesture was so vivid…but she never complained, not even a word. Even though sometimes she would bring bruises and wounds back from school, she always wearing a big smile when she came home.”
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CJ
What a great Chapter. Not easy to read of Chrissy’s back story.
Thank you for this Christmas present.
Odd to say I ‘enjoyed’ the read but I did. It certainly left me wanting more!
Have a great Christmas. Thank you again for this post.
I look forward to my New Year Chapter:-).
Well done,
SG
Hi! Merry Christmas and thanks for the chapter!
I was little confused on first pages until i read it was Bette dream.
Very sad story about Tina past and compare to it i don’t feel sorry for Bette’s past – because i still only see her like little spoiled rich girl. Of course we can blame her father, but i think it’s not his fault that his daughter choose to become a friends with Adele and Kelly. It’s only was Betty’s choice not only do nothing when her “friends” hurting another kids, but and actually be a part of this bullying.. Yeah, Melvin might not play attention about his daughter, but i don’t buy it like excuse for Bette, because Tina grew up in much worse conditions, but she became very nice and lovely woman, not like this Bette.
So for now i still think that Tina to good for this Bette
Thanks again for the chapter and waiting for the next!
I forget to add –
1) Tina working in a Planet owned by Kit? It’s good, maybe Kit can help her little sister to find backbone, because obviously Bette can find it by her own.
2) Who is Tina’s mother and did Adele use this info to hurt Tina?
3) Why in Bette’s dream Tina talking about become criminal?
I hope we can find answers on it in the future.
Hi CJ,
That was a really intense chapter to read!
The background on Tina’s early youth was truly sad, she is a strong woman and a fighter and despite her awfull youth she is so kind and warm.
For Bette’s background, it is always sad when your mother walks away and your father is a cold man, but she had a kind woman in her life and it must have been very hard when she died.
Both Tina & Bette endured lost, but it is interesting to read how they deal with it in different ways.
Loved the way how you explained the title of your story via Tina’s thoughts about Bette’s poem.
You have me curious about Bette’s dream, will Tina do something that make her a bad person?
Kit owns the Planet and Tina works there, maybe she will bring Bette & Kit close as sisters.
Hmm, Peggy Peabody and Tina’s mother are making me curious also.
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
I wish you a wonderfull Christmas CJ and a fantastic 2019!!!
Hi CJ
Excellent chapter, I’m very sorry for Tina’s past, she suffered a lot, poor Bette too, It is sad, both cases you can’t compare how they feel and who suffered more or less because it is a very personal experience and feeling, Bette could think her suffering is nothing related to Tina’s, but everything is relative, perhaps Tina has some deep secret and Bette in her dreams is foresight it.
Well, we will have more explanation later from your next post, well done CJ.
Thanks for the amazing chapter, waiting for the next one.
P
Sorry, forgot another thing – great job with pictures, i like it very much!