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The Most Distant Course
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North Carolina, 1993.
FBI has surrounded the house, there was no way the Dean family could escape.
“Mama…I’m afraid…” Five-year-olds Tina said to her mother.
Rebecca Kennard smiled to her daughter, though she already knew what would happen very soon, carefully, she hid the young Tina in the closet, which was all she could do.
Her husband, Johnathon Dean was still trying to connect with his boss, Francesca Wolff, but all he got was through the voicemail, his boss wouldn’t take a single call.
Rebecca knew, his boss…this woman was going to kill them all in order to keep the secret…
“Don’t worry, honey, they are only here for your father, they won’t hurt any of us…”
“Okay….”
Outside the room, Aaron touched his earphone, Faye Buckley was on the other side.
“Ma’am, we’re ready.”
“Good, open fire, I’m sure they will fight back, make sure no one lived, no loose ends.”
“But…”
“Kornbluth, you heard me.”
“What about the kids?”
“No loose ends.”
Then the phone went off.
“Thank god during that time Aaron Kornbluth was not a completely heartless, he did let me live.” Tina says softly. “
“So you are saying your parents were innocent?”
“No,” Tina shakes her head. “I never said they were innocent, my father might have sold the drugs but they don’t need to die, especially when they were not the head of the criminal gang.”
“So my mother should?” Candace snorts. “You don’t have any proof.”
“In fact…” Tina takes a deep breath. “I did.”
Washington, DC. Outside FBI headquarters.
“I don’t fucking care who you are or where this place is! I want Tina Kennard out of this place! It’s being over fucking 48 hours! Does the FBI regardless of the law already?”
“Detective Porter, I’m sorry, but you have no right…”
“Damn right, I don’t! But as the relative of Tina Kennard, I command you to let her out of this place!”
“Detective…”
“Let her in.” A man’s voice shows up, the guard turns his head.
“But sir, Senator says…”
It is James, one of the senior FBI agents who is also Commander Aaron Kornbluth’s assistant, he has been ordered to take an eye on their suspension.
“I said let her in.” The man says firmly. “We are fucking FBI agent, we serve for the country, not Senator Faye Buckley.”
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Hi CJ:
Wow, what a chapter, good game played by Tina.
Thanks God,James and Bete arrived on time.
Now, we need Tina saved and healthy, and Buckley in jail forever.
Candace should be punished for attent to murder Tina, and go to make the company to her mom.
CJ, please, save Tina, don’t let her died.pleaseeee.
Thanks CJ the story is amazing.
P
Hi CJ,
Oh god, what a incredible good chapter!!!
Tina played the game so well!!! Bye bye Senator Buckley, i hope she rots in hell in jail, along with her daughter and the Commandor Aaron! They all deserve a long time life jail sentence and not death penalty. That would be to kind for them.
Tina gets finally what she wanted since her family, mother and aunt, were killed brutally by orders from that evil bitch Faye Buckley.
I feel a little sorry for Candace, never being enough to be loved or cared by the people she had in her life, but doing everything that her mother told her, shame on her, how could she do that after she fought and worked so hard to become a captain. I know, she was so in need of the love or appreciaton from her mother that she was brainwashed. Very sad.
But the ending has me nervous, you can’t let Tina die ???? After all she and Bette went through they deseve to be a happy family with Noah.
Again, a fantastic story!!!
Good Chapter….so many questions answered. I was hoping that one of the bad guys would have remorse for their previous sins and treat Tina and Bette with some kind of respect and dignity. I was in hopes that Candace would be that person. Until Candace attacks Tina, she could walk away from all these misdeeds unscathed. She may could have kept her position with the LA police department. But once she attacked Tina, her fate was sealed. She is as bad as her mother and Aaron. She needs to obtain justice as well.
Tina’s condition is really serious – sounds like punctured lungs, gun shot wound, massive loss of blood, heart failure plus her chronic fight from drug addition. Healing will not come quickly. Of course, injuries this serious will involve some introduction to new pain killers during the process of healing. Tina just needs a break and some seriously good health care. And with Bette by her side, her attitude will be good and will enhance her healing. We all hope for the best for Tina and for Bette.
Oh, Surely Max Sweeney is lying about killing Shane – right? Shane is somewhere getting the proper medical care and being nursed back to health and perhaps with a new identity? Max needs to be saved as well. Maybe he can go to Canada with a new identity also.
You have me hooked on this saga….love it….look forward to the next one?
What a great Chapter!
So many answers but I need you to post again really, really quickly on Tina’s Condition.
Please, please it is cruel to leave us hanging!
Post soon, real soon! Please!
SG