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The Most Distant Course 2
If Tina Kennard was any girl in this high school, she probably will faint right away or scares to death. But Tina is not the usual girl, she won’t be easily scared by others, especially the Bette Porter.
Unlike others, the only thing inside her brilliant brain right now is that she’s so embarrassed that her little secret has been revealed by the girl she dreamed about.
True, she’s been checking on Bette since the first day she stepped in, the beautiful face, mocha skin, and curly hair immediately caught her attention. She so wants to speak to her personally but due to the status and several clear reasons, she can’t.
Ever since then, Tina has been dreaming about this princess alike brunette, unlike her, Bette Porter has both brain and appearance, the only girl in Wallace High who has the equal intelligence that can be compared to her, the most beautiful girl she has ever seen.
Tina never thinks about one day her goddess will lay an eye on her, not to mention talks to her in person.
But today, the great, famous Bette Porter just came to her and spoke to her, an ugly girl like her, it’s like the best dream Tina has ever had. Maybe she should buy a lottery today?
This is the best opportunity ever, she wants to tell her about her feelings, how she admires her, her beauty, her intelligent…until she sees the three other members of “The Golden Circle” come near.
Tina finally wakes up from her daydream, she cannot show her true feeling, it will be a nightmare if she let any member of four of them knows her secret, one of the member knows which also means the whole school knows. This is not what Tina wants, she prayed to no one that she will graduate in peace, this little secret of being Bette’s admirer is no help at all.
Switching to her cold mode, Tina rises her head. “With what do you think I’m checking on you?”
Bette is stunned, never thought of that happened, she quickly scoffs. “Or else?”
“Checking means observing,” Tina says calmly. “That, that and that girl over there, I believe they are checking on you, but certainly not me, I’m checking on my schedule.”
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Silent says
A-mazingggg!
Crystal J.H says
Thanks!
Bibi28 says
Take all the time you need, this story is amazing.
Tina is a very brave woman to speak to the Golden Circle like that. Applause for her.
It does make me wonder what she endured in her life so far. She is strong.
Thanks for the update.
Crystal J.H says
Thanks for your comment, Tina’s background will be revealed sooner or later, now she needs to focus on fighting those four. Glad that you like it!
Zhenya says
Thanks for this part!
Tina very brave and Bette seems don’t have guts and own opinion for now, but maybe in the future she can change.
Ok, waiting for the next and of course post when you can, we not rushing you
Zhenya says
P.S. I forgot to tell you about something – when you add new chapter to the story you can choose option – “write a book”, not just “add single story”.
Crystal J.H says
Lol, I was wondering how to use the slide bar to save the story, thank you anyways and thank you for your comments!
Silentreader says
Wow!!! Another update this soon???
You really determined to spoil us..^_^
Thanks Crystal :)
Crystal J.H says
I decide (and hope) to post one of it every Saturday, hope you like it!
Silentreader says
Definitely i will like it.. :-)
proteonomics says
Hey CJ:
You just made my day. That was pretty good, I’ll rather say excellent; I like it very much, confrontation in all sense is good for my point of view.
I think Bette found her match, both smart girls, both bold; maybe Tina could rescue Bette from that ‘vicious circle’ of bullies, maybe Bette may rescue Tina from her loneliness and that shadow of sadness in her inner world.
This story is getting better each time. Thank you so much for the update. I would like longer chapters but is okay whatever you can give us. Waiting eagerly for the next chapter.
P
Crystal J.H says
I’m really glad my story can make somebody happy, it’s also made my day when I saw all the comments! Really brought me lots of confidence.
Exactly, they both have something the other doesn’t have, I like the saying “The more you know about your enemy, the more you love them.” Thank you for your comment, gives me strength to keep writing,
SassyGran says
Please keep posting, looking forward to where the Story is going.
PPS
SG
Crystal J.H says
Thank you for your comment, I’ll try my very best!
Tibettefan says
Loving it!!
Crystal J.H says
Thanks!
MissOne says
Very good story, thank you!
Always love teens Tibette. Keep it coming, please
wkm says
Thanks for posting. I am enjoying the story