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    The Most Distant Course

    Story written on April 13, 2019 by Crystal J.H.
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    Tina’s gun holding hand is still in the air, even until Carmen’s body disappeared in their sight, she still didn’t put her hand down. “Ms. Cooper…?” Tina’s mind is blank, she looks emptily at the river, the loud gunshot echoes around her own diaphragm, she’s feeling dizzy. Carmen, the body, the bullet, the Queen of

    Tina’s gun holding hand is still in the air, even until Carmen’s body disappeared in their sight, she still didn’t put her hand down.

    “Ms. Cooper…?”

    Tina’s mind is blank, she looks emptily at the river, the loud gunshot echoes around her own diaphragm, she’s feeling dizzy.

    Carmen, the body, the bullet, the Queen of heart…

    “Ms. Cooper? Ms. Cooper!”

    Bette’s voice wakes her up from her own thought. Tina blinks for a few times, she opens her mouth, no matter how hard she tries, still unable to wake her own voice.

    “Huh?”

    “I said are you alright? T?” Bette asks quietly.

    Tina only nods.

    “Are you sure?”

    Tina nods again.

    “Yeah.” Tina clears her throat, feeling it is hurt by the dehydration and yelling.

    Bette gently pats Tina’s arm, Tina seems to finally realize her hand is still in the air. She takes back her hand and quickly puts the gun back to her waist. Sam jogs to Tina’s side, Bette doesn’t know where she just went, but it’s not important so far.

    “The plan was going on smoothly, nothing goes wrong, the assistant is taking care the rest of it.” Sam says quietly.

    “Make sure he’s safe.” Tina replies.

    Sam nods. “Certainly.”

    “Enough talking, come on…let’s go back.” Bette says.

    “Go to the downstream, find her body and bring her back.” Max says to the man next to him, the man nods and quickly walks away.

    His serpent eyes follow Tina’s every move. With Sam and Bette behind, the blonde is now slowly walking back to her car. Seeing her hands are shaking due to the overstrain, he sneers in contempt.

    “Well done, Ms. Cooper,” Max says with a smile. “Nice shot.”

    “There is no wind, the turbulent river won’t be as rapid as before. You will find the body not far away.” Tina says quietly.

    “I’ve already sent boss’s men down there, it’ll be too late to wait for you say so.” Max maintains his contempt, Bette has to hold back her anger not to kick his balls, or he may he die without sons.

    “Does my father have other orders?” What Tina wants to do the most is to bury herself in Bette’s chest and have a pleasant sleep.

    “Only one,” Max says, still hanging the disgusting smile on his face. “Weekly routine.”

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    1. Hi! Thank you for the chapter!

      But i must say i don’t like what happened in this chapter.

      First – Tina on grugs again.
      Second – like i said earlier i don’t care about Carmen death. But i have suspicion that (spoiler) But in this case obviously that Bette didn’t know anything about this, but i can feel that Sam knew. So Tina trust Sam more than Bette. And for me it death sentence for B&T realationship.

      So we will see if i right than

    3. I think my comment got lost in space again! ????

      Sad that Carmen had to be taken away by Tina.

      How much more can Tina endure? She is a brilliant and strong woman and i am glad that that she has the love and support from Bette. And yes Sam as well.

      You left with a cliffie again!ooking forward to the next chapter!

    4. Hard chapter.

      I don’t like idea that Tina still on drugs too. And what was about Tina raped by her own father?
      And who is next according her plan?

    6. Hi CJ:
      Strong chapter, hard to imagine Tina killing Carmen, but in a former chapter, Tina said that she made modifications on her gun (?) Is there something you haven’t write here?

      You wrote here what I already suspected reading former chapters, but I wasn’t totally sure, Sebastian Cooper had sex with Tina in the brothel despite recognizing her as her own daughter; that guy is not a man, he is not an animal, he is the damn walking devil, he deserves to be burned alive and slowly; I heard of a few cases like this in real life and always made me sick and there is no excuse for the father, poor Tina.

      I like Bette very much, how she trusts, supports and protectsTina no matter what.
      Great chapter CJ, keep the good work.

      P

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