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The Most Distant Course
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“The FBI guy is Aaron Kornbluth’s man, and the other…he is a special agent from the LA mayor.”
“They are all against me?”
“Exactly.” The man chews on the olive in the martini.
“Why? Why are they spying on me?”
The man finishes off his drink, he gently puts the glass down.
“Consider you were the best drug lord of one of the biggest criminal group, being targeted by the DEA, who had put so much effort into catching you…”
The man gurgles softly.
“But turns out? You are a detective…which also meant everything they’ve done was just beating a dead horse. No need to mentioned that you betrayed the entire underground…Do you simply believe you wouldn’t offend any of them? Even it’s been two years?”
“How…” Bette calms herself. “How did you know all of these…?”
“Do you really want to know?”
“Of course.”
Bette watches him stands up, putting a generous tip on the counter, and next to the sheaf of dollars…is a small piece of paper.
Taking over the hat handed by the waiter, he smiles at Bette.
“Follow the address, meet me three days later, same time, then you will find what you are searching for.”
“Wait…what?”
The man puts his coat on. “You heard me.”
“Hey, how do I call you?”
Before the detective gets her answer, the man is no longer in her sight.
She takes over the small note and opens it.
Just like that man said, it was an address, and a signature:
The assistant
Three days later.
Since she went back from Candace’s promotion celebration, Bette barely talked to her girlfriend.
She has also been sleeping on the couch for three nights, her neck is now hurt so bad that she cannot turn smoothly. Which indirectly worsen the relationship between Candace and her.
The man’s word kept running in Bette’s mind, after she left the hall room, she did double check that whether someone is following her. Although she’s sure that there’s no one stalking her car, Bette could sense that something was strange when she walked out of the building.
Couldn’t resist the curiosity, on the third day morning, the detective decided she will pay a visit on the address that mystery man gave her.
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Hi CJ,
I am so happy to see this update!!!
We are getting closer to their meeting after two years.
I didn’t surprise me that Bette hooked up with Candace, everyone needs somebody in their life and Bette couldn’t know if or when she would see Tina again.
I feel sorry for Candace though, she is in love and Bette is that clearly not, but to make a scene like that, not done, but i understand her frustation with Bette’s lack of emotion or feeling.
It is time to bring Aaron down and punish him for his crimes, Tina certainly has ideas to expose him as a criminal and asshole.
The ranking just freaked me out a little, thank god you didn’t wrote a scene like i thought.
Waiting patiently for the next chapter and can’t wait to see the meeting between Bette & Tina. Tina sure has a lot to explain to Bette.
One request, however i think you will explain it in the future, will you tell Tina’s past two years?
I love this story!!!
Thank you so much for this story!!!!
Xxx, your loyal fan ????
Hi CJ,
Delighted to see another post but I still find it difficult to read as I hate Candace so much!
Please post again soon as this Story has me gripped!
Hoping you will have Tina explain what has happened to her in the last two years.
Also hoping for a happy Tibette ending, please!
Thanks for posting PPS
SG
Hi CJ:
Always an excellent chapter.
Initially, I was disappointed that Bette and Candace ended together, but as I was reading, Bette has no feelings for her (well, she clearly is not in love with the police captain) because of Bette’s heart already belongs to Tina and is only her who Bette is looking for and everywhere.
In this story, I feel pity for Candace (this Candace, no the one in TLW show) because she is in love with Bette and her feelings are unrequited and because she helped Bette with her PTSD after the fall of the Cooper empire; but c’est la vie, and the new police captain is reluctant to be aware of the situation.
I’m very curious as to the other readers about what happened these last 2 years with Tina. I don’t wanna know about Bette’s life in the last 2 years because that will give me allergies, knowing she was with Candace (yikes)
Now I’m thrilled about what is going to happen next because we know Bette is in Tina’s house and the two lovers will reunite.
So, please CJ, post soon the next chapter.
Thanks again for the wonderful story.
P
Hi!
Like i said earlier – very good job with pictures, i like this graphic part in your story.
I don’t want comment anythig about Bette and Candance, so i just skip it and waiting next part for resolution.
Great chapter CJ!
I can definitely deal with Bette being with Candace if it means that a reunion for Bette and Tina is right around the corner! I’d also love to know what has happened to Tina in the last couple of years, but I’m sure you will let us know in the upcoming chapter.
Thanks and PPS!