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    The Most Distant Course

    Story written on October 18, 2019 by Crystal J.H.
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        California, LA. Dana’s place. Staring at the clock, time passes slowly, three minutes are like three years. Bette is so nervous that she rubs her hands, while Tina stays the same, no expression on her face. “What are we waiting for?” Alice, the more inpatient one, whispers to the athlete who’s nervously looking

     

     

    California, LA. Dana’s place.

    Staring at the clock, time passes slowly, three minutes are like three years. Bette is so nervous that she rubs her hands, while Tina stays the same, no expression on her face.

    “What are we waiting for?” Alice, the more inpatient one, whispers to the athlete who’s nervously looking back and forth between Bette and Tina.

    “I’m not sure,” Dana replies. “The right moment?”

    “Is there a right moment for these?”

    “Shh!” Lara gestures to be quite. “Stop talking, you two are interrupting Tina.”

    “Sorry, baby.” “Sorry.”

    “God, this is killing me.” Kit nervously jumps up and down on her seat.

    “Calm down, Kit, it will be alright.” Lara whispers.

    “How do you know?”

    “Tina seems to have everything under control, she’s smart and calm, it’s clear she knows what she’s doing.”

    “But…”

    “I’m not judging her, Kit, but if she really is Justine Cooper, the most famous wanted criminal, she must be smart enough to plan for this.”

    “Ma’am?” The man says. “We are all on set.”  

    Everyone, including Bette, steals a glimpse at her girlfriend, who’s voice tone is monotone, doesn’t know what she’s meditating. Though the detective seems calm, her eyes betrayed her feeling, she’s worried, nervous also, too many uncertain makes her actually afraid that their plan might work. 

    Unlike her, there’s no emotion in Tina’s eyes, the hazel pupils are gone, turn into dark and distant, her face is motionless, but only Bette knew, her brain is operating crazily.

    “T…” Bette calls for her girlfriend, trying to get some confidence from her, but Tina remains the same, saying nothing, focusing on her own thoughts. “Those police officers…what are you planning to do to them?”

    The detective is not the only one who wants her lover’s comfort, finally, after a few days of awkwardness, Tina looks up, meeting her lover’s eyes with her own. 

    “They will be fine,” Says the blonde, she adjusts her position, let the coat cover the majority of her body when she’s reaching for the cup of hot tea. “I’ve given the order, no killing, unless necessary.”

    Everyone let out a sigh of relief, including Bette, but not Tina. No killing means the task will be even more dangerous, and tricky, if it were not for Marcus’s men, Tina wouldn’t have faith in the success of the plan. And now, she’s ordered not to kill, Tina believed that Marcus and his men might think she’s lost her mind.

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    1. Hi CJ,

      First, good luck tomorrow!!!!

      You torture me with all those complex mind games!

      Faye knew all along what they planned? She is as smart as Tina it seems, but after reading your teaser, Tina was smarter. I assume nobody got hurt and the trap didn’t work out like Faye set up. But Shane is still somewhere held captive in a prison?

      I am shocked that Faye would let so many people die just to try to catch Tina (Justine) I hope Candace’s eyes are wide opened about her mothers cold, harsh, unfeeling and cold behaviour and actions to those who serve her. She is one evil bitch who deserve to be beaten down and exposed by Tina, Bette and all others who help Tibette’s fight against her and Aaron.

      So Faye was married to Marina and had two kids that Marina took care of and left with their son and they both passed away? How do we know for certain their son died due to a disease and if he is still alive, could it be that he is one of the good guys that help to bring down Faye?

      And i am so looking forward to the second teaser?! Tina who asked Bette to pop the question to marry her right here and now and Tina swallows hard, a few seconds of hesitation tells enough????!!!!

      CJ, i am glad you posted the chapter now and not tomorrow, i wouldn’t have be able to read it this weekend due to work.

      Good luck tomorrow!!!

    3. This is a good chapter….more information and more intrigue. Now, lets get Shane rescued and back with Carmen and their daughter. Lets get Tina healthy and out of the land of criminality and lets give all those bad guys like Faye Buckley and Aaron Kornbluth what they deserve. Excited to see what happens next….

    4. Hi CJ:

      Great chapter, now things look scary; Tina doesn’t know Buckley’s plans about Shane, but Peggy knows and I trust she will tell Tina.

      Bette is still in the dog’s house, she should apologize no Tina.

      I hope that the high experience of Marcus and his men (and woman, if we count Tasha) allow them to prevent a tragedy (and according to the teaser, it could happen).

      I hope Candace realizes what kind of person is her mother.

      Yes, I know some former lesbians that for unknown reasons change into homosexual’s haters, I see that this Buckley is one of those cases.

      CJ, I know you are very good at that sport (your background talks for you), I have no doubt that you’ll do fine, but anyway, good luck, my friend.

      Thanks for the wonderful chapter, and please post soon.

      P

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