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The Most Distant Course
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“Wait…” Bette wants to say something, yet she is being cut down by the manager.
“Don’t worry, Ms. Porter, I will punish her for your troubles.”
“No, I…”
“Come on, baby, let’s get back to the party.”
Candace grabs Bette’s arm, tempting to lead her back to the dancing floor, but the detective only yanks her girlfriends’ arm away, her sight never leaves the brown hair waitress, as if she’s afraid she’ll lose her.
“Just…give me a second, I have to make sure something…”
“Bette! Bette! What the hell…”
Bette doesn’t have time to care what her girlfriend or others will think, the only thing she wants to do is find Tina, ask her why did she disappear without any word for two years…Two fucking years, no message, no mail, no god damn clue, and now suddenly, she appeared right in front of her.
“Tina…Tina…Wait!”
The hall somehow becomes so crowded, Bette has to push and squeeze to pass through the people who come to congratulate her girlfriend Candace…And the blonde, the waitress. Tina, is like a snake, slides from one corner into other corners, like no intent to stop. Bette can be damn sure that the woman has heard her calling.
“Fuck…Tina!”
“Bette!”
A man’s voice suddenly appears behind her, Bette has no chance but to turn around, seeing Aaron looks at her in a face of concern, the detective has to use all her strength to refrain from keeping searching for Tina.
“Bette, are you alright?”
The brunette sighs. “Yes, I’m fine.”
“Who’s that woman you are chasing?”
Bette rubs her temple, she feels unease at Aarons’ question, as if he was trying to dig something out from her.
“Nobody, literally nobody, just thought she looked quite similar to an acquaintance.”
“Really? I heard you called her Tina, was she one of your old friends?”
“To be honest…” Bette looks at the direction where Tina disappeared. “I’m not sure how to define her anymore…”
Aaron raises his eyebrow. “That complicates, huh?”
“Sort of, yeah…” Suddenly something comes up to Bette’s mind. “Where were you earlier Aaron?”
Aaron is taken aback. “Pardon me?”
“I barely saw you at the party, you seemed have arrived very late, where were you?”
“Oh…uh…I was handling some issue back in the FBI, no big deal.”
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Hi CJ,
I am so happy to see this update!!!
We are getting closer to their meeting after two years.
I didn’t surprise me that Bette hooked up with Candace, everyone needs somebody in their life and Bette couldn’t know if or when she would see Tina again.
I feel sorry for Candace though, she is in love and Bette is that clearly not, but to make a scene like that, not done, but i understand her frustation with Bette’s lack of emotion or feeling.
It is time to bring Aaron down and punish him for his crimes, Tina certainly has ideas to expose him as a criminal and asshole.
The ranking just freaked me out a little, thank god you didn’t wrote a scene like i thought.
Waiting patiently for the next chapter and can’t wait to see the meeting between Bette & Tina. Tina sure has a lot to explain to Bette.
One request, however i think you will explain it in the future, will you tell Tina’s past two years?
I love this story!!!
Thank you so much for this story!!!!
Xxx, your loyal fan ????
Hi CJ,
Delighted to see another post but I still find it difficult to read as I hate Candace so much!
Please post again soon as this Story has me gripped!
Hoping you will have Tina explain what has happened to her in the last two years.
Also hoping for a happy Tibette ending, please!
Thanks for posting PPS
SG
Hi CJ:
Always an excellent chapter.
Initially, I was disappointed that Bette and Candace ended together, but as I was reading, Bette has no feelings for her (well, she clearly is not in love with the police captain) because of Bette’s heart already belongs to Tina and is only her who Bette is looking for and everywhere.
In this story, I feel pity for Candace (this Candace, no the one in TLW show) because she is in love with Bette and her feelings are unrequited and because she helped Bette with her PTSD after the fall of the Cooper empire; but c’est la vie, and the new police captain is reluctant to be aware of the situation.
I’m very curious as to the other readers about what happened these last 2 years with Tina. I don’t wanna know about Bette’s life in the last 2 years because that will give me allergies, knowing she was with Candace (yikes)
Now I’m thrilled about what is going to happen next because we know Bette is in Tina’s house and the two lovers will reunite.
So, please CJ, post soon the next chapter.
Thanks again for the wonderful story.
P
Hi!
Like i said earlier – very good job with pictures, i like this graphic part in your story.
I don’t want comment anythig about Bette and Candance, so i just skip it and waiting next part for resolution.
Great chapter CJ!
I can definitely deal with Bette being with Candace if it means that a reunion for Bette and Tina is right around the corner! I’d also love to know what has happened to Tina in the last couple of years, but I’m sure you will let us know in the upcoming chapter.
Thanks and PPS!