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The Most Distant Course
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Bette doesn’t care about what Alice has said actually, she is way busy in doing her job well and finding the evidence of the Cooper case. Just like what Carmen said, someone in the high place must be behind this.
Over two years, only insignificant people from the Cooper organization got sued by the court. Right, most of the six heads were dead, but how could it be possible that none of the other people who were also in charge of the huge criminal empire have been taken down by the police or the FBI? Surely, they must have been hiding secretly, while the FBI couldn’t find any of them even with their technology?
Dancing with the rhythm, holding her girlfriend, surrounded by a bunch of high-class people, Bette feels uneasy and uncomfortable, even with Candace…This is not the life she wants to live like.
While her body is trying to sway with the new-become captain, her eyes are focusing on every corner of the room, tempting to find the particular blonde.
“Baby…?”
While her eyes are glancing somewhere, Candace calls her.
“Yes?”
“What are you thinking?”
“Hmm…? Oh, nothing.”
“Don’t lie to me, I know that look.”
“Please…Candace, I’m not in the mood.”
Candace stops the body movement, forcing Bette to look at her. Now they are standing in the middle spot of the dancing floor, some couples almost bump into them when they suddenly stop.
“Why do you have to do this?”
“Do what?”
“Shut me out, isolate yourself and neglect my feeling.”
“Can…don’t be ridiculous, you know I care about how you feel…”
“Do you?” Candace looks at her straight in the eyes.
“Sure I do.” Bette shrugs.
“Then what are you thinking? Bette? Cause I really want to know, I care about you, I love you, but you never tell me how you feel, what you are thinking, what you are meditating…and damn, I can feel I almost lost you tonight!”
“Can…”
“One year, Bette, we’ve been together for one year, you never say that three words to me, you never admit you really care about me, even if I dragged you out from the trauma after your first mission.” Tears start to pour down Candace’s face. “I only want you to really look at me in the eyes and say you do love me, at least once, or maybe tonight, which was the most important night to me. Instead, you go chase for a woman that almost poured the entire drinks on you, and even while we’re dancing, you were still searching for her, weren’t you?”
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Hi CJ,
I am so happy to see this update!!!
We are getting closer to their meeting after two years.
I didn’t surprise me that Bette hooked up with Candace, everyone needs somebody in their life and Bette couldn’t know if or when she would see Tina again.
I feel sorry for Candace though, she is in love and Bette is that clearly not, but to make a scene like that, not done, but i understand her frustation with Bette’s lack of emotion or feeling.
It is time to bring Aaron down and punish him for his crimes, Tina certainly has ideas to expose him as a criminal and asshole.
The ranking just freaked me out a little, thank god you didn’t wrote a scene like i thought.
Waiting patiently for the next chapter and can’t wait to see the meeting between Bette & Tina. Tina sure has a lot to explain to Bette.
One request, however i think you will explain it in the future, will you tell Tina’s past two years?
I love this story!!!
Thank you so much for this story!!!!
Xxx, your loyal fan ????
Hi CJ,
Delighted to see another post but I still find it difficult to read as I hate Candace so much!
Please post again soon as this Story has me gripped!
Hoping you will have Tina explain what has happened to her in the last two years.
Also hoping for a happy Tibette ending, please!
Thanks for posting PPS
SG
Hi CJ:
Always an excellent chapter.
Initially, I was disappointed that Bette and Candace ended together, but as I was reading, Bette has no feelings for her (well, she clearly is not in love with the police captain) because of Bette’s heart already belongs to Tina and is only her who Bette is looking for and everywhere.
In this story, I feel pity for Candace (this Candace, no the one in TLW show) because she is in love with Bette and her feelings are unrequited and because she helped Bette with her PTSD after the fall of the Cooper empire; but c’est la vie, and the new police captain is reluctant to be aware of the situation.
I’m very curious as to the other readers about what happened these last 2 years with Tina. I don’t wanna know about Bette’s life in the last 2 years because that will give me allergies, knowing she was with Candace (yikes)
Now I’m thrilled about what is going to happen next because we know Bette is in Tina’s house and the two lovers will reunite.
So, please CJ, post soon the next chapter.
Thanks again for the wonderful story.
P
Hi!
Like i said earlier – very good job with pictures, i like this graphic part in your story.
I don’t want comment anythig about Bette and Candance, so i just skip it and waiting next part for resolution.
Great chapter CJ!
I can definitely deal with Bette being with Candace if it means that a reunion for Bette and Tina is right around the corner! I’d also love to know what has happened to Tina in the last couple of years, but I’m sure you will let us know in the upcoming chapter.
Thanks and PPS!