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The Most Distant Course
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“You have no idea.” She says as she sips the alcohol.
“I will have the same, please.” The man says.
“As you wish, sir.”
While waiting for the drinks being fixed, the two customers remain in comfortable silence.
“Here’s your drink.”
“Thank you,” The man smiles and takes his glass, he turns his body to Bette. “To freedom.”
Bette raises her both eyebrows, chuckles.
“I don’t think that’s something worth to cheer about.”
“Of course, it does.” The man grins. “How about you choose?”
“Very well,” Bette nods, she holds up her glass. “To love.”
“Fair enough…To love.”
The two people clink the glass, again, Bette drinks up the whole beverage down, the man looks at her in awe. The detective shakes her head due to the strong alcohol, hold up one finger. This time without asking, the bartender automatically gather her empty glass and prepare her third drink.
“What a night…” The man turns his body back to the hall room, where everyone seems having a great time.
“Yeah…” Bette suddenly realizes she’s being rude. “Good to me you, I’m—”
“Bette Porter,” The man raises his martini at Bette. “It’s a pleasure.”
“How do you know my name?”
“Everyone knows your name.” The man smiles. “The youngest spy in history who has torn down one of the world’s greatest criminal organizations.”
Bette snorts in contempt.
The man is wearing a luxury suit, but instead of looking like an over spoiled playboy, he seems is a spry, suave, and very precise guy, all his movements are undisturbed and elegant, seems the most gentleman-like man Bette has ever seen.
“You aren’t a journalist, are you?”
“God, no.” The man chuckles, he has a rather nice voice, Bette like it.
“Very well, you are not a journalist, then you must be one of the authority’s members to come in, so allow me to ask, who are you?”
“Consider me as a concerned citizen.” The man says elegantly.
“That’s not fair.”
“For you, yes, for me,” The man shrugs and adjusts his suit. “It’s just the matter of the name, isn’t it?”
“If so, I don’t think I need to answer your question…”
“Did I ask you any question? It was you who’s continue coming up with issues.”
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Hi CJ,
I am so happy to see this update!!!
We are getting closer to their meeting after two years.
I didn’t surprise me that Bette hooked up with Candace, everyone needs somebody in their life and Bette couldn’t know if or when she would see Tina again.
I feel sorry for Candace though, she is in love and Bette is that clearly not, but to make a scene like that, not done, but i understand her frustation with Bette’s lack of emotion or feeling.
It is time to bring Aaron down and punish him for his crimes, Tina certainly has ideas to expose him as a criminal and asshole.
The ranking just freaked me out a little, thank god you didn’t wrote a scene like i thought.
Waiting patiently for the next chapter and can’t wait to see the meeting between Bette & Tina. Tina sure has a lot to explain to Bette.
One request, however i think you will explain it in the future, will you tell Tina’s past two years?
I love this story!!!
Thank you so much for this story!!!!
Xxx, your loyal fan ????
Hi CJ,
Delighted to see another post but I still find it difficult to read as I hate Candace so much!
Please post again soon as this Story has me gripped!
Hoping you will have Tina explain what has happened to her in the last two years.
Also hoping for a happy Tibette ending, please!
Thanks for posting PPS
SG
Hi CJ:
Always an excellent chapter.
Initially, I was disappointed that Bette and Candace ended together, but as I was reading, Bette has no feelings for her (well, she clearly is not in love with the police captain) because of Bette’s heart already belongs to Tina and is only her who Bette is looking for and everywhere.
In this story, I feel pity for Candace (this Candace, no the one in TLW show) because she is in love with Bette and her feelings are unrequited and because she helped Bette with her PTSD after the fall of the Cooper empire; but c’est la vie, and the new police captain is reluctant to be aware of the situation.
I’m very curious as to the other readers about what happened these last 2 years with Tina. I don’t wanna know about Bette’s life in the last 2 years because that will give me allergies, knowing she was with Candace (yikes)
Now I’m thrilled about what is going to happen next because we know Bette is in Tina’s house and the two lovers will reunite.
So, please CJ, post soon the next chapter.
Thanks again for the wonderful story.
P
Hi!
Like i said earlier – very good job with pictures, i like this graphic part in your story.
I don’t want comment anythig about Bette and Candance, so i just skip it and waiting next part for resolution.
Great chapter CJ!
I can definitely deal with Bette being with Candace if it means that a reunion for Bette and Tina is right around the corner! I’d also love to know what has happened to Tina in the last couple of years, but I’m sure you will let us know in the upcoming chapter.
Thanks and PPS!