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    The Most Distant Course

    Story written on October 18, 2019 by Crystal J.H.
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    Like a dark wind blows through, thirty attackers force a way through the prison, through the door left open by Max, they get in without spending extra time. Guns ready, with smoke bombs and needles with poison, they welcome the swarming police officers to come. Without giving the officers time to think or warning, the

    Like a dark wind blows through, thirty attackers force a way through the prison, through the door left open by Max, they get in without spending extra time. Guns ready, with smoke bombs and needles with poison, they welcome the swarming police officers to come.

    Without giving the officers time to think or warning, the rebels shoot on sight, offering no chance to run or escape, some police officers react faster, but right before they pull out the gun, their bodies are already lying on the ground.

    Standing on the top floor of the building, Max Sweeney looks through the window, at the mess down at the front door. His face shows no emotion, his hands fold behind her back, observing the entire incident. 

    The rebels reach the officer’s lounge of the Police Department with a crushing force, one more barrier, they can enter the dungeon, to the place, where they kept Shane.

    Before the gangsters use the police’s ID card to open the gate, an officer follows their every move through the inner camera, waiting for the moment when all of them rush into the jail. 

    He’s been hiding in another room since the rebels rushed in, he got a secret mission, and this mission will destroy all of the insurgents, a trap, that can catch all the rebels in one draft. 

     

    California, LA. Dana’s place.

    Bette paces back and forth in the room, frequently looking out of the window, the gang all looks at her from left to right, right to left, again and again…while Tina sits aside, being unbelievably quiet. By comparison, one is impatient, and the other is overly calm.

    “They should almost be at the door of the dungeon now, shouldn’t they?” Bette asks.

    Slightly raising her head, Tina looks up at the clock.

    “They should be.”

    “And I can only wait here like this?” Bette asks eagerly.

    Finally, the blonde’s eyes meet Bette’s, this is the first time after the couple had their fight.

    “You have your own battlefield.” Tina says gently.

    Lets out a sigh, Bette closes her eyes, and pops her body back to her seat.

    On the radio, gunshots and people’s shouting noise continue coming out.

    “Everything will be alright, right?” Bette asks.

    Tina forces a smile. “Everything will be alright.”

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    1. Hi CJ,

      First, good luck tomorrow!!!!

      You torture me with all those complex mind games!

      Faye knew all along what they planned? She is as smart as Tina it seems, but after reading your teaser, Tina was smarter. I assume nobody got hurt and the trap didn’t work out like Faye set up. But Shane is still somewhere held captive in a prison?

      I am shocked that Faye would let so many people die just to try to catch Tina (Justine) I hope Candace’s eyes are wide opened about her mothers cold, harsh, unfeeling and cold behaviour and actions to those who serve her. She is one evil bitch who deserve to be beaten down and exposed by Tina, Bette and all others who help Tibette’s fight against her and Aaron.

      So Faye was married to Marina and had two kids that Marina took care of and left with their son and they both passed away? How do we know for certain their son died due to a disease and if he is still alive, could it be that he is one of the good guys that help to bring down Faye?

      And i am so looking forward to the second teaser?! Tina who asked Bette to pop the question to marry her right here and now and Tina swallows hard, a few seconds of hesitation tells enough????!!!!

      CJ, i am glad you posted the chapter now and not tomorrow, i wouldn’t have be able to read it this weekend due to work.

      Good luck tomorrow!!!

    3. This is a good chapter….more information and more intrigue. Now, lets get Shane rescued and back with Carmen and their daughter. Lets get Tina healthy and out of the land of criminality and lets give all those bad guys like Faye Buckley and Aaron Kornbluth what they deserve. Excited to see what happens next….

    4. Hi CJ:

      Great chapter, now things look scary; Tina doesn’t know Buckley’s plans about Shane, but Peggy knows and I trust she will tell Tina.

      Bette is still in the dog’s house, she should apologize no Tina.

      I hope that the high experience of Marcus and his men (and woman, if we count Tasha) allow them to prevent a tragedy (and according to the teaser, it could happen).

      I hope Candace realizes what kind of person is her mother.

      Yes, I know some former lesbians that for unknown reasons change into homosexual’s haters, I see that this Buckley is one of those cases.

      CJ, I know you are very good at that sport (your background talks for you), I have no doubt that you’ll do fine, but anyway, good luck, my friend.

      Thanks for the wonderful chapter, and please post soon.

      P

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