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The Most Distant Course
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Yeah right. Bette rolls her eyes in her heart.
“Bette…Bette!”
Bette turns around. “Oh, hey, Candace.”
“What the hell? Why did you just run away like this?”
“I’m sorry, babe, something came up.”
“Please don’t leave me like that again, it’s annoying to see your own girlfriend stand up on you like that.” Candace says sadly.
Like what you’ve done to me the whole night?
The detective makes a small smile. “I’m sorry, never again.”
Bette turns her body back to Aaron.
“It’s been almost two years, Aaron, I believe you must have found something more significant in Cooper’s case. If so, please don’t hesitate to tell me, I would really want to know what else I have missed in that mansion.”
In a very short period of time, the sharp-eyed detective swears she sees the commander of the FBI swallows hard. Either he is really thirsty…or he is nervous about hiding something.
Aaron clears his throat. “Yes…ahem…of course.”
Bette replies a big smile to the nervous man, then she pats on Aaron’s shoulder.
“Thank you…now excuse us.”
Bette walks away with her girlfriend in her arm, no need to see it herself, Bette Porter knows that Aaron must be cursing bad words on her.
“Hey, Bette?”
“Yes, Can?”
“I thought he is kinda your boss, how can you talk to him that way?”
“Yes, he was…” Bette pats Candace’s arm and gives her reassurance while leading her back to the dancing floor.
Before he stole my evidence and hide it away from me.
Candace looks curiously at her girlfriend, with full eyes of suspicion, wondering why Bette has to take a circuitous route every time when she’s talking, there is barely twice she could really understand what she’s meaning or implying. They’ve been together for more than one year, deep down, she knows she doesn’t really know Bette Porter at all, and Bette seldom tells. The reasons they can be together for so long are the great sex and her admiration for the detective…in both intelligence and beauty, beauty mostly.
Thank god the captain of the police force didn’t know Bette before; the young detective got this weird habit after she came out of the mansion. Her friends…Alice, and her sister Kit can hardly get used to the way she’s talking. Mysterious and odd, like she’s hiding and planning something; using Alice’s word, Bette Porter is now a detective on the outside, but having a criminal mind on the inside.
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Hi CJ,
I am so happy to see this update!!!
We are getting closer to their meeting after two years.
I didn’t surprise me that Bette hooked up with Candace, everyone needs somebody in their life and Bette couldn’t know if or when she would see Tina again.
I feel sorry for Candace though, she is in love and Bette is that clearly not, but to make a scene like that, not done, but i understand her frustation with Bette’s lack of emotion or feeling.
It is time to bring Aaron down and punish him for his crimes, Tina certainly has ideas to expose him as a criminal and asshole.
The ranking just freaked me out a little, thank god you didn’t wrote a scene like i thought.
Waiting patiently for the next chapter and can’t wait to see the meeting between Bette & Tina. Tina sure has a lot to explain to Bette.
One request, however i think you will explain it in the future, will you tell Tina’s past two years?
I love this story!!!
Thank you so much for this story!!!!
Xxx, your loyal fan ????
Hi CJ,
Delighted to see another post but I still find it difficult to read as I hate Candace so much!
Please post again soon as this Story has me gripped!
Hoping you will have Tina explain what has happened to her in the last two years.
Also hoping for a happy Tibette ending, please!
Thanks for posting PPS
SG
Hi CJ:
Always an excellent chapter.
Initially, I was disappointed that Bette and Candace ended together, but as I was reading, Bette has no feelings for her (well, she clearly is not in love with the police captain) because of Bette’s heart already belongs to Tina and is only her who Bette is looking for and everywhere.
In this story, I feel pity for Candace (this Candace, no the one in TLW show) because she is in love with Bette and her feelings are unrequited and because she helped Bette with her PTSD after the fall of the Cooper empire; but c’est la vie, and the new police captain is reluctant to be aware of the situation.
I’m very curious as to the other readers about what happened these last 2 years with Tina. I don’t wanna know about Bette’s life in the last 2 years because that will give me allergies, knowing she was with Candace (yikes)
Now I’m thrilled about what is going to happen next because we know Bette is in Tina’s house and the two lovers will reunite.
So, please CJ, post soon the next chapter.
Thanks again for the wonderful story.
P
Hi!
Like i said earlier – very good job with pictures, i like this graphic part in your story.
I don’t want comment anythig about Bette and Candance, so i just skip it and waiting next part for resolution.
Great chapter CJ!
I can definitely deal with Bette being with Candace if it means that a reunion for Bette and Tina is right around the corner! I’d also love to know what has happened to Tina in the last couple of years, but I’m sure you will let us know in the upcoming chapter.
Thanks and PPS!