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The Most Distant Course
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Bette snorts. “Oh, now you are complaining about me?”
“See, that was another question.” The man grins. “But no, detective, I am not complaining about you, not a second.”
“What do you want from me exactly? Hmm?”
“I always prefer talking to people who have a brilliant mind,” The man looks at his drink. “Is this nice chat too much for you?”
“Well, I don’t do nice chat, so…If I’m not going to know who you are tonight, then I’ll probably leave so as to not keep embarrassing myself, so nice to meet you.” Bette puts down the glass and places the money on the bar, standing up and ready to call a cab. “Good evening and have a nice drink.”
“Before you go…there’s something you need to know…other than my name.”
Bette’s losing her patience.
“What game are you playing?”
“I will say it’s a cat and mouse game, everyone knows what they are going to face but you, the main character is still kept in the dark.”
Bette frowns. “Why do you say I had been ignorant of something?”
“You know…just a few hours ago when you stepping in this banquet hall, there were two people already keep a close eye on you…even when you were enjoying your first glass of martini, they never moved their eyes away…Take this as one sincere suggestion, after tonight, before you decide to go anywhere, first make sure you’re not being followed.”
The man drinks the martini with the same pose, Bette’s hand froze at the bar counter when she heard what he’s said, she gives him a confusing look.
“What?”
“Act normally as if you are just looking around…” The man says in a calm and low voice. “Take a look at your five and nine o’clock, two men wearing black suits and earphones.”
Bette obeys, she frowns at what she’s seen.
Just like the man said, two guys pretend they are talking to someone else, but their sights keep shooting on Bette’s direction. Clearly, they’ve been trained, even Bette herself didn’t find out that she’s been watched. Two guys see Bette turns around, they immediately pretend they’re looking somewhere else, but keep Bette out of the corner of their eyes.
“One is a guy from the FBI…” Bette lowers her head but her sight moves aside. “The other one I don’t know who he is.”
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Hi CJ,
I am so happy to see this update!!!
We are getting closer to their meeting after two years.
I didn’t surprise me that Bette hooked up with Candace, everyone needs somebody in their life and Bette couldn’t know if or when she would see Tina again.
I feel sorry for Candace though, she is in love and Bette is that clearly not, but to make a scene like that, not done, but i understand her frustation with Bette’s lack of emotion or feeling.
It is time to bring Aaron down and punish him for his crimes, Tina certainly has ideas to expose him as a criminal and asshole.
The ranking just freaked me out a little, thank god you didn’t wrote a scene like i thought.
Waiting patiently for the next chapter and can’t wait to see the meeting between Bette & Tina. Tina sure has a lot to explain to Bette.
One request, however i think you will explain it in the future, will you tell Tina’s past two years?
I love this story!!!
Thank you so much for this story!!!!
Xxx, your loyal fan ????
Hi CJ,
Delighted to see another post but I still find it difficult to read as I hate Candace so much!
Please post again soon as this Story has me gripped!
Hoping you will have Tina explain what has happened to her in the last two years.
Also hoping for a happy Tibette ending, please!
Thanks for posting PPS
SG
Hi CJ:
Always an excellent chapter.
Initially, I was disappointed that Bette and Candace ended together, but as I was reading, Bette has no feelings for her (well, she clearly is not in love with the police captain) because of Bette’s heart already belongs to Tina and is only her who Bette is looking for and everywhere.
In this story, I feel pity for Candace (this Candace, no the one in TLW show) because she is in love with Bette and her feelings are unrequited and because she helped Bette with her PTSD after the fall of the Cooper empire; but c’est la vie, and the new police captain is reluctant to be aware of the situation.
I’m very curious as to the other readers about what happened these last 2 years with Tina. I don’t wanna know about Bette’s life in the last 2 years because that will give me allergies, knowing she was with Candace (yikes)
Now I’m thrilled about what is going to happen next because we know Bette is in Tina’s house and the two lovers will reunite.
So, please CJ, post soon the next chapter.
Thanks again for the wonderful story.
P
Hi!
Like i said earlier – very good job with pictures, i like this graphic part in your story.
I don’t want comment anythig about Bette and Candance, so i just skip it and waiting next part for resolution.
Great chapter CJ!
I can definitely deal with Bette being with Candace if it means that a reunion for Bette and Tina is right around the corner! I’d also love to know what has happened to Tina in the last couple of years, but I’m sure you will let us know in the upcoming chapter.
Thanks and PPS!