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The Most Distant Course

Two agents steal the glances to each other, then back to James, finally, afraid of the cold look from the senior agent’s face, they slowly step aside, allowing the detective to walk into the building.
“Come with me.”
California, Senator Buckley’s central quarter.
Helena looks around the room, trying to find the safe she supposed to look for.
A few days ago, Tina Kennard went to her house, asking her mother and her for help to rescue Shane.
Helena has once thought the plan was too crazy and unrealistic, knowing it was an extremely dangerous mission, there was then when she wanted to refuse, but after heard the details of the plan, the DA suddenly felt like it wasn’t impossible at all.
Her job…that Tina gave her, was to find out a book, a book which belongs to a woman named Francesca Wolff, with this, they could take down Faye Buckley with no fear…
Frankly speaking, that book carries the entire evidence of the crime Faye Buckley has done, the bank account, the date, the name, and every money, that Rebecca Kennard had noted, like a journal of a criminal.
Tina knew this book existed all these years, this was the last thing her mother told her, of course, young Tina wouldn’t understand what was it, but days after days, the more she learned and investigated, she then realized what was in the book and how important was it. It was, in fact, the key proof of all the crimes Faye Buckley has committed, the only way to take down the strong Senator.
But first of all, Tina needed to get the book.
There was no way she could get access to the Senator’s office, no need to say close to the Senator’s safe…
But what if someone in higher places authorized a raid?
A picture captures Helena’s sight, it was a beautiful painting, the blue and red pigments are used in most portion on the drawing, like the water covered with the blood, the tension is well-built, low-profile but astonishing…as if the entire ocean was soaked with blood.
The safe is right behind the painting, Helena immediately orders her men to open up.
Breaking open the safe with some tools, she takes out the documents in it one by one…
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Hi CJ:
Wow, what a chapter, good game played by Tina.
Thanks God,James and Bete arrived on time.
Now, we need Tina saved and healthy, and Buckley in jail forever.
Candace should be punished for attent to murder Tina, and go to make the company to her mom.
CJ, please, save Tina, don’t let her died.pleaseeee.
Thanks CJ the story is amazing.
P
Hi CJ,
Oh god, what a incredible good chapter!!!
Tina played the game so well!!! Bye bye Senator Buckley, i hope she rots in hell in jail, along with her daughter and the Commandor Aaron! They all deserve a long time life jail sentence and not death penalty. That would be to kind for them.
Tina gets finally what she wanted since her family, mother and aunt, were killed brutally by orders from that evil bitch Faye Buckley.
I feel a little sorry for Candace, never being enough to be loved or cared by the people she had in her life, but doing everything that her mother told her, shame on her, how could she do that after she fought and worked so hard to become a captain. I know, she was so in need of the love or appreciaton from her mother that she was brainwashed. Very sad.
But the ending has me nervous, you can’t let Tina die ???? After all she and Bette went through they deseve to be a happy family with Noah.
Again, a fantastic story!!!
Good Chapter….so many questions answered. I was hoping that one of the bad guys would have remorse for their previous sins and treat Tina and Bette with some kind of respect and dignity. I was in hopes that Candace would be that person. Until Candace attacks Tina, she could walk away from all these misdeeds unscathed. She may could have kept her position with the LA police department. But once she attacked Tina, her fate was sealed. She is as bad as her mother and Aaron. She needs to obtain justice as well.
Tina’s condition is really serious – sounds like punctured lungs, gun shot wound, massive loss of blood, heart failure plus her chronic fight from drug addition. Healing will not come quickly. Of course, injuries this serious will involve some introduction to new pain killers during the process of healing. Tina just needs a break and some seriously good health care. And with Bette by her side, her attitude will be good and will enhance her healing. We all hope for the best for Tina and for Bette.
Oh, Surely Max Sweeney is lying about killing Shane – right? Shane is somewhere getting the proper medical care and being nursed back to health and perhaps with a new identity? Max needs to be saved as well. Maybe he can go to Canada with a new identity also.
You have me hooked on this saga….love it….look forward to the next one?
What a great Chapter!
So many answers but I need you to post again really, really quickly on Tina’s Condition.
Please, please it is cruel to leave us hanging!
Post soon, real soon! Please!
SG