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    The Most Distant Course

    Story written on April 13, 2019 by Crystal J.H.
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    “Ms. Cooper!” Bette yells, ready to separate both of them, but has stopped by Sam. Tina grabs Carmen’s collar, turning her back to the rest of the Cooper members. Her hands are trembling due to the anger and the punches. “Come on…Do it, Justine, do it, I bet you don’t have the nerve to pull

    “Ms. Cooper!” Bette yells, ready to separate both of them, but has stopped by Sam.

    Tina grabs Carmen’s collar, turning her back to the rest of the Cooper members. Her hands are trembling due to the anger and the punches.

    “Come on…Do it, Justine, do it, I bet you don’t have the nerve to pull the trigger, right? You might look tough, but deep down you are so weak, so softhearted…I’ve seen you cried every time when you saw your friend being beaten…” Carmen makes a sly smile, Bette can see blood in her teeth. ”Do you want me to tell others what you said when your father tried to get into you?”

    With one last punch at the stomach, Tina firmly grasps the Latino’s collar. Others can’t see her face but it’s imaginable that their young boss is furious as hell.

    “A person’s words are good when death is near, huh? I don’t know you are such a good talker…” Tina gnashes the teeth in anger, her lips appress the Latino’s ear, the voice is small and soft, she pronounces words one by one correctly. The sound of river water conceals most of her words, only Carmen can hear.

    “I think you are losing the bet…”

    Then she drops Carmen on the ground, holding up her gun, pointing the muzzle straight at the brunette.

    Unexpected by everyone, Carmen slowly stand up, she opens her arms to Tina. The leader of the prostitution smile. It’s a genuine smile. A smile that will make any man infatuated by her.

    “I will see you in the next world, Justine.” Carmen says.

    And Tina pulls the trigger.

    Loud bangs echo to the clouds, the roar of guns reverberates in the valley. With the noise of pistol, they hear on both sides of the cliff, the dismal howling of wolves, plus the echoing sound of the bullet, around the noise redouble. River water patting the rock on the edge, the thick smell of the gun smoke stimulates people’s nasal cavity.

    Red liquid issues from the wound, right on the spot of Carmen’s chest. With a loud splash, she unconsciousness falls into the water, descend with the rapids of the river, her body unmoved, allow the water to carry her away.

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    1. Hi! Thank you for the chapter!

      But i must say i don’t like what happened in this chapter.

      First – Tina on grugs again.
      Second – like i said earlier i don’t care about Carmen death. But i have suspicion that (spoiler) But in this case obviously that Bette didn’t know anything about this, but i can feel that Sam knew. So Tina trust Sam more than Bette. And for me it death sentence for B&T realationship.

      So we will see if i right than

    3. I think my comment got lost in space again! ????

      Sad that Carmen had to be taken away by Tina.

      How much more can Tina endure? She is a brilliant and strong woman and i am glad that that she has the love and support from Bette. And yes Sam as well.

      You left with a cliffie again!ooking forward to the next chapter!

    6. Hi CJ:
      Strong chapter, hard to imagine Tina killing Carmen, but in a former chapter, Tina said that she made modifications on her gun (?) Is there something you haven’t write here?

      You wrote here what I already suspected reading former chapters, but I wasn’t totally sure, Sebastian Cooper had sex with Tina in the brothel despite recognizing her as her own daughter; that guy is not a man, he is not an animal, he is the damn walking devil, he deserves to be burned alive and slowly; I heard of a few cases like this in real life and always made me sick and there is no excuse for the father, poor Tina.

      I like Bette very much, how she trusts, supports and protectsTina no matter what.
      Great chapter CJ, keep the good work.

      P

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