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    The Most Distant Course

    Story written on October 18, 2019 by Crystal J.H.
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    The arrow is fitted to the string, any kind of regret is already too late. Three minutes, times up. Pressing the microphone, in her ear, Tina waits until the clock hand hits the 12, no more, no less. “Attack.”      California, LA, Lake Hughes, Peabody property. “I believe that Max Sweeney betrayed the FBI

    The arrow is fitted to the string, any kind of regret is already too late.

    Three minutes, times up.

    Pressing the microphone, in her ear, Tina waits until the clock hand hits the 12, no more, no less.

    “Attack.” 

     

     

    California, LA, Lake Hughes, Peabody property.

    “I believe that Max Sweeney betrayed the FBI for a reason, and understandable. He was once an undercover in the Cooper mansion for years, he was so good that even the boss trusted him and let him became his right hand, there must be a very deep connection between the organization and him, so that he’s not able to pull out, which caused him to willing to help those criminals to flee. But it was fine, his support to you guys actually helps me.”

    “He helped you?”

    Faye Buckley nods.

    “I was worried that Bette Porter and Tina Kennard didn’t have enough confidence so wouldn’t act, but Max Sweeney could help them…For example, Shane’s position in the prison, the placements of the guards, whatever the detective wanted to know, I would tell her through Max Sweeney. With him as a secret conspirator, Bette Porter would certainly think the plan was going very well. Success was already more than halfway in hand, don’t you think so?”

    “Isn’t the argument you just present rather exaggerated?” Peggy says. “San Diego Police Department jail is still a complex place, but now the executive officers are not there anymore, with Max Sweeney as an inside person, with the intelligence of Bette Porter…a break-in is possible. Are you really not worried that your own ally would bring people to break into the prison and free Shane?”

    The senator slightly nods. 

    “That’s right, what you said is a difficult problem, I understand every man I use and the people in the FBI, he really does have the capability to help them break into the prison, but madam Peabody…Do you really believe that breaking into the prison means finding Shane McCutcheon?”

    Peggy’s expression slightly changes.

     

     

    San Diego Police Department jail.

    Marcus’s men rush into the Police Department, almost without any sound. 

    Before the officers who’re on duty notice that someone has broken into, a sharp pain strikes their neck, dizziness attacks them almost immediately, their bodies fall off the chair and land on the ground. It will need to take them a few hours to wake up.

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    1. Hi CJ,

      First, good luck tomorrow!!!!

      You torture me with all those complex mind games!

      Faye knew all along what they planned? She is as smart as Tina it seems, but after reading your teaser, Tina was smarter. I assume nobody got hurt and the trap didn’t work out like Faye set up. But Shane is still somewhere held captive in a prison?

      I am shocked that Faye would let so many people die just to try to catch Tina (Justine) I hope Candace’s eyes are wide opened about her mothers cold, harsh, unfeeling and cold behaviour and actions to those who serve her. She is one evil bitch who deserve to be beaten down and exposed by Tina, Bette and all others who help Tibette’s fight against her and Aaron.

      So Faye was married to Marina and had two kids that Marina took care of and left with their son and they both passed away? How do we know for certain their son died due to a disease and if he is still alive, could it be that he is one of the good guys that help to bring down Faye?

      And i am so looking forward to the second teaser?! Tina who asked Bette to pop the question to marry her right here and now and Tina swallows hard, a few seconds of hesitation tells enough????!!!!

      CJ, i am glad you posted the chapter now and not tomorrow, i wouldn’t have be able to read it this weekend due to work.

      Good luck tomorrow!!!

    3. This is a good chapter….more information and more intrigue. Now, lets get Shane rescued and back with Carmen and their daughter. Lets get Tina healthy and out of the land of criminality and lets give all those bad guys like Faye Buckley and Aaron Kornbluth what they deserve. Excited to see what happens next….

    4. Hi CJ:

      Great chapter, now things look scary; Tina doesn’t know Buckley’s plans about Shane, but Peggy knows and I trust she will tell Tina.

      Bette is still in the dog’s house, she should apologize no Tina.

      I hope that the high experience of Marcus and his men (and woman, if we count Tasha) allow them to prevent a tragedy (and according to the teaser, it could happen).

      I hope Candace realizes what kind of person is her mother.

      Yes, I know some former lesbians that for unknown reasons change into homosexual’s haters, I see that this Buckley is one of those cases.

      CJ, I know you are very good at that sport (your background talks for you), I have no doubt that you’ll do fine, but anyway, good luck, my friend.

      Thanks for the wonderful chapter, and please post soon.

      P

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